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Title: Chapter 14

Loved the update! More please!!

Author's Response:

Hey Brandy,

I don't know how far I have to go but the story still continues! Thanks for posting a review!

Reviewer: Brandy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 15/09/09 03:16 am

Title: Chapter 14

OMG. that was cool, Vange is Todd's Ride or Die Chick for sure, RJ peeing his pants was Priceless, this is the Vange that OLTL should have stuck with, and not that mess that they made her.

I'm glad that Layla stuck to her guns and didn't give into her mother... but I have a feeling that we have not seen the last of Lisa.



Author's Response:

Hey Liberty

I believe her attitude surprised him a bit...LOL!!! OLTL just sucks! In a way I'm happy their ratings are still low even though they are trying. Look at the crap they are doing to Todd...AHHH!

Ah Lisa...that's all I'm saying...LOL!! Thanks for the great review!

Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/09/09 12:19 am

Title: Chapter 14

I can't believe Lisa sent Layla there to break up Todd and Van, are you serious?  She is acting like a five year old in this story, ridiculous.  I hope after what Layla told her she stops this noncense but I'm not holding my breath.  I'm glad Van told Todd to get full custody of Starr cause that looney bitch Blair definately shouldn't be raising her, and I'm also glad she wants both Todd and Starr to live with her in New York.  Oh man, that part where Todd had RJ caught and then Van scared the piss out of him (literally lol) by shooting at him then he passed out was so funny and cool.  He deserved that after he got physical with Van in the last update, haha.  Todd and Van make a great team.

Author's Response:

Hey bsb,

In the beginning it wasnt the case but she thought that one up when she was leaving Llanview since her motherly tactics didn't work. Of course Layla accepted it, giving her a chance at her dreams of going to Cali. You can't believe the amount of times I changed the ending but I'm glad you liked it!

Todd and Evangeline always make a great team in my book. Thanks for reading and leaving your reviews!

Reviewer: bsbgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/09/09 10:51 pm

Title: Chapter 14

It's offical, not only Todd and Evangeline is crazy in love with each other, they both are badasses too. I should have know Evangeline was down for whatever in Todd's world. I love how they took care of RJ, I don't believe one minute the the fool was in love with Evangeline. He just couldn't deal with the fact she pick Todd over him. I'm glad Layla saw the thought Todd is a little unstable, He loves Evangeline and Evangeline loves him. Lisa is a fool to even make Layla do the stunt in the first place. She and Evangeline is grown women and she needs to let thim live their life. The more Lisa try to hold on to them, the faster Evangeline and Layla is going to run away from her. I love Evangeline and Nora talked. Evangeline but her foot down in the relationship and it may never be the same again, but that is what Nora gets for are sill reaction to Evangeline's and Todd's relationship. I'm glad Evangeline is pusing Todd to get Star and they both come and live with her in NYC. Evangeline is right Star need a stable home and she's not going to get that with a mother like Blair.  Oh Tangie just makes my heart swell with happiness Chocolater. I'm looking forward to the next chapter dear!!!

Author's Response:

Hey M!

So are you saying I didnt make it official before...LOL!!! Yeah RJ was a real shithead in this story. And Lisa she is as gunho as Todd sometimes just that its placed in the wrong area. Nora really messed up a good relationship now I'm not saying that they won't ever be friends again but I believe that its going to take time. In some respects Evangeline is being a little selfish but she also has seen Blair's behavior which is not good for Starr.

Always am grateful for your support M. Being the first to read and all!

Reviewer: Megumi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/09/09 07:18 pm

Title: Chapter 13

This story is just awesome! Look forward to more updates!

Author's Response:

Hey Brandy,

Thanks for reading my fic. I'm so happy that you are enjoying it and consider it to be awesome. Again thanks for posting a review!

Reviewer: Brandy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/09/09 12:17 am

Title: Chapter 13

Haaaaaaaa, My Choc, this was really, really nice. Just promise me one thing, that you will badasssify Evangeline.

Okay so I totally made that word up, Just make her have another encounter with RJ and please, let my girl kick his ass without anyone's help.

Layla just needs to get laid and she's is too small for what she's doing with Toddie, she's going to get squashed like a bug and as for Blair.......I can let you have my gangster Vange for a week so she can clean out this trash.



Author's Response:

Dye, Dye, Dye,

So you want another encounter with RJ. And you want to lend me your gangster Vange for a week! Oh Lawd! LMAO!!!! Your Vange is way too dangerous for my fic but I'm rolling over a few things in my mind just because of you. So if one the readers question why I'll use your name...LOL!!! You and M always can make me LMAO! Thanks for the awesome review!

