Wonderful. I love this story it tells a true tale of life woes.
CAn't wait to see how the relationship between Mickey and his mother develops prior to her death.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading Moni. Stay tuned! Reviewer: Moni Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 23/07/09 05:30 pm
Thank you for the update. This is a lovely story. I love Imani and Linda. I look forward to more.
Author's Response: Thanks so much, I really appreciate that. There's so much more to come!
Date: 23/07/09 07:19 am
Three cheers for Micky for having the balls to kiss Imani, something I'm sure he's been dying to do since the moment he first saw her.
Author's Response: Oh wait until he tries to forget about it...LOL! He's been feeling her and it's likely the first time in a while that he has kissed a woman too!
[Report This]Date: 23/07/09 04:57 am
To bad that Imani is being so stubborn. I guess I am in a slapping mood because I wanted to slap Imani my goodness. She is homeless, sleeping in her car and at the library and she was going to tun down a job where she would make enough money to pay the fines on her house and money to fix it up...WTH? Who in the world is this stupid woman...my goodness. Ughhhhhhhhhhhhh she makes me sick with her self righteous bullshit.
As for Micky...duh, ughhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...another person that needs to be pimped slap into next week, Dude you are still married to your cheating wife and you are kissing on another woman WTH?????????????????? Stoopid idiot.
Linda and her manipulative self she is something else. I feel bad that she is dying but at least she is trying to help Imani out.
There time together prior to her idiot son returning sounded like that they have a lot in common and that they enjoy each others company.
Thanks for a great read and to bad the only reason why the sinpleton has decided to stay is because Linda is dying.
Author's Response: Buah divisionred! LMAO. Don't they just grate your nerves! So glad you enjoyed it. Time has come to push forward. It will be a major elephant...but the house is big...AVOID! ;-)
[Report This]Date: 23/07/09 03:26 am
oh damn, they kissed! Can we get more please? :D Thanks for the update! I hope to read more soon.
Author's Response: Yep! Awkward moment too. Thanks for reading.
Date: 22/07/09 05:02 pm
Wonderful. Yes, Imani has spunk. Micky is feeling a little out of it...scolded like a boy.
Liinda, couldn't have planned it better herself. Nice
Author's Response: Hi Moni! So glad you stopped by...Yes Imani has spunk. She's very good at defending others...not so good at defending herself. Reviewer: Moni Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 15/07/09 08:31 pm
LOL. What an ingenius way of getting rid of Cheryl. How-ev-er, I'm still suspicious of Linda. What? Was her stash hiding in plain sight, tempting the over-bubbly home health aide?
Thank you, thank you for addressing Rachel, Micky and their farce of a marriage. time for NMicky to ley go snf move on. Earle gives good advice.
My favor line was, "I mean you can be a bore, but you've got some great bullet points. You're like...an iceberg. That's not a bad thing. What I mean to say is that like an iceberg, most of your mass is beneath the surface. You need to find a way to get the real you out for visual inspection..."
An iceberg.... what a great analogy. And a cliffhager at the end!!!
The next chapter should be very interesting. Imani's cool, caring, and initiative are bound to impress Micky.
Author's Response: Micky's a deep cat. But he behaves so elusively...He likes her. They just need to chill out. And talk...right now all they are doing is reacting! Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed
[Report This]Date: 15/07/09 10:16 am
It's about time Mickey started the divorce proceedings.
There is no way for him to blame Casey's behavior on his Linda. He hired her, and Casey is the one that stole the weed and smoked it up.
Author's Response: Oh snap! He so needed to get rid of her like yesteryear! LOL...sometimes we all need a little external stimulus to get us to do what we already know we need to do! Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed
[Report This]Date: 15/07/09 07:18 am
I agree with Imani he should have done a drug test or did something more. He left his other with this woman after two days and I am not talking about going to work in the same state he is in another state. He is just an idiot. He is still in a relationship with a wife that no longer wants him and he suspects that she is living with another man and accepts this...WTF. What is his problem. Thanks for a great read. I hope by Imani being there with Linda doesn't mess up her new job. Thanks
Author's Response: LOL divisionred. Oh you make me laugh! Micky needs to cut the dead weight! Glad you enjoyed reading!
