THIS READ WAS AWESOME!!!! THANKS SO MUCH FOR POSTING IT AND WRITING WHAT THOSE ABC IDIOTS DIDN'T HAVE THE GUTS TO DO!!!!
Thanks for reading kimyso!
I know I let a lot of my readers down with the lack of reviews but it was bc I didn't and couldn't get on the internet but since my country has lowered the cost I've decided to install it. It almost seems like Evangeline left a lifetime ago and now Todd is gone, only John remains. Wonder if I'll ever write these type of stories again. REG inspired me to start writing Ah well...
Like I said before without the fans and the reviewers we authors will be nowhere so I would like to thank you once again for leaving such an awesome review!
Reviewer: kimyso Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/10/11 11:06 pm
I truly appreciate your support and you posting a review!Reviewer: carmen Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 13/11/09 05:30 pm
Author's Response: Thanks so much carmen and I'm glad you are loving the fanfic!
Date: 13/11/09 05:18 pm
Start spreading the news, they're leaving today.....Finally some peace of mind for Tangie in New york, Blair is like a variety of narcotics, I hope you kept her under double locks and keys......if you know what I mean.
Love the wedding and the ending, I'll miss em all, their journey has been great, quite a show. Glad they left Blair stranded at the bus stop. Seeyah Blair have a nice life.
Now back to you Choc, what am I suppose to do now that this story is over........you have to start another one soon to keep me occupied and busy, it'a an order.....Ok, I'm begging and about to start drooling.
Should have known you would have brought up that New York song...lol!!
Hey Ms. Dye don't you have a couple of stories that you're working on in relation to Todd and Vange...hmmm. I'm waiting on you because I think I'm going on a three months hiatus from story writing and if I do write another story it will be about something else other than my favorites...Therefore, the ball is in your court...LOL!!!
Have I told you lately that I love when you read my stories and leave those happy reviews. Sorry I took so long but when you move from one section to another...know how that goes...:)Reviewer: dyehanna1 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/10/09 05:23 pm
I loved the ending. Blair is a nutcase, good thing she is at St. Anns, that is overdue on the show but whatever. I'm not suprised by Viki's cold behavior RME but at least she isn't going to interfere, unlike Lisa. God she needs to get a life, it's unbelievable, why can't she just be happy for her daughter? Who is grown by the way, blows my mind. Even though it was short, I loved the wedding and reception. I also love that Todd, Van, and Starr relocated to New York, their own little family. Hopefully Todd and Van have a child of their own. That was a nice happy ending and I will miss the story.
Lisa can't be happy for Evangeline because Todd is taking away her first born in many ways than one...lol!!! I didn't want to harp on the wedding because I've been there and done that before especially with the vows...lol!!! bsb I thought you would get the little hint that I left in the story but if you didnt I guess no one else did...LOL!!!
Thanks for all your support and leaving your reviews!Reviewer: bsbgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/10/09 11:59 pm
Great story Chocolate, reading this make still makes me mad at TIIC at OLTL, this is the s/l they could have went with instead of T&B pt 874843.
Lisa is a piece of work, she still won't butt out of her daughters life, Vange is GROWN, she needs to let her live her life..... as for Vicki, what kinda sister wants her brother with a woman like Blair.
The wedding was nice and I'm glad that Mannings are a happy family.
It makes me mad that I need to write it because BF and his set of idiots...lol! Everyday I miss them and can't pass that damn story without seeing Todd and thinking about what could have been.
We all know Lisa but as for Vicki well she's like stuck in the pass but will try to look into the future without being dragged...lol!!!
What a lovely thing! Evangeline a Manning...huhhh! What could have been!
Thanks once again for giving me the support for my little Tangie story!!!Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/10/09 03:03 am
This was good. And I'm not even a fan. You wrote them swell. See a great writer can make you imagine better things. Why do you hate Blair??? She so lovely...:-P
I'm glad that you enjoyed the story. Oh wow you consider me a writer...LOL...I'm gushing all over...
