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Title: Chapter 10

wow that right you go for you woman and bring her home where she belongs. i like how he making sure she has a smile on her face and going to make all her dreams come true. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response:

lol, thank you for the review.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/01/10 12:08 am

Title: Chapter 9

ARRRHHH what was that ! I definitely need more! I love this story, the verb tenses may need a bit of work, but its lovely. Please continue ! 

Author's Response: Im happy you enjoyed the update.

Reviewer: OrangesAtHome Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 18/01/10 06:07 pm

Title: Chapter 9

 Kyle better run after her and find a way to be togehter. they make each other happy  and they great together.  but something tells me  he going to fight to get his woman. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response: yes, he will. Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/01/10 05:32 am

Title: Chapter 8

wow i suprise he not going to tie her up so she won't leave lol but she be back  the sex to good to give that man up lol. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review, Im glad you enjoy the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/01/10 05:30 am

Title: Chapter 7

i love how he makes her smile and make her happy no matter what. that what you call a good man who wanted to put a smile on his woman face. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response: Amen. If he cant make you happy no point in being with him. thank you for the review.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/01/10 05:28 am

Title: Chapter 6

ok  like she made new friends it like they said just because your not a size 4 doent' mean you can look good and feel sexy as hell. that chick was right not to fight her she break that  girl in have lol. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response: lol, so true. thanks for the review.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/01/10 05:25 am

Title: Chapter 5

dam i wanted a cow boy lol. i like he teaching her new and exicted things  and love how he looked at those other people when they were staring at them in the dinner. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/01/10 05:21 am

Title: Chapter 4

alright as marvin gay say let get it own let go baby lol.  he a rancher  he a great cook and hold her while they look at the stars i would have married and pop any babies he ask me for lol. thanks for the updated.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review, Im glad you enjoy the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/01/10 05:15 am

Title: Chapter 3

oh stuff cowboy wanted to give her a ride over and over and over agian lol. beef stew now i'm hungry  i married him for that reason alone that one my fav dish. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response:

lol. Thank you for the review, Im glad you enjoy the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/01/10 05:12 am

Title: Chapter 2

ok love how she put those sady women in their place looking at her up and down like she don't desver to be in that man car. well the joke on them he like them think and choclate. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review, Im glad you enjoy the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/01/10 05:09 am

Title: Chapter 1

ok i like  m she funny as hell and like you have her in your story lol. i done that many times pray to guy lord i  done good when i stuck in bad place lol. i can't belive he was eye sexing her lol. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review, Im glad you enjoy this story,

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/01/10 05:06 am

Title: Chapter 9

Ooooh that was just sooo wrong!!!! Sneaking away like that was really low of Suzette. That note she wrote was sweet but not adequate enough. Kyle is gonna be upset and rightly so. Hopefully they'll cross paths soon. Loved the update.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review. Oh and yes they will cross paths again, sooner rather than later.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31/12/09 02:03 am

Title: Chapter 9

Suzette, not the dear John letter. How could you leave Kyle?

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31/12/09 01:26 am

Title: Chapter 9

Great update. Longer chapters please. Just when it starts getting good it's over.

Author's Response: Sorry for the short chappies. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: chocolate girl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31/12/09 12:35 am

Title: Chapter 9

Why didn't she just go in and talk to him? She doesn't know what Kyle would do!! Nice update!

Author's Response: Thank you for the review. Glad you enjoyed this update.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/12/09 07:04 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Ahhhh! Suzette is in tears hard.  She is going to miss her big country man as he is going to miss his diva.

I wish she did not have to go.  Can't she do her work from the country or something shoot.

I wish she had not told him she loved him on paper first nor told him goodbye on paper but in person.

I wonder who he was have a heated discussion with on the phone and if he stayed in the office that long because he did not want to say goodbye to Suzette.

Great story love Suzette and Kyle but I think you hear that a lot from me on all of your couples :D

Great job

THANK U 4 SHARING!



Author's Response: Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/12/09 05:53 pm

Title: Chapter 9

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!  That was too short!  I hope Kyle goes and brings her back where she belongs!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/12/09 04:24 pm

Title: Chapter 9

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

Why the letter this is Kyle 2nd letter you know what that can do to a man. 

Great update



Author's Response: Thank you for the review. Hopefully the next chapter makes up for this.

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/12/09 03:07 pm

Title: Chapter 9

I enjoyed reading this story. I love that you have Monique as your leading lady, she is a brilliant comedian and actress so under-rated.

Please continue with your story.



Author's Response: Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: bookacholic247 Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 30/12/09 10:30 am

Title: Chapter 9

Suzette made me so mad!!!

How could she do this to him...she's such a coward...leaving him a 'Dear John' letter...walking away without facing him like a real woman...deciding for him what's best for him...she didn't even give him a chance to plead his own case and decide what he wanted to give up to be with her...she has a very strange way of showing him how much she loves him...she just walked out on the best thing that ever happened to her life...wonder if Kyle will go after her or will her abandonment will crush him...

Can't wait to find out...but I'm so angry with Suzette right now I could scream...



Author's Response: Dont worry Kyle will give her a sound spanking, thank you for the review.

Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/12/09 07:40 am

Title: Chapter 9

Suzette punked out!!!  How can she say that she loves him and then lave without facing him?  What a wuss!!!

Author's Response: I think the next update will be more to your liking,Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 30/12/09 06:55 am

Title: Chapter 9

Oh my goodness you had me in tear with that letter.

TY for the the update



Author's Response: Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: Dimples Signed [Report This]
Date: 30/12/09 06:52 am

Title: Chapter 9

Aww so sad and very touching. I hope
Kyle goes after her!!

 

Paw



Author's Response:

Oh he will, Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/12/09 06:42 am

Title: Chapter 9

I like...so what is Kyle going to do next.  I hope go after her. 

Author's Response: Oh he will go after her and I can see a little spanking in Suzette's future. Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 30/12/09 06:11 am

Title: Chapter 8

I hope she stays with him.  She can do her thing there with him at her side.

Author's Response: Thank you for t review.

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/12/09 04:43 am

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