[Report This]Date: 15/07/09 04:41 am
hahahaha hilarious. Well Micky guess who staying with you now. Oh man, these two are going to have it out! I can't wait til they actually get together!
Author's Response: LOL! I'm glad you found that to be a riot. I LMAO while typing it. Micky isn't going to do well with that. Only time will tell!
Date: 15/07/09 04:19 am
I like how Imani lit in to Micky. She has now found work so who will take care of Linda! Thanks for the update.
Author's Response: That was slightly touched on, but it will be a little more clear come next chapter! Thanks bayoumomma for contining to support! ;-) Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 15/07/09 12:05 am
I don't believe that Casey will be around long if Linda has her way. Thanks for a great updaye.
Author's Response: Indeed! Thanks divisionred for reading! ;-)
[Report This]Date: 11/07/09 09:03 am
Linda is in complete battle mode already. Poor Casey has no clue what she's gotten herself into.
Author's Response: Nope. Casey had the odds against her from go!
[Report This]Date: 11/07/09 06:02 am
I t won't be long before Imani will be taking care of Linda!! Enjoyed the update.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you did. It's inevitable. Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 11/07/09 03:29 am
GREAT CHAPTER! I LOVE THIS STORY AND THE CHARACTERS!!
THE THREE WOMEN ARE VERY COMPATIBLE. TOO BAD RAFI'S VISIT WAS SO SHORT. AND WHERE IS RACHEL? I NOTICED THAT RAFI DIDN'T EVEN ASK FOR HER. NOONE DOES, ACTUALLY.
EARLE SEEMED TO LET MICKY OFF THE HOOK. MICKY GENERATED ENOUGH OF HIS OWN DISCOMFORT, EARLE TURNING UP THE CHARM AND FLIRTING ANOTHER NOTCH MIGHT HAVE SENT OLD CEMENT SHORTS OVER THE EDGE.
I WAS HOPEFUL FOR A LITLE CONNECTION BETWEEN MICKY AND IMANI. IT WAS THERE BUT VERY SUBTLE. IT WILL TAKE TIME.
SO, MICKY'S GOT TALENT, HUH? HE NEEDS TO GET BACK TO PAINTING TO UNWIND. THAT MEANS CHERYL WON'T LAST A WEEK. I CAN'T DO "PERKY' FIRST THING IN THE MORNING BEFORE COFFEE. SHE'LL GET ON THEIR NERVES BY THE THIRD DAY, MARK MY WORDS. LOL.
CAN'T WAIT TO READF WHAT HAPPENS NEXT.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading bluegardenia. Perky before coffee...sure to get on your nerves! LOL. Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed
[Report This]Date: 11/07/09 02:36 am
I can't wait to see what happpens next. This is such a build up that i hope that something, anything happens soon. It's so sad that imani is homeless. Thank you for the update.
Author's Response: Things will change soon. Imani will toil and toil. She will have an issue here and there. But her pride will be her biggest foe. Thanks for reading!
Date: 10/07/09 08:14 pm
There's no nice way to day this, Micky was a real dick at the end. She hasn't done anything to him, so why is he treating like she doesn't matter. I hope Imani goes out on at least one date with Earle just to spite Micky.
Author's Response: LOL SweetPea! You guys are so hard on Micky...LMAO! He's got girl ish to work through...thanks for reading and for the wonderful review! :-)
[Report This]Date: 07/07/09 07:28 am
Thanks for a great update and it does seem to me that stick up the butt is infatuated with Imani. This should be interesting to see what he does when his friend decides to mess with him and go for Imani but he will be interested in his sister instead. Thanks
Author's Response: Oh yeah...he's feeling Imani. Thanks for reading and for reviewing! :-)
[Report This]Date: 07/07/09 02:52 am
This is such a roller coaster ride!!! What next?
