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Title: Chapter 4

Alright now it's on and popping...Great update...

I must say out of the stories you have supplied if it was depended on my life I would not be able to tell you so far which couple is my favorite...They are all hot and have a bit of somethign something about them that just draws you in and want to see their H.E.A.

But I would have to put them in the as follows...

Kyle and Suzette...cause Kyle is all Alpha and Suzette is Sas, class and a big girl to boot.

Nick and Alicia...cause they need each other and have so much in common where Nick is confident and assured in himself...Alicia is shy, sweet and a bit naive but able to bring out the best in Nick and again cause Licia is a big girl =)

Grant and Kendra are next cause Kendra already has Grant hooked and she didn't even have to do anything and with him always seeming to get what he wants is not going to stand a chance if Kendra ever decides to turn her full charms on him which is another thing indearing about her she is not even aware of her charms and she is a big girl =)

Last would be  Thorment and Harmony ; Wrath and Melody you can feel the connection with all of them just jump off the page and now that the Vampire Men have found their mates they are so humbling but still strong Alpha men ready to take charge and protect their women.

Can't wait for the next update and please continue on all your stories..

 

 



Author's Response: Im glad you like it.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/06/09 12:10 am

Title: Chapter 4

Kyle and Suzette are a perfect couple. I like how they are so into each other.



Author's Response: Im glad you think so, thank you for the review.

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/06/09 11:40 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Girl...that's it...you know you're so wrong for stopping there, lol!!!  This slow burn is killing me...

It's obvious Suzette "wants" Kyle every bit as much as he wants her...the hitch is...I believe...she's thinking a stress-relieving fling...and she can return to her high-powered existence in the big city...little does she know that Kyle is playing for keeps...I like how he was so upfront with her so she shouldn't be under any delusions that the man is serious...he's talking a lifetime commitment...Suzette's playing with fire and hoping to get burned...but only temporarily...I can already see the conflict looming ahead once the passion is appeased...and Suzette's ready to go back to life as she knew it before Kyle...

Kyle's a man on a mission...he's found what he's been looking for...Suzette, girl....be very wary before crossing this bridge...as Kyle said...there's no going back...

Great update...can't wait to read more!!!!



Author's Response:

lol Im sorry for the late updates if everything goes as planned I will write another tonight. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter.

 

Reviewer: attheritz Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/06/09 11:19 pm

Title: Chapter 4

I can see the fire that is about to start from their love making. I can't wait.

TY for the update



Author's Response: lol the heat is on. Sorry I couldnt update sooner. Thank you for the review

Reviewer: Dimples Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/06/09 08:52 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Please update. I have quickly become addicted to this story.

Author's Response: Im glad you like it. The new update is up.

Reviewer: juno Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/06/09 12:11 am

Title: Chapter 3

Please update soon.

 

 

Thank you



Author's Response:

I updated it hope you enjoy.

Reviewer: yummy954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/06/09 11:47 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Oh Yeah, I like this story a lot so far, Kyle and Suzette's chemestry is off the charts, and the story is flowing so well.

OK I give it about a hr b4 Suzette "Rides" Kyle like he was Seabusicut.



Author's Response: lol thank you for the review.

Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/06/09 05:39 pm

Title: Chapter 3

I like, more please...

Author's Response: lol ill try to update soon

Reviewer: Brandy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/06/09 05:14 am

Title: Chapter 1

Can hardly wait till she save horse.

Author's Response: lol

Reviewer: yummy954 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01/06/09 03:38 am

Title: Chapter 3

A man that can cook, that's sexy!!! He is just. . . .  AHHHHH. I have no words.

Author's Response: lol I hope you not haveing any words is a good thing =D, thank you for the review.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31/05/09 10:56 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Great update, love the chemistry between Kyle and Suzette. Both of them seem like up front and to the point type of people. I love that. Cant wait to read more.

Author's Response: Im glad you like the characters, thank you for the review.

Reviewer: pawoo Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31/05/09 10:15 pm

Title: Chapter 3

A man that can cook...draws up plans for his own home...and is sexy to boot...Oh yeah he's a keeper...watch out Suzette Mr Hot Kyle has something planned for you and it aint just a fling either b4 u even set you mind to that chica.  Great update Sade...waiting for more.

Author's Response: Im glad you like it, thank you for the review.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31/05/09 05:56 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Loved the update. A belly full of food first  then some good loving!!

Author's Response: Im glad you like it. let the loving commence.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 31/05/09 05:27 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Okay, the man is considerate...can cook...designed his beautiful home himself...sexy as all get out...and he wants her and only her...Suzette babe...I think you got a winner here...and don't think you can partake in the loving just once and walk away...methinks our cowboy is slowly, but surely lassoing you in...

Can't wait to read more...let the seduction begin!!!



Author's Response: lol You are so right, thank you for the review.

Reviewer: attheritz Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31/05/09 03:48 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Love the update!

Author's Response: Thank you, Im glad you like it.

Reviewer: shameka Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31/05/09 02:47 pm

Title: Chapter 3

I can't wait for Kyle to jump Suzetre's bones. I have a feeling he will rock her world.

 P.S., Thanks for keeping the big girl in mind when you wrote this story.



Author's Response: lol Im glad you like it and Im sure they will make enough friction to set off fire works.

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31/05/09 01:51 pm

Title: Chapter 3

His house sounds very nice and at least they are both on the same page about doing the horizontal mombo.  LOL Thanks

Author's Response:

No problem. thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31/05/09 12:01 pm

Title: Chapter 2

I like her confidence.  As for the old hag and her daughter can anyone say racist and desperate. Thanks

Author's Response: Im glad you like her character Im trying to stay true to the Monique we know and love.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31/05/09 11:57 am

Title: Chapter 3

Way to go Kyle. He got me vote because the way to a sistah heart is through stomach, well this sister any way.

TY for the update.



Author's Response: lol no problem, Im glad Kyle got your vote.

Reviewer: Dimples Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 31/05/09 11:21 am

Title: Chapter 3

WOW KYLE IS SO SEXY COOKING WITH A APRON ON IS SOO HOTT.  I LOVE THE UPDATE, KEEP IT COMING!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: lol yes he is, Im glad you like it

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31/05/09 10:49 am

Title: Chapter 2

This story has humor. I like that!

Author's Response: Im glad you like it.

Reviewer: Brandy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 31/05/09 02:57 am

Title: Chapter 2

I like this story Suzetta is off the chain.

But I think old Kyle is going to give her a run for her money.

I can't wait for the next update



Author's Response: Im glad you like it

Reviewer: Dimples Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 31/05/09 02:38 am

Title: Chapter 2

What an amazing story. I like Suzette spunk. I look foward to seeing Kyle trying to win her over.

As for the pic..... what an odd paring. I wonder what made you pick Monique and Toby Keith as your inspiration?



Author's Response: Im a big Monique fan and I love cowboys, finding one that I thought would match Monique was hard but I love toby keith and found him to be a great match.

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31/05/09 02:15 am

Title: Chapter 2

First  of all, the "title" I love that song.

I love Monique and you are capturing her spunk and sassyness!!



Author's Response: lol So do I, Im trying to keep her personality Im glad you noticed =D

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/05/09 09:51 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Love the story so far. I disagree with the other comments though. Toby Keith is Perfect for Suzette. She needs a bigger framed guy. Tim Mcgraw and Keith Urban are smaller framed guys. Anywho, Please keep up with the updates.

Author's Response:

Very true, I will try to keep up.

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/05/09 09:26 pm

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