Reviewer: dyehanna1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/09/09 09:18 pm

Title: Chapter 13

Did Layla really just do that!?! That was just plain dumb.

Author's Response:

Hey Sweet,

You'll have to excuse her. She is young and Lisa was a part of setting this up. You'll see why in the next update! Thanks for reading and the awesomer review!

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/09/09 05:41 am

Title: Chapter 13

yay, todd! that is all..lol

Author's Response:

Hey Kelley,

People love to bring out that side of Todd not realizing how much danger they are putting themselves into! Thanks for the awesome review!

Reviewer: KelleyLi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/09/09 04:36 am

Title: Chapter 13

Oh Layla...don't!

RJ/Rayford pond scum!

Good read!

Author's Response:

Hey Spark!

Thanks for the awesome review! You see RJ has pond scum? Nice description...I think he'll appreciate that choice..LOL!!!

Reviewer: SparkApCider Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/09/09 04:11 am

Title: Chapter 13

Finally got a chance to catch up with this story, andI  still  Love it... Todd and Vange are still Hot and Sexy together, thier chemestry is off the charts.

I'm so glad thst Blair is not pregnant, I hopw that whatever she has planned blows up in her face.

RJ is a total BASTARD, he really needs to come uo missing, his using Layla to get back at Vange was just pathetic.

Lisa make me Sick Vange is a GROWN WOMAN, not a CHILD, Lisa needs a MAN and Soon.... I hope thataftet that ordeal with RJ Layla doesn't do whatever crazy plan her mother wants her to, b/c  Todd is not a person to be messed with.



Author's Response:

Hey Liberty!

I'm happy that you're feeling the chemistry between Todd and Evangeline because after all this time whenever I think about them I sense it too. OLTL SUCH IDIOTS!

RJ feels like he's a badass just like Todd...Evangeline crossed him and he used what he considered at the time the best tactic to get back at her...problem was Todd's game is better than his anyday and he stirred up Todd's anger.

Thanks very much for your great review! 

Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/09/09 11:59 pm

Title: Chapter 13

That update was great.  I'm so glad Blair isn't pregnant, and that crazy slut needs help.  Pretending she is pregnant, bitch please.  I loved the confrontation between Todd, Van, RJ, and Layla.  I like that Todd beat him up and Van jumped on his back after he attacked Todd lol as well as Layla getting some hits in as well but RJ is nuts, he hurt Van hitting her against the wall, what an assh*le!  I hope Todd gets him back good.  As for Layla asking Todd those stupid questions, back off.  She better not be thinking of seducing or getting inbetween Todd and Van, and after that fight too?  Immature little bitch, ugh.

Author's Response:

Hey bsb,

Yeah Blair needs help even if she doesn't realize it as yet. Todd's involvement with Evangeline has really messed her mind up and again Starr is stuck in the middle. Todd drives some people to do some crazy things but he sure didn't expect to see Todd there. Layla attempted to make a really bad incident work out her way. you'll know what I'm talking about in the next update. As always thanks for posting a review!

Reviewer: bsbgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/09 11:55 pm

Title: Chapter 13

Bravo Chocolate!!! You go girlwith your bad self in this update. Damn, were to I begin? First off, I continue to fall in love with this version of Todd and Evangeline over and over again. They are so exicting in their love and passion for each other. If the nay-sayers just saw how much Todd and Evangeline love and mean to each other, I believe they would not be to hell bent to break them apart. Damn, Blair is loosing it bad and thank goodness the trick wasn't pregnant!! She needs to get help or it's a one way trip to the funny farm. I just sorry that Star has to put up with it. And RJ, that bastard is such a nasty bastard. I love it when Todd and Evangeline went out him when the found out about him being at Evangeline's apartment with Layla. How dare he hurt Evangeline like that. He better pray for his life because Todd is going to go all out about hurting his baby. Layla is such a young fool too. She don't know what type of man she is f*cking with when it comes to Thomas Todd Manning and his emotions. Little girl better slow her roll like Todd said. Oh!!! This is getting so good Chocolate! I can't wait to see what will happen next.

Author's Response:

Hey M,

Passion with the dark prince, I feel that they would be more incline to bust them up...LOL!!! M why you speaking like that bout Blair...LOL!!! Evangeline is sending her over the edge because in the past it was so easy to slither back into Todd's life. Losing Evangeline to Todd made him feel terrible...well at least not the baddest ass in Llanview. As far as Layla goes lets just say Lisa is still grasping at straws...lol!!! Thanks for reading and hanging in there with me M...:)

Reviewer: Megumi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/09/09 07:09 pm

Title: Chapter 12

My Choc, I just love how Todd and Vange are always lovey dobbey with each other, I bet Layla wishes she could have a piece of Mr. Charming. You write these two so well babe.