My issues with the character of Blair goes way back and it involves those T&B fans on the old OLTL board so you know that its a looonnnng story...lol!!!
Thanks so much for the great support!Reviewer: SPAC Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/10/09 12:52 am
Not nice to treat Blair so...:(Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/10/09 12:35 am
Aww, what a great ending Chocolate!! Yup, Blair really did lose it and she needed to be in St. Ann's Hospital to get better. If she ever gets better. I'm surprise at Vicki's cold reaction to Todd's and Evangeline's relationship, but why shouldn't I. She have always been Blair's biggest cheerleader when she knows deep in her heart that Todd and Blair are lethal to each other. But at least she will respect Todd's and Evangeline's relationship. Okay, I'm falling in love with Star and Evangeline being mother and daughter. They are so cute together!!! I'm glad Jessica was there for her Uncle and Evangeline with Todd giving her control over the Sun.
I'm still tripping out Mama Lisa about sending Evangeline's old boyfriend after Evangeline in NY. She will never learn like all the others who don't get my Todd and Evangeline are meant to be. Despite their wedding was small, you could just feel the love between the two and I'm love hearing how things were in NY. Thanks for writng this Chocolate, it was a sweet and loving ending and you did captured on Todd's and Evangeline's get connection and love for each other when they were just trying to heal their broken hearts. *HUGS Chocolate*
I know...I know...long time no hear but I'm in a different section with no access so I sneak when I get the chance...LOL!!! Well I know everything wouldn't be settled except for the way they feel about each other and future they wanted to create with a new beginning. Some of the characters are a representation of OLTL and the way they treated our couple because I feel like they still don't get what they gave up in the coupling of Todd and Evangeline. I know my rant is in vain...LOL!!!
I'm grateful for always giving me that great support in my stories ***big hugss***Reviewer: Megumi Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/10/09 11:12 pm
[singing in the shower] At lastttttttttt....my love has come alonggggg.......all my lonely days are overrr... and life is lik... OK let me stop here, this chap got me singing this song for some reason, it must be the ring and proposal.
Poor ole wrinkled Blair, wants to commit a suicide homicide blah hah, as long are Tangie is happy, who cares? She dug her own grave let her get buried in it.
Nice one Choc.
Hey Dye, dye, dye!
Now i need a youtube of that one...LOL!!!
How could you turn such sadness into making me LOL! over Blair....You're not good dye! I'll admit I can feel some sympathy for this Blair but not a lot...Thanks always for the great review! I'm glad you guys enjoyed the story!Reviewer: dyehannna1 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/10/09 10:58 pm
Wow! What a chapter, that was great. I love that Todd proposed to Van, it was so heartfelt and pure, and the ring sounded so pretty. I wish I could see a picture or something lol. Blair is F*CKING CRAZY, god damn. I didn't think she would take it that far, to pull a gun on Todd, shoot at him, then put the gun on herself. Who knows what she would of done, and I'm glad Van knocked that crazy bitch out with a vase. I'm so glad Todd went over there and got Starr cause who knows what Blair would of done to her as well. I guess Blair is going to the nuthouse and Todd and Van will get custody of Starr. I'll miss the story when it's gone but I loved it. I can't wait for the finale chapter.
I wish I could have too but I didnt have the time to photoshop everything together and give you guys a great pic...work...work...work...arghhh! Obsessed Blair can take it that far when she feels like her world is falling apart...if Evangeline wasn't involved with Todd maybe a different story. It was great writing it and enjoyed giving you guys a good Tangie story...Thanks always for giving your opinion.Reviewer: bsbgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/10/09 12:13 am
Love the way he proposed to her. And for him to do it in his 'special' place. I am just so happy that they are on their way. And whomever called Todd needs a medal. Blair has finally lost it. I can not believe that she finally crossed that line. Thank goodness that Vange was there and that Blair didn't know it. I think she would have gone after Vange instead of Todd given the chance.
She was literally travelling down that path with her obsession. I think when she saw Todd was with Evangeline it made her go over the edge and thats the way I wrote it. You cannot be that obsessed with a person and not snap one time. That Blair wouldnt have gone after Evangeline without any questions.
