I really like your writing and even though this is quite a somber story, it grabs you. Unfortunately, situations like Tremaine's happen, more than we'd like to admit - so seeing what will become of this young man is what will keep me reading. Thanks.
Reviewer: Kassie Signed [Report This]Date: 17/06/09 03:25 am
This is so sad. Really, really good writing, but how terrible for Tre and his sister. To find a good place, only to be seperated from the only other person who you love and trust.
Reviewer: Kay Anonymous [Report This]Date: 24/05/09 06:37 am
This story is intense and a definite read. I'm really enjoying what you have so far. Looking forward to more.
Reviewer: Darlene Anonymous [Report This]Date: 18/05/09 04:44 pm
What an emotionally charged chapter! I loved it. And your writing is really good...flowing.
I'm very interested to see what you have in store next.
Reviewer: Kay Anonymous [Report This]Date: 18/05/09 04:40 pm
Woah, that was pretty interesting. Story looks very promising.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: Kay Anonymous [Report This]Date: 18/05/09 04:38 am
Wow! Wasn't expecting that. This story sounds interesting.
Author's Response:
thanks for the love!
Reviewer: Brandy Anonymous [Report This]Date: 17/05/09 09:42 pm