WARNING TO LAYLA!!!!! Run Layla run. Dont sit and play under a tree you cant climb[RJ].

Is it me or is Layla letting out a hint of unspoken jealousy?



Author's Response:

Hey dye!

I'm still waiting to hear from you chica! Let's say you and I were sisters and you had Todd for your man flesh. Of course I will be seriously jealous throwing darts your way...LMAO. Better watch out dye cause I would be coming!

Where are your updates! I so want to read another Tangie fic...please!!!!! But thanks for always supporting mine!

Reviewer: dyehanna1 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/09/09 06:31 am

Title: Chapter 12

I love the flow. Ok I'll give RJ a minute. But since he's always plotting where Todd is concerned, I can see Layla getting tied in the crosshairs.

Lisa is having a fit! LMAO...she and Nora are too funny.

Author's Response:

Hey Spark!

Yeah these two are bond to run into each other again and create a little upheavel!

Lisa's daughter is dating Todd what do you expect...LOL!!! Deep down I know you wouldnt be too happy if your daughter dated the town menace. Thanks for the awesome review!

Reviewer: SparkApCider Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/09/09 03:16 am

Title: Chapter 12

I'm sick of the haters, they need to f*ck off and mind their own buisness.  Todd and Van are grown people and can do what they want but whatever, their bitchiness won't stop Todd and Van from being together.  I loved Todd's talk with Van and Jessica.  I'm glad Jessica supports him being with Van just like Starr does.  I also like scenes between Todd and RJ, I also like the animosity between Todd and Layla lol Even though Layla acts irratated with Todd and might go after RJ, I hope she doesn't get any ideas about Todd (like trying to seduce him, she is obviously jealous of their relationship IMO) nice update.

Author's Response:

Hey bsb,

They will have a lot of haters especially bc of Todd's reputation. Todd has three women backing his decision which is fine by him. I think he values Vange's opinion the most. As far as Todd and Layla goes you need to stay tuned..;) Thanks for giving your views!

Reviewer: bsbgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/09/09 12:00 am

Title: Chapter 12

Chocolate, you gave us another great chapter. Boy, these haters are getting on my damn nerves, but with all their hating, Todd's and Evangeline's love will continue to grow stronger. RJ is an slimey fool. He's tricking Layla like he cares for her and concern for Evangeline.

Layla is going to get hurt before it's over. And what's Layla mood towards Todd. Damn can my boo catch a break from somebody besides Evangeline, Jessica, and Star?

I love when you write Todd's and Evangeline's thoughts about their feelings. Todd is so fearful that he's going to hurt Evangeline in the end. Yet I'm glad that Evangeline and Jessica is giving my the courage to be in Evangeline's life because he love him so and Evangeline loves him.

Nora and Lisa are a tripped and both of them need a man. I'm still sensing that RJ and the craze Blair are going to contiune to be a pain in the ass for Todd and Evangeline, but I see them working out their problems when the times comes. Great update dear!!! *HUGS*

 



Author's Response:

Hey Megumi,

Layla believes that she's second banana to Evangeline so her reaction to rich kid Todd will not be good especially after what Lisa and RJ have told her already. Our boo is usually a pain to everyone else except for those three women in his life.

Todd's feelings towards Evangeline are always going to be in two categories. Yeah he really loves her but part him still feels unworthy....shitty right but Todd!

M Nora has a man...remember Bo...LOL!!! Blair is always a pain she can't help it...lol!!! Thanks for your usual awesomeness!

Reviewer: Megumi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31/08/09 07:35 pm

Title: Chapter 11

My Choc, Gosh! you crack me the hell up with Lisa, " He's been around the block with that woman so much the sidewalks have cracked."

I admire that they stood up for each other but why do I get the feeling that Todd will do something really stupid?

As for Layla, I know she doesn't know about the history between RJ and Vange but she needs to sit her hot ass somewhere, it would be a shame for her to dip her toes in the same water her sister just used to bathe.

I'm not sure when you'll be available for a chat but I have a question that's holding me up, it's been putting a dent in my update for the past couple of weeks.

Did I say how great this chapter was? Oh how rude of me, almost forgot.



Author's Response:

You are the first dye to say Lisa's tirade cracked you up...LOL!!!

Todd doing something stupid...hmmm...

Dye you said she didnt know that they were involved. Honest she doesnt know. RJ is putting on his snake charms. Be more upset with RJ...LOL!!!

