Oh great chapter Heart. You did a great job on showing what was Evangeline issues about getting all wrapped up in Todd's world just yet. Plus I enjoyed the 'talked' between Evangeline and John. It needed to be done and finally they have closure with everything between them also. I can't wait until I see the next few chapters.Reviewer: Megumi Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/05/09 02:33 am
Ok first wanted to say sorry didn't read chapter 4 lol but now that i have dam that was so hot fuck lol. i see todd got some skills on him the holding kissing and sweet moments. I wish van stop being so dam hard head and just be with todd and be happy. thanks for the updated.Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]
Date: 28/04/09 11:32 pm
Dam van i know she scared that it not going to work out but the man loves you and she should go for it and not be scared any more thanks for the updated.
Author's Response: hmmm...no review for part 4????? for shame...:)
Date: 27/04/09 08:16 pm
Damn Heart, that was so good and heartbreaking too. Evangeline couldn't just get lost in Todd's world right now. She needs to take control of her life first, plus Todd got some unfinish business to take care of too. But I know Todd wouldn't understand right now because he waited so long to be with her and to make love to her. And yet for Evangeline to put the brakes on them being together right then and there plus asking him to leave her has got to hurt him. Poor Todd, but she have to find herself Toddy. It's going to be okay. Great emotional scene Trip. It was so much richer than the first time you wrote it. Keep it coming Trip!!Reviewer: Megumi Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 27/04/09 05:26 pm
Todd and Evangeline were getting theirs and nobody was going to stop that sex marathon. I loved the confessions that Todd said to Evangeline while they were making love, because it shows how much that Todd is in love with Evangeline and we also saw how much in love Evangeline is in love with Todd also. But I know this hot bliss isn't going to last too much longer after the end of this chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next!!!Reviewer: Megumi Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 27/04/09 05:22 pm
YOU'VE DONE IT HEART AND SOUL...your name certainly suits the content of your work. I'm there standing in that room listening to them push back and forth against one another. I understand Todd and I certainly understand Evangeline's worries about loving him and starting a relationship. Excellent work better than anything I could have written...
Author's Response: Wow. What an awesome review. Thank you choc for all your reviews actually. Whatever constructive criticism you have is always welcome as well. Smooches.
Date: 23/04/09 06:07 pm
DAMN THIS CHAPTER WAS EXPLOSIVE WHOO!!!!!! DAMN WHY VANGE SHUT DOWN AT TODD MENTION OF HONEYMOON... LOVE THIS STORY FOREVER A FAN!!!!!!!
Author's Response: thank u boo for not giving up on me or the story. more updates and answers coming soon!
Date: 23/04/09 02:55 am
OH MY FINALLY AN LONG WAITED UPDATE ON ONE OF MY FAVORITE STORIES. I LOVE HOW TODD GOADED VANGE IN TELLING HIM HOW MUCH SHE LOVED HIM IT WAS WONDERFUL.... I ABSOLUTLY ADORE THIS STORY, THANK YOU FOR THE WONDERFUL UPDATE.. FOREVER A FAN!!!!!!!Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/04/09 05:43 am
Oh Gawd!!! How I love these chapters of Todd and Evangeline fighting and letting it all out about their fears, hurt, and love for each other. This was so raw and real!! They needed this, to have everything out in the open about all the DID moments they had when we all know that they love each other for such a long time. Why is that Todd and Evangeline is the only couple that makes arguing so sexy as hell. I'm talking about bonecrushing hot and sexy! I can't wait to see what will happen next.Reviewer: Megumi Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 16/04/09 05:07 am
Thank you. Thank you for righting the wrong that was taking Tommy from Michael and Marcie.Reviewer: YHH Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/02/09 12:08 pm
DAMN TODD PUT IT ALL OUT IN THE OPEN.. THAT WAS WOW, VANGE AND TODD EMOTIONS WERE OUT AND RAW. MAN VANGE GIRL TODD IS MEANT FOR OU AND YOU ARE MEANT FOR HIM. WHOO I LOVE THIS STORY SOO MUCH JUST GOT AROUND TO THE UPDATE BECAUSE I WAS HANGING OUT WITH MY BROTHER FOR THE PAST TWO WEEKS, BUT WOW THIS STORY IS AWESOME... FOREER AND EVER A FAN!!!!!!!!!!!!Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]
Date: 30/12/08 02:10 am
Yeah Todd lock that damn door! She'll come around eventually!...:)Reviewer: chocolate470 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 23/12/08 08:25 pm
LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! ABSOLUTELYReviewer: chocolate470 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 23/12/08 07:57 pm
WOW THIS TANGIE COMING TOGETHER WAS LONG OVER DUE. I LOVE IT. PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOOON AND MAKE IT EXTRA LONG. I JUST LOVE THIS STORY SOOOOO MUCH. DAMN TODDY JUST WALKED IN TO A STAND OFF WITH HIS LOVE VANGE... FOREVER A FAN !!!!!!!!!Reviewer: hershey_kisses Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/12/08 08:04 pm
I could laugh at their meeting because they are trying to play a cat and mouse game. These are two very stubborn individuals that can play tit for tat but in the end love conquers all...:)Reviewer: chocolate470 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/12/08 05:34 pm
Oh Goodie!! Todd and Evangeline have finally come fae to face after long time and it's going to be a bumpy ride. Excellent!!! Whoa! can't you just felt the electricity all around when Todd step in the room. I have a feeling that things are going to get very heated when this is all said and done.Reviewer: Megumi Signed [Report This]
Date: 30/11/08 10:42 pm
Oh what do we have here!!! A Blair that has finally grew the hell up and all it took was Todd to vomited at the thought of sleeping with her again. But I actually like this chapter because it actually showing people growing the hell-up and moving on in their lives. Um, I wish Joblair the best, but I want Toddy to meet his heart desire which is Ms. Evangeline Williamson. I can't wait to see the next chapter. It should be fun!!Reviewer: Megumi Signed [Report This]
Date: 30/11/08 10:34 pm
boy oh boy when tood is mad, you should wrote for the show , you truly know this characterReviewer: lovetorch Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 17/11/08 01:02 am
can we say that they're in heat lol , love itReviewer: lovetorch Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 17/11/08 12:43 am