As for the proposal well I've always believed Todd has a way with words. Thanks for posting your review!Reviewer: letitia Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/10/09 06:53 pm
That was a romantic proposal... I still love how Todd is with Vange, he can be himself, and not what someone else wants him to be.
As for Blair, all I have to say is SAD.
Maybe I wish my prince would propose to me that way....just kidding...LOL!!! I know how OLTL write her but she is too obsessed with Todd. Thanks for the great review!Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/10/09 07:11 am
OMG Chocolate, this chapter was so exciting and beautiful too. I love Todd's proposal to Evangeline. The settle was so telling and beautiful because it was the place where Todd fact his demons but also the place he won his battle with them when he meet and fell in love with Evangeline. I'm so glad they are getting marriage. Bill is so cool and it was great he provided a place for Todd to be himself and be happy with Evangeline. Now we get the other half of the chapter. *shakes her head* Blair, Blair, Blair...... she really was gone. She made Starr be in fear of her and then being so delusional that she believe Todd would come back to her if she put a gun on him. Thank goodness Evangeline was there to knock Blair out because I believe she would have killed Todd, herself or both. Poor Starr, I'm glad she safe now and Todd told her that Blair is going to get some help because she needs it!! Aww, one more chapter?!? :( I hate seeing this one ending, but it been a great ride Chocolate!! *hugs* Thanks for the update.
Yeah I had to think about that proposal to Evangeline and make it feel heartfelt. I crafted that chapter around a woman who has lost total control that while reaching out for her daughter she scares her too. I've encountered people who are guilty of that. Well I knew he had to come to an end eventually and thanks for the support.Reviewer: Megumi Signed [Report This]
Date: 30/09/09 09:51 pm
I'm wondering what will happen to them when Vangie leaves for law school. So far the lovin'is still top shelf.
That Blair is determined isn't she. LOL. Vicki can't hold back the Blair Witch...
Jokey poo...I still love my girl!
Great update. TY!
Sorry I haven't got a chance to read your stuff...work is clogging up my brain!
Back to my tale... Blair is always a determined wench although you have mad love for her. So tell me what do you see in the character Blair that we cannot see. I'm interested to know maybe you can bring me around...a little...LOL!! Thanks for the awesome review!
Reviewer: SparkApCider Signed [Report This]
Date: 25/09/09 12:43 am
Damn, the beginning with Todd and Van was so hot, whoo! I loved Todd's words to Van while they were in bed, how sweet. I like Bill, hopefully Caroline won't be in the story too much but probably not, it was funny when Van was about to wipe the floor with her lol. Great, Viki will throw a party for Todd and Van most likely and Blair's insane ass will show up but no one pays any attention to that slut anyway. I can't wait for the next update.
Nah Caroline was just for laughs to sneek in Vange's territorial side. Got to give Todd the words even though I wish someone was saying it to me...lol!! The introduction of Bill is to show the other side of Todd that even his dear sweet Vange didnt know. There are always so many sides to these two and that comes through in their relationship. Thanks for always reading and leaving your comments.Reviewer: bsbgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 25/09/09 12:11 am
I think I should get a fire extinguisher near by every time I read your update, you're always burning up my screen.
This two are just too perfect with each other, no one could have written them better. I love the territorial Vange, she couldn't hide the claws behind her pawns and Todd is just extra, extra sweet. I love me some Todd, if you can find me a good Toddkins, mail him over to me Choc.
Get in line girl because I need him first. Don't you have any in the US that you can mail down to me...LOL!!! I always say if Todd can be territorial why not Vange...on occassion..lol! Just imagining these two in their encounters makes it fun to write them. I want them back so badly on my screen but oh well...we've got to write them! Thanks for the great review as always! I haven't even had a chance to read anyone's story what a bummer as Todd said...lol!!!Reviewer: dyehanna1 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24/09/09 08:48 pm
Hey Chocolate, thanks for the update, I know how life can get in the way.... Vange and Todd seem to get Hottet with each chapter, even thier conversations are HOT I love how they are honest with eachother... I was LOL when Vange was about to deck that chick that asked Todd for a kiss... this is the Vange that OL should have had the guts to write.
