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Title: Chapter Nine

No NO no say it aint so. I love robert and kristina man ooh man. I cant wait until the next update. Wow.

Author's Response: Thanks for the comment! Check back next Thursday for the next update!

Reviewer: pokerdiva01 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/06/09 03:02 am

Title: Chapter Nine

i hope kristina hasn't messed this up.  robert seems like a good guy. i bet you he runs to his friend leslie and i hope that doesn't cause any problems. update soon please!!

Author's Response: Well there will definitely be a surprise in Chapter 10 but it isn't what you think. Check back for the update next Thursday.

Reviewer: vmck Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/06/09 02:11 am

Title: Chapter Nine

I have to agree with Robert...whether she realizes consciously or not...she's been unfair to him and them...was she really expecting that Robert's feelings were going to remain separate from their relationship indefinitely...the truth of the matter in my humble opinion is she really shouldn't have started a physical relationship with him if she wasn't ready to open her heart to him...she knows that they were more than just great sex...the man has been showering her with affection since she propositioned him on his birthday...and his feelings went far deeper than just wanting a warm body in his bed...I know his confession of love probably scared the bejeezus out of her...but really it shouldn't have come as such a complete...shock...and how dare she try to flip the script on him and claim "confusion" and being sexually overwhelmed by him as a weak excuse for not facing up to her own issues...and this is what her reaction or lack thereof is really all about...she's been so busy trying to sabotage her own happiness by prejudging every man after Warren and expecting them to live up to his untrustworthy standards...IMHO...she's still giving that man too much power over her future happiness...power he certainly doesn't warrant...and if she keeps it up...she might very well run the risk of pushing away her one chance to find true happiness and fulfillment in a relationship with a man who loves and respects her for her...I hope Court is at the parents to talk some sense into her sister...and Robert is still there waiting for her to come around...

I'm so glad to read that the visitation agreement between Leslie and Justin seems to be going quite well and that Justin seems sincere and finally realizes how much he gave up when he so cowardly walked away from Leslie and his daughter...and how much he was missing out on in Jessica's life...maybe there's a happy ending at least on that front...

Thanks so much for the update...I really enjoy this story so very much...please update soon...



Author's Response: I love the input Attheritz! Thanks for the comment and I'm glad you enjoyed the update!

Reviewer: attheritz Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/06/09 01:34 am

Title: Chapter Nine

When he told her he loved her she had the perfect opportunity to tell him exactly how she feels. Nice update

Author's Response: Well I think she made up for this mistake

Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/06/09 12:52 am

Title: Chapter Nine

Oh well, she just blew it.  I don't blame Robert, I would have said don't bother either.

Poor man, she needs to get over that last bad relationship.

Nice update.



Author's Response: Thanks Moni! Nice to have you chime in. I love to hear from the readers. Glad you are enjoying the story.

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/06/09 12:43 am

Title: Chapter Nine

Oh, no!!!!  Kristina needs a real kick in the pants.  I hope Robert starts dating someone else so that she sees what she is missing.  Sometimes when we try to protect our heart, we end up losing our hearts desire.  I hope Kristina wakes up in time.

Author's Response: LOL Cjaysmom! Thanks for the comment. Stay tuned for next weeks update!

Reviewer: Cjaysmom Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/06/09 11:58 pm

Title: Chapter Eight

Hot update. Justin had better do right by his child. She need to share her feelings with Robert.

Author's Response: Thanks for the comment bayoumomma!

Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/06/09 09:08 pm

Title: Chapter Eight

Hot, hot , hot

Author's Response: Nicely said Karen! Thanks for the comment!

Reviewer: karen Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/06/09 07:20 am

Title: Chapter Eight

Dam i forgot what she was going to say to robert lol. Dam that was a very hot hot hot talked if you can call that a talked lol. Justin better make sure he step up and be a dam man to his child. I hope robert put him in his palce the way he treated her. love the story girl and thanks for the updated.

Author's Response: Thanks for the comment! Glad you like the update!

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/06/09 07:57 pm

Title: Chapter Seven

I had this beautiful long review and my computer decides to go bonkers, grrrrr....

I love this story...seems Kristina is caught up in a vortex of pleasure that only Robert can invoked...it's a heady experience for her and she can't seem to get her bearings...and it's scaring the heck out of her...I think the "fun" she thought she had signed on for with him is quickly turning into much more than she bargained for...

Her convo with Courtney is very telling...I hate that she still has any kind of pangs of residual feelings whenever Warren's name is brought up...whether it's resentment, anger, or whatever...Court might just be right...maybe she truly hasn't moved on from that relationship...or at the very least...what his betrayal has wrought to her life and her confidence...making her doubt herself and her judgment...she and Robert really need to TALK...as in having an actual serious conversation about their expectations of their relationship...Kris needs some honest introspection...and until she can get past her baggage with Warren...then any relationship she decides to pursue with Robert will only be hampered...even if she can't exactly define what it is she's feeling at the moment...interesting...

Leslie is a far better woman than me...or perhaps she's simply a loving mother who's willing to put her child's needs first by realizing Jessica needs her father in her life...and BTW...what did Justin expect after basically rejecting that little her whole young life...I hope he's serious about establishing a relationship with Jessica...if not...he needs to keep-a-steppin'...

