Great update...I am not feeling Renee at all. Is she some ruch chick? Why is Jake lying to her about Li. What until they see the baby and his little lie will turn into a big one. I want to know what is being said in the kitchen. Thanks
Author's Response: ooh, you're good about reading renee's character lol thanks! :)
[Report This]Date: 02/06/09 04:07 am
Hi!!! So glad you're back with these characters and so SOON!!! I am really DYING for the next update! I really can't wait until Jake finds out that little Faith is his!!!!! Great job!
Author's Response: mm, i couldn't keep these characters from haunting me so i guess that's why it's not taking long to update...now anyway. lol thank you. :)
Date: 02/06/09 04:04 am
Oh you are a tease LOL!!!!! Thanks for updating that was instense and I cant wait to see what happens next
Author's Response: lol i'm really not trying to tease you guys...much. haha glad it came off as intense. thank you :)
[Report This]Date: 02/06/09 03:06 am
What's up with Jake lying to his "woman"...and Li can't seriously think hiding out in the kitchen is going to keep her secret...I hope Henry is getting her heck for it...she knows she's wrong and being unfair to both Faith and Jake...she has no right to keep them apart...can't take the little girlfriend...she's annoying and she doesn't know a thing about Miss Irene...but seems like Jake has been keeping a lot from her...the suspense is killing me...when do we get a Jake/Liandra face-to-face already...and Jake needs just one look to know that little cutie pie is his...oh, I can't wait...update soon...
Author's Response: yeah. li was in a bit of shock and had to make a quick exit to evade that little situation lol. we've all been in those moments. and there are many secrets being kept. thanks.
[Report This]Date: 02/06/09 12:11 am
That was way too short! We need more! So, he's going to act like he doesn't know Li? He's tripping....
Author's Response: i'll certainly try to make the next part longer. thanks :)
Date: 01/06/09 11:34 pm
ok miss girlfriend here, not liking her too much. wasn't even there two minutes and calling it a madhouse? Oh and the paris hilton perfume...seriously? But first and foremost why the cliffy? Why you gotta play with my emotions?
Author's Response: cliffhangers keep you guys coming back (hopefully lol) sorry to play with your emotions haha thanks
[Report This]Date: 01/06/09 09:08 pm
Well, that is one lie that is going to be found out rather quickly. Nice update.
Author's Response: yep. lol thank you.
Date: 01/06/09 09:05 pm
Aw man i just finished the first part. I wonder what's going to happen once Jake goes over there and see's that he has a daughter. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Bumps
Author's Response: thank you for reading the first part and now this. :) Reviewer: Kiah Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 01/06/09 06:57 am
Oh my Jake has a girlfriend that he cant yet commit to huh!!! Hmmm this will be interesting when he goes to see Irene and finds out he has a little girl and that girlfriend is going with him. Great update cant wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: will be very interesting lol
[Report This]Date: 01/06/09 04:31 am
Call me impatient, but when are they going to come face to face!!!!! I know, I need to wait, but I can't help it, LOL. I can't wait to see how he reacts to seeing his daughter for the first time. I know he's going to figure it out as soon as he sees her.
Author's Response: lol don't be so impatient. they'll meet again in due time :D
Date: 30/05/09 10:16 pm
Jake never knew he deposited such a beautiful gift before he bounced, his daughter is precious. Wonder how he’ll feel about ‘abandoning’ her (Li) even though she pushed him away and he let her - especially when she needed him most - and abandoning the child he never knew he had. How will he deal with being a instant father of a 4 year-old cutie-pie? Will Li tell him what happened to her months after he left? Did she find out she was pregnant while she was in the hospital?
I’m kinda ticked with Jake for letting Renee talk him out of going to see Miss Irene. She (Irene) wouldn’t care what time he showed up at her door, she’d want to see him and plus, she’d know how much he cared. Jake not letting her in is telling of their relationship.
Get up out that bed Jake! Your sixth sense is trying to tell you something. It’s your baby girl pulling on your shirttail beckoning you to her. She’s saying ‘no daddy, me and mommy waiting on you’.
I hope he listens.
Btw, dude is all grown up and looking good, sexy! He must be doing well for himself.
Thanks for continuing Jake and LiAndra’s story and for speedy updates. Yay! I’ve loved it from day one...nothing’s changed. In fact, I love it more and more with each chapter.
Author's Response:
long review! lol thank you so much.