I hope that Blair doesn't show up at Vicki's but knowing her she will and she;ll do or say something stupid.
Can't wait for more.
Its been one of those weeks.. Caroline is the woman in First meeting that I had to bring back just for laughs. Whoever wrote these two in the beginning brought across to me the honesty they shared with one another without any fear and I have always enjoyed that about them. OL made a huge, HUGE mistake letting these two break apart...welll they are still paying for it...karma right! Thanks for the great review!Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24/09/09 08:31 pm
Yay and thanks Chocolate for the update. I thought you was too busy with work this week, but I'm glad you was able to post this new chapter. OMG, Todd and Evangeline.... what I can say is damn..... Those two know how to live it up. Love Evangeline going down on Toddy dear. *drools* I see Layla is gone back home and it seems Layla and Todd is happy about that. LOL One of the things I have always love about your stories was Todd and Evangeline's conversations because they are always heartfelt and meaningful. I just feel the love those two share for each other in their talks. Thanks for introducting Bill and his little hole in the wall eating place. It' cool to see Todd and Evangeline being a couple. You have me rolling with Caroline apperances. I thought Evangeline would have to go ride or die chick again with that woman. LOL and why do I have a feeling it's about to go down at the dinner Vicki has set-up on Sunday? It's going to be on like Donkey Kong. Thanks for the great update dear!!! *hugs*
I thought I didn't want to get overtly sexual with them for the time being and work more on their interactions with each other. They are in love and I want the readers to feel that completely. Of course there are little obstacles here and there but I wanted to write a story whereby these minor stuff didn't get in the way of their love. Thanks for always supporting me and being the first to put out that review because I always look forward to it...*hugs* back at you! I had to let Caroline make an appearance for old Todd's sake..LOL!!!Reviewer: Megumi Signed [Report This]
Date: 24/09/09 01:46 am
Okay, now that is an Evangeline that I do not want to cross. I can see why Todd thinks he found his match. And Lisa can not give up that easily? What is she up to now that Layla is getting out of the way of them.
Author's Response: No you really don't want to cross this Evangeline. Everyone is saying that Lisa won't give up that easily but I think she is going to lay low for a while until its time to strike don't know when..:) Thanks for your thoughts
Date: 19/09/09 02:21 am
Yesssss, My choc this chap made me go mmmmmmm. Nora should have known she was bound to lose her friend when she decided to take up the extra duty of being a snitch.
Thank you, thank you, thank you. Take that RJ, Evangeline the bad ass is here for a quick stop. Yes my Vange made him scream like a little sissy duckling.
I enjoyed every single tear that came out of that fool's eye lids. You re the best baby, update soon okay? If not, I will have my Evangeline come kick your Evangeline's butt.
It's a promise, not an empty rant. lol.
Hey Dye, Dye. Dye
Here you are threatening my Evangeline with your Evangeline....Does violence solve the issue of late updating which unfortunately will happen since we are celebrating...LMAO! See what your rant got you and I should tell all the other readers...LOL!!!
You're very welcome and I believe Evangeline enjoyed it too! Thanks for the great review!
Reviewer: dyehanna1 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 15/09/09 06:12 am
Wow...a lot happening, can't say I care. I hate RJ.
I find it interesting that their mother is really going to surrender the task of splitting up Tangie.
Wonder what storm will amass when Ms. Cramer realizes Todd wants full custody of Starr.
Good deal chocolate!
You don't feel sorry for RJ peeing in his pants...LOL!!! Any why oh why are you interesting in Lisa surrendering to splitting up Tangie...hmmmm...LOL!!!
I'm wondering about that same storm...LMAO!!!! Thanks for the great review and keeping up with Todd!!! LOL!!!Reviewer: SparkApCider Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/09/09 05:10 am