A good start, I love that you have chosen Monique as your leading lady she is wonderful. I look forward to your next update.
Author's Response: Im a Monique fan myself and I hope to keep you interested in my story.
Author's Response: Im a Monique fan myself and I hope to keep you interested in my story.
Author's Response: Im a Monique fan myself and I hope to keep you interested in my story. Reviewer: bookacholic247 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 30/05/09 06:50 pm
This story is funny so far, I'm liking it already, Kyle/Suzette have great chemestry.... but I have a feeling that Miss Lisa and her HO daughter are going to be an issue.
Btw who is the guy playing Kyle?
Author's Response: Toby Keith, a country star Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 30/05/09 02:59 pm
Keep it coming this is getting better everytime.
Author's Response:
I will, thanks for the review
Reviewer: paw00 Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 30/05/09 08:12 am
Oh these two are a match made in Heaven! I love that they are blunt honest with each other! I love the flirtatious banter between the two of them!!
You have to update this one soon! :)
Author's Response: lol Im glad you like it Reviewer: Redbird Signed [Report This]
Date: 30/05/09 07:02 am
Oh this one is very good and funny. I'm loving how Suzette and Kyle are shaping up to be a funny hot couple. I look forward to see what will happen net.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review.
[Report This]Date: 30/05/09 04:48 am
Great chapter. At first I thought they were moving to fast. But the faster the better I say.
Author's Response: lol Ill do my best to make it entertaining
[Report This]Date: 30/05/09 04:43 am
Another good start. I love the people that you have picked for this story.
Author's Response: Thank you
[Report This]Date: 30/05/09 04:41 am
Figure ole skank heifers...like he could ever be interested but I think they fail to realize what type of woman Suzette is... :)) And I know Lisa did not serious think that Suzette was going to stay in their motel/hotel hoiiday inn after she has peeped her like she was going to still something the nerve...Oh let me correct myself she has already stole something Kyle's heart and attention....*giggles*
Author's Response: Lol
Date: 30/05/09 03:46 am
LOL...oh I like these two! Straight up no bull! Cute. Gonna be fun.
Author's Response: lol Im glad you like the pair, they are great =D
Date: 30/05/09 02:50 am
Loved it!! Mom trying so snare a husband for her daughter. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
lol anytime, Im glad you like it
Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous [Report This]Date: 30/05/09 01:47 am
Love it, can't wait for more!
Author's Response: glad you like it
[Report This]Date: 30/05/09 01:47 am
ok the premise is good but Toby Keith, just yuck how about some Tim McGraw, Keith Urban andyone but Toby Keith, let me reiterate. YUCK!!! I am going to have to imagine T.Mc as the male lead.lol
Author's Response: Im sorry you dont like the model of Kyles character but I thought he would be a good match for Suzette and he is one of my favorite country singers. I dont thiink if you saw them out they would be that odd of a match.
Date: 30/05/09 01:45 am
OH MY GOSH I LOVE IT. THIS CHAP WAS SO HILARIOUS THOSE TWO HILLBILLY HOES HAD SOME NERVE LOVED HOW SUZETTE SHUT THEM DOWN BY TAKING KYLE UP ON HIS SUGGESTION OF STAYING WITH HIM.. I ABSOLUTLY ADORE THIS STORY, KEEP IT COMING... FOREVER A FAN!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Aw Thank you Im really glad you like it, you keep reviewing and this story will keep having updates.
[Report This]Date: 30/05/09 01:32 am
Ugh I can't stand females that can't take no for an answer. Good thing Suzette is time enough for them.
Author's Response: lol Suzette is something else thats for sure
[Report This]Date: 30/05/09 01:00 am
Suzette is going to show Kyle how big girls get down...but from what I been hearing I am sure that Kyle can definitely keep up...they are made for each other....That was so funny the way she busted out the ole biddy and her trifling daughter...LOL!!!
Author's Response:
Lisa and Rene will be working twice as hard it seems to get rid of Suzette.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 30/05/09 12:44 am
Man, that Suzette is saucy...and Kyle is a man who knows what he wants and has an appreciation for the thickness...and wow, do they work fast...so already thinking about laying it down on the man...little does she know that is exactly what our cowboy wants...in fact, he's banking on it!!!
As an aside...not all skinny girls are evil...I know I'm not...but I can appreciate and celebrate the beauty in all women...no matter their shape, size, or color...cause ya know we keep the world turning...
I really like this story...can't wait for the laying down to commence...you're doing great...until the next update...keep doing your thing....
Author's Response: Thank you Reviewer: attheritz Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 30/05/09 12:33 am
nice very funny i could not stop laughing im loving it so far plz update
Author's Response: Ill be dont your update in a few moments. glad you like it
Date: 29/05/09 11:43 pm
First of all let me say I love your choice of characters. Second you officially one of my favourites i have just book marjed your page on my desktop, laptop, and blackberry. Please update soon I need a fix.
Author's Response: lol Wow thanks! Im writing a chapter right now =D
Date: 29/05/09 10:36 pm
Interesting beginning.
Author's Response: thx
[Report This]Date: 29/05/09 10:09 pm
Nice Start ... Can't wait for more. MORE SOON !!!!
Author's Response: thank you, more to come soon!
[Report This]Date: 29/05/09 05:23 pm
Okay this one is going to fun I can tell. I love the characters choices and I look forward to the next chapter. :)
Author's Response: Im glad you like the characters I was scared they wouldnt be liked as a couple Im happy they seem to be doing well together=D
[Report This]Date: 29/05/09 05:16 pm
All of your stories have a great beginning. Looking forward to reading all of them.
Author's Response:
Thank you Im glad you like them.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous [Report This]Date: 29/05/09 03:40 pm
Great start. Keeping going please.
Author's Response: Thank you, I will
Date: 29/05/09 03:05 pm
Girl...I don't no where you keep getting these great story ideas...but as long as you keep cranking them out...I'll keep reading them...
Loving the private thoughts of both Suzette and Kyle...too cute...can I say...instant heat...I like your descriptive style...I can see the fireworks and the clash of cultures coming a mile away in this story...but sounds like Kyle has found his Nubian goddess and Suzette is not immune to the charms of a certain fine-to-the-bone rancher...
And I love the country angle...don't tell anybody...but I was country when country wasn't cool...lol...a real-live singing cowboy no less...anxiously anticipating the next update...
Author's Response: Well Im already working on more chapters and stories. Reviewer: attheritz Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 29/05/09 12:51 pm
Good start. Love Monique as the love interat. Looking forward to the next chapther.
Author's Response:
Thankies
Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Anonymous [Report This]Date: 29/05/09 11:35 am