I’m kinda ticked with Jake for letting Renee talk him out of going to see Miss Irene. She (Irene) wouldn’t care what time he showed up at her door, she’d want to see him and plus, she’d know how much he cared. Jake not letting her in is telling of their relationship.
i loved that you noted this part of their relationship. plays a big part.
and this part made me smile:
Get up out that bed Jake! Your sixth sense is trying to tell you something. It’s your baby girl pulling on your shirttail beckoning you to her. She’s saying ‘no daddy, me and mommy waiting on you’.
thanks again! :)
Reviewer: JV4ME Anonymous [Report This]Date: 30/05/09 06:52 pm
Uh oh...seems both Jake and Li each have a surprise for one another...Jake has moved on with Renee and Li has his daughter that he never knew he had...wonder what keeps pulling Jake back from fully committing to Renee, huh...this is getting good...oh please, please update soon...the anticipation is killing me...lol!!!
Author's Response: yes, lots of surprises :)
[Report This]Date: 30/05/09 06:21 pm
Too short! Great update!
Author's Response: thank you :)
Date: 30/05/09 05:58 pm
Are you kidding me is this all we get,LOL I'm so looking forward to where you are going with this story. Although I don't like the thought of Renee being in the picture, but there's a reason for everything.
Does Henry and Irene know who's the daddy?
Please update soon. I'm loving this story.
Author's Response: lol well i can't give the whole story in just one add. gotta keep the suspense going haha and yes. renee is, of course, in his life for a reason. Reviewer: Erica Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 30/05/09 05:37 pm
ok now i can`t wait for the next update, hurry please,
Reviewer: mslelee Anonymous [Report This]Date: 30/05/09 03:16 pm
thanks , great update, good to know she has family, the baby is just to cute
Author's Response: thank you :) Reviewer: mslelee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 30/05/09 03:02 pm
It appears that Jake has moved on....what will he say when he meets his daughter? What will Li say when she sees him with this woman. I can't wait to read what Ms Irene and Henry has to say. Thanks
Author's Response: yeah, guess you can say that he's half moved on.
[Report This]Date: 30/05/09 09:14 am
ah I see ms faith is gonna be a trip. ms. irene is a better woman than me, cuz i would have cut that soup kitchen loose.
Author's Response: lol faith is a little woman haha
[Report This]Date: 27/05/09 12:52 am
Hmmm Is Jake going to see Ms Irene on the news and come see her and find out he has a baby? I know you wont tell so I am just thinking out loud LOL!!!! This story is going to be as good as the first one. Cant wait for those to see each other again, I hope Jake still loves her and Liandra is going to keep it real :o)
Author's Response: I really hope this will be as successful as the first:) thank you
[Report This]Date: 27/05/09 12:37 am
Greta update...to short though. Will this bring back the baby daddy? I hope so. I am also glad that Ms. Irene is still atrong and doing good work. Can't believe some kid cu her with a knife because she didn't have any more gravy...how scandalous is that? Thanks
Author's Response: Miss Irene is a very strong woman. She's the best! lol
[Report This]Date: 26/05/09 11:48 pm
Now there's a child in the mix. I hope Li has matured.
Author's Response:
Author's Response: Li has definitely matured. I think so anyway. lol
[Report This]Date: 25/05/09 05:05 am
I read the backstory, And So They Fall from start to finish this afternoon...boy, I could really kick myself for not jumping on this ride earlier...but I'm glad I'm on and I'm on for the duration...
So many questions...
What's wrong with Miss Irene...
Where has Jake been...will whatever's wrong with Miss Irene bring him back...and to Liandra...
How will Jake react when he sees Faith...
How could Liandra have had his baby without trying to find him and telling him the truth...
Did she ever try to find Jake...
Oh, I'm ready for more, pretty please...what a great tale...with "real" characters...and uncomfortable situations...but such is life...
Update soon, please...
Author's Response: Your questions will all be answered lol Thanks so much for reading. :) Reviewer: attheritz Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 25/05/09 12:00 am
Ok what happened to Irene? I hope that she is ok for Henry to be calling hysterical. Looking forward to reading more. I just read the the first part of this story so now I have a better idea who Henry and Irene are. Also, she had Jakes baby because her daughter has eyes like his. Her daughter is 4 years old so does that mean she hasn't seen Jake in 4 years? WOW. Thanks
Author's Response: Yeah, the ASTF really sets people up for the characters.
[Report This]Date: 24/05/09 10:01 pm
Great beginning. So where is the baby daddy? What's up with the landlord? She seems young...how old? Looking forward to reading more. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 24/05/09 08:22 pm