Author's Response: LOL! Thanks Cjaysmom for reading and for the wonderful review! ;-)
[Report This]Date: 06/07/09 11:09 pm
Enjoyed tremendously! Linda, Rafi, and Imani... Earle and Micky don't stand a chance.
I'm curious how Earle and Micky even became and remain good friends... They are sooo different.
Also, did the "wife on paper" knock Micky over the head and drag him before some hack preacher at a 24/7 Vegas chapel to get married? I mean, his money and status seem to suit her needs well, but what did he get out of it, if anything? Where is she anyway?
Spa day is great. I'm glad Imani has made another friend in Rafi. That Linda sure is a cleaver old gal. LOL.
Dinner should be a scream!!
Hmmm... I wonder if Earle is seriously interested in Imani or just seriously interested in plucking Micky's too tight nerves all to force him into admitting his interest in her.
Thanks for the new chapter. I'm eagerly anticipating the next!!
Author's Response:
LMAO...You know the adage...opposites attract? Earle is pushy and secretly admired by Micky. They met in college and never connected. But then Earle went looking for a money manager and their friendship was born. Micky wants out of the mauseleum, and whether he wants to admit it or not, the loss of his child ushered an awakening. Rachel isn't the woman for him. She never was. She's far too much of a diva. He needs a little more depth in a woman to thaw the ice around his heart.
Imani is adored by all. She glows. She's like the missing piece that every one needs and fits right in. Micky needs her.
Glad you are enjoying this!
Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed
[Report This]Date: 06/07/09 09:11 pm
I like Rafi she seems just as naughty as her mother. Poor Michel, grow some why don't you blaming a woman for making you feel like a man because your wife have cut off your gonads...please...just grow them back. Thanks
Author's Response:
Yep Rafi is a hoot too. She's just a more refined version...high maintenance!
He's in need of an intervention of sorts! It's rounding turn...thanks for reading! :-)
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 04/07/09 03:06 am
P.S. Don't get me wrong, I actually love Micky.
He's the type of guy you observe from a far and note their great potential and wonder, what if...? Any sane woman would keep on walking, forget about it, but what does sanity have to do with admiration, attraction, or love?
Author's Response: I love Micky too. He's a brick for good reasons. He's all cerebral. But he has such a huge heart! He protects it sealed inside a crypt! And unfortunately Rachel is the crypt keeper. I like you're point! :-) Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/07/09 02:58 am
LOL. So, ole "cement shorts" has admitted his attraction to Imani. I knew Rafi would be a riot. Chicken shit Micky seems whipped by all the women in his life, to the point of physically and emotionally hiding from them. Now he won't hire Imani because he's chosen to "hide" from her too? Not by the time Rafi and Linda get through with him.
Love the story!! Thanks for the update!!
Happy 4th to you, too!!!
Author's Response:
Indeed. Without warning or plan, they all, including Earle will help this dude get the rocks out of his shorts...indeed!
I'm so glad you are loving it...I'm enjoying the writing. I hope you had a wonderful holiday! Stay tuned for more updates! :-)
Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed [Report This]Date: 04/07/09 02:24 am
oh i really like the story. i'm interested to see where this goes. Linda's great! Sometimes old ladies are beyond amazing.
Author's Response: Yes.. the meddling old lady! Thanks for reading. I'm so glad you're enjoying. :D
Date: 04/07/09 12:41 am
The house is beautiful!
Linda is to much. I like the torture techniques that she uses on Micky. He needs to loosen up, A LOT!!
Author's Response: Linda is so funny! I love that woman so much! Rafi is mini-Linda. Micky needs a lot of work--the entire village to turn this beast back into a prince. LOL! Thanks for reading! :-) Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed
[Report This]Date: 03/07/09 11:40 pm