I don't think I've left a review for this story...but I have been reading and I'd like to take this opportunity to tell you how much I really enjoy your writing style and how your story flows so effortlessly...great update...looking forward to the next update...and thanks for sharing...



Author's Response: Thank you for your wonderful comments! I really appreciate it. You wouldn't believe how much authors enjoy hearing back from reader's (whether it is good or bad). The ending of this story is coming soon and I think everyone will love it! Stay tuned . . .

Reviewer: attheritz Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/06/09 04:31 am

Title: Chapter Eight

Wow!! Robert is insatiable. However, Kristina needs to have a serious conversation with him... sooner than later. What if he wants more than great sex? That hasn't gotten old yet and she's already about to bolt.

I really don't know what to think of Justin. So, he's saying that it never would have occurred to him that he had an obligation to Jessica if Leslie hadn't filed for child support or his friend's baby hadn't died??? And Leslie has been struggling on her own for how many years??? I guess better late than never.

I'm enjoying reading this story. Please update again soon.



Author's Response: I love your insight Bluegardenia. I also like that "Better Late Than Never" part! Glad you liked the update! Definitely more to come. . .

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05/06/09 03:38 am

Title: Chapter Eight

Thanks for a great update.  At least Jessicsa's baby daddy is back the jsack ass fool. Thanks

Author's Response: Thanks for the comment Divsionred!

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/06/09 03:19 am

Title: Chapter Seven

It's getting hot up in here.

Author's Response: LOL! Glad you enjoyed the update Karen!

Reviewer: Karen Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/05/09 07:42 am

Title: Chapter Seven

wow!  that was beautiful, i love kristina & robert together.  so i take it she's stopped fighting him, or is it just sex in her mind?  who will say i love you first?  (my money is definitely on robert!!!  looking forward to more. 

Author's Response: Well I don't like to give anything away let's just say there is more to come . . .

Reviewer: medicateme Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/05/09 07:04 am

Title: Chapter Seven

Dam girl i need a drink smoke and a cold shower after this chapter lol. That was some hot hot hot loving making and love the fact he didn't wanted to let her go. that is the sexist thing about him beside he long long you know lol. love the story and thanks for the updated.

Author's Response: LOL! Well I'm glad you enjoyed the update. More to come next week!

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/05/09 05:56 am

Title: Prologue

I'm loving Kristina and Robert together. His deermination finally paid off. I hope he realizes the work that needs to go into keeping the squirrly Kristina from bolting with the first sign of trouble.

Great story and update.

 



Author's Response: As always Bluegardenia I love your comments! Thanks for stopping by!

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29/05/09 05:28 am

Title: Chapter Seven

That was a hot chapter. I love her sis Courtney, she can really get under her skin. Looking forward to the next update.  Thanks!!



Author's Response: Thanks bayoumomma! I love Courtney's character. She is loosely based off a close friend of mine. Okay well it is more than loosely based but she is a riot! Happy Reading!

Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 29/05/09 04:43 am

Title: Chapter Seven

Whew! That was hot! i think I'm sweating a little...

Author's Response: Thanks Brandy! How is a story good if it doesn't make you sweat a little? Glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: Brandy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 29/05/09 04:36 am

Title: Chapter Seven

Damn, I think I am going to need a drink and a smoke because that was HAWT...WOW, fans self.  Thanks for a great and sexy read.

Author's Response: I always love your comments! Thanks for following!

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/05/09 03:57 am

Title: Chapter Seven

oh yeah, they're both goners. I love Kristina's sister. When is she coming to visit?

Author's Response: Well if all goes well Courtney just might have her own story. . .

Reviewer: g Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/05/09 02:38 am

Title: Chapter Six

ok wanted to say sorry for not leaving a review soon my computer was acting stupida agian. but i'm back girl that was some hot hot hot sex i suprise she didnt' rip  off his colthes and take it sooner lol. love the story girl thanks for the updated.

Author's Response: LOL wwefanforlife! I hate when the computer goes on the fritz! I'm glad you are back up and running. Glad you enjoyed the update as well. More hotness to come. . . guarenteed!

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/05/09 10:12 pm

Title: Prologue

excellent update!  i definitely didn't expect that!  looking forward to more!! 

Author's Response: Thanks for the comment medicateme!

Reviewer: medicateme Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/05/09 12:00 pm

Title: Chapter Six

good, she crumbled and gave in. i bet she feels alot better. lol

Author's Response: G I think we all feel better now that Kristina has given in but of course you there is still more to come. . .

Reviewer: g Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/05/09 07:42 am

Title: Chapter Six

That update was hot! I love it! More soon pretty please.

Author's Response: Thanks for the comment Brandy. I always release a new chapter on Thursdays so check back next week. You won't be disappointed!

Reviewer: Brandy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 23/05/09 01:28 am

Title: Chapter Six

Very hot update. Robert got a very unexpected birthday present.

Author's Response: Happy Birthday Robert!

Reviewer: karen timothy Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/05/09 08:07 pm

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