I enjoyed this, it was a very nice "Love at first sight." Your wringing style is nice. You set a kind of fast pace story, but your tone is uplifting and pleasant; but as a British person, in America, especially a cowboy/western romance, no one refers to a mother as "mum". That is an English term, not American. Next time go with "momma" or "mom." My dad is a country boy. Please don't take offense, like I said your story is good. I've read it twice and enjoy it just the same.
Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]Date: 24/12/16 04:46 pm
Good read. Thnx.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/10/15 03:40 am
This is one of my favorite stories!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
[Report This]Date: 05/08/14 03:24 am
Lovely,this couple was made in heaven...
Thanks for the story!
[Report This]Date: 08/01/14 04:33 am
Awwww so cute!
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Thank you for the review.
Reviewer: MissTruth Signed [Report This]Date: 18/11/13 08:22 am
Loved it
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Thank you, Im glad you enjoyed the story.
Reviewer: 1nadali Signed [Report This]Date: 30/04/13 10:58 am
love it i just started reading your story u rock more some love all of them
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Thank you for the review.
Reviewer: faye Anonymous [Report This]Date: 28/04/13 02:41 am
Loved it
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Thank you so much for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the story.
Reviewer: Lindy Signed [Report This]Date: 06/11/12 07:28 pm
Their whirlwind romance was a little fast but Suzette had me laughing and Kyle with his gorgeous self was such a big Mr. Cuddles...I also fell for him in a blink of an eye,lol
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Thank you so much for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter.
Reviewer: cocoablue Signed [Report This]Date: 13/07/12 05:05 am
I loved this for a short story. It was fast paced but it was well written . The scenes just flowed just right. Thank you for writing such a wonderful story.
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Thank you so much for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter.
Reviewer: Vava Signed [Report This]Date: 24/02/12 01:40 am
Brilliant story!!! I love your style of writing, so please try and finished some of your others, or at least some update.
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Thank you so much for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter.
Reviewer: skriver Signed [Report This]Date: 08/11/11 10:27 am
That was a "Quickie." What I mean is that was a quick love story and it was cute and I did like it! Keep up the writing and eventhough I liked this "quickie" I would really love a long drawn out one some time too!
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Thank you so much for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter.
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: 15/10/11 05:57 am
Can the class say, Pussy Whipped! He is sprung already...........you know what they say.....Once you go Black.........
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Thank you so much for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter.
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: 15/10/11 04:40 am
WOW!!! THEY ARE MOVING RATHER FAST DON'T YOU THINK? WHAT IS THIS LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT? I KNOW SOMETIMES IT HAPPENS, BUT REALLY?
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Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: 15/10/11 04:25 am
Hmmm, a man that can cook and is fine too? Ok, but did you have to make him lick the spoon?.....you know I was thinking what else would he like to lick? Whew, heck I just got a little moist!
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Thank you so much for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter.
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: 15/10/11 04:20 am
Can we say quick? But who am I? I am not going to judge just yet. Let me continue reading a little more.
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Thank you so much for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter.
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: 15/10/11 04:14 am
DAYAM!!!! There is nothing more sexy than a big cowboy looking man with tight jeans, boots, hat and a broad chest. Damn, I think I just got a little moist! Nice start to the story....I am giving you a nine and lets see if we can go up from here.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, really happy you enjoyed the story.
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: 15/10/11 04:03 am
Wow. What a short but great read. I really really really enjoyed it. I can't wait to read your other stories. The love scenes were hot as well. Wow. I'm hooked to your writing.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review.Im glad you enjoyed the story. It was a blast to write.
Date: 12/06/11 09:45 pm
A fantastic love at first sight story.
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Thank you for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the story.
Reviewer: Liason4220 Signed [Report This]Date: 24/02/11 02:40 am
That was cute.
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Thank you for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the story.
Reviewer: mizgardenia Signed [Report This]Date: 11/01/11 03:47 am
I had to read this story again!!!
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lol.
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 16/10/10 03:46 am
I love this story, I just had to read it again.
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Thank you for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the story.
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 01/08/10 04:45 pm
Thank you for such a beautiful story.
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Thank you for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the story.
Reviewer: Jules Anonymous [Report This]Date: 31/07/10 03:19 pm
I enjoyed this story very much.
I only wished that it was longer.
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Thank you for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the story.
Reviewer: Janetbd Signed [Report This]Date: 15/07/10 08:20 pm