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Title: Chapter 1

Wow!

This was so sexy! I really loved how you got a rhythm to this story as well! That must have been so hard.

Kudos to your talent, that was an awesomeone shot!! Great job!

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading d_i. This idea came from my Imaginative Writing class way way way back in undergrad.  Now the characters are different but the theme...spot on to the original.  Another one of those projects in my anthology for the final grade!

I appreciate you plucking at it!

 

Reviewer: dissociative_identity Signed [Report This]
Date: 24/08/09 06:12 am

Title: Chapter 1

Nice! Yeah, I liked... a lot.

 



Author's Response: Thanks blu...glad you loved it! ;-)

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/06/09 04:33 am

Title: Chapter 1

That was a perfect mixture of sexy, sweet, and burning hot! great short.

Author's Response:

I'm not really sure how everyone else feels, but Nicole (Christina) and Brian (Greg) are simply sexy.  They really inspire the naughty in me!  Thanks for reading and reviewing! ;-)

Reviewer: KelleyLi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/06/09 11:54 pm

Title: Chapter 1

NICE!!

Author's Response: thanks! glad you liked it! ;-)

Reviewer: sjrucker Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/06/09 02:16 am

Title: Chapter 1

Had to come in and give another pat on your back for this. Seriously, read it again to help me get out of my morning funky mood. This is one of my faves from you. I have to go back and read this series. I've already reccommended this to two of my friends. Good job girlie! Very well done!

Author's Response: Awe...Minx...feel better...get out that funk! Thanks for the love!

Reviewer: Minx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/06/09 11:12 am

Title: Chapter 1

Okay, I'm pretty blown away by the fact that this rhymes. The rhythm, the beat of the paragraphs, that impressed the hell out of me.

Very nice work SparkAp. You did a great job with this :)



Author's Response: Thanks Black, coming from you that's OBESE! 

Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/06/09 12:53 am

Title: Chapter 1

"Take, me!" She cried.  Don't listen it's bait, she's weakening his thrusts...it's too late.  The suction of her muscles tightening their grip, "damn' this pussy so good!" he'd take a spoon to bail a sunk ship.  Just to get a hit...make it sing his favorite tune, fuck, fuck...bye to his pune!

*Runs through house opening up windows! Bought to burst into flames* This damn short is hawt!! Fiyah! Fiyah! Girl you came out swanging! I LUURRRVVVEEED it! OMIGOD! LUUUURVED it! Christina Milan is such a cutie too! Thanks for the drive bye *fans myself*

 



Author's Response:

ROTLMAO...spilling a bucket of cold water, running to douse the flames, and it's not Mrs. O'Leary's cow!

I'm guessing you likee? Thanks Minx for reading. You make me laugh! You really do! ;-)

Reviewer: Minx Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/06/09 08:26 pm

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