Come on dye I'm waiting for your updates. Sure I can answer that question. You can pm me...M has my email, so does Z so you can ask them...

Thanks for the great review...hugs...  

Reviewer: dyehanna1 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/08/09 12:08 am

Title: Chapter 11

RJ going formal...is it too early to shoot the fucker? Thanks for the update chocolate!

Author's Response: Yeah Spark it is way too early...LOL! Thanks for the great review. I'm happy to see that you're still reading!

Reviewer: SparkApCider Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/08/09 04:07 am

Title: Chapter 11

I think Lisa has met her match when it comes to Todd.  And Todd didn't do anything this time but be there for Vange.  What in the world is RJ up to? Does he know who Layla is right now?

Author's Response:

Hey letitia,

Todd being there gave Evangeline the courage to really stand up against her mother. RJ's plan will be revealed in time...;) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: letitia Signed [Report This]
Date: 25/08/09 03:08 am

Title: Chapter 11

Lisa is such a bitch in this story, what is her problem?  I can't believe she slapped Van and made her choose between her and Todd.  WTF?  She needs to calm the f*ck down.  I'm glad Todd stood up for Evangeline, Lisa was acting childish and again, Van is grown and can do whatever she pleases.  I loved Todd and Van in this update though, the massage part was hot and Todd giving Van a necklace was so sweet.  I still hope Blair isn't pregnant.

Author's Response:

Hey bsb,

Like I told Megumi in some ways I can defend Lisa's actions (although way over the top) She didnt expect her clean cut daughter to come to Llanview and get involved with a reformed criminal like Todd. She has used her will to control her daughters over the years - the influence has wained on Layla but she still thought Evangeline could be controlled. Todd hopes Blair isn't pregnant too..lol! Thanks for sharing your views.

Reviewer: bsbgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 25/08/09 01:51 am

Title: Chapter 11

i finally caught up. this is getting good . i hope they will make it through and what will happen once layla, rj, and evangeline find out about rj and layla.

Author's Response:

Hey kelley,

I'm glad that you are still reading and stay tuned. Thanks for the great review!

Reviewer: KelleyLi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/08/09 12:48 am

Title: Chapter 11

Bravo Chocolate!!! This chapter was unbelievable. I mean everything just click in this chapter. Todd's and Evangeline's love for each other grew, Lisa proves how gunho she is to rule over Evangeline's life, Blair is just pittful, and I don't trust RJ as far as I can throw him. Ugh, he's such a pig in this story. I don't believe one minute he's broken-hearted as he said to Layla. He's just mad that she left him for Hot Toddy!! Oh and speaking about Toddy, he's just dreamy in this story and it's breaks my heart that he believe he isn't worth fighting for. See, this is why I adore Todd, he can be so humble when his real emotions are open up. And Evangeline, goodness, I don't how she made out of her home with a control freak like Lisa. I can't believe Lisa slapped her too. I know she's Evangeline's mother, but still!!!! I can't wait to see what you have in store for us in the next chapter Chocolate. Keep if rolling dear!!!

Author's Response:

Hey M. me again...

Maybe I can defend Lisa a little - she didnt send Evangeline all the way to Llanview to be involve with a reformed criminal like Todd. She has fears that he will ruin her chances of becoming a lawyer. Now that she's in love makes it much worst...like my defense...  Well you know a dude like RJ has to throw his line and she if the girls are biting his crap. Layla is young and doesnt know (she only thinks she does)

What can I say about Toddelish - he's fillet mignon with a salad on the side. He loves her but all he knows is this awful relationship with Blah and so lets say that Evangeline's love scares him.

Hugs thanks for the awesome review!

Reviewer: Megumi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/08/09 11:40 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Finally got a chance to catch up with this story, and I loved the latest chapters.... Vange and Todd are not only have this amazing sexual chemestry, they have a connection on a emotional level as well, I love their conversations.  I am glad that Todd told Vange the truth about his past, and that didn't change her feelings toward him.

Nora needs to Mind her Business.... a true friend is suppose to be their and not judge, and certinly not call their mothers, what is Nora 5yrs old... and Lisa needs to see that Vange is GROWN and can live her own life, she needs a LIFE of her own.

RJ is not fooling anyone... he knows that Layla is Vange's sister, he is ploting something... and I hope that whatever Blair has planned Blows up in her Face.



Author's Response:

Hey Liberty wondered where you had disappeared.

I always sensed that even when they were having trivial conversations or talking about other people; the chemistry between them couldnt be denied even by BF (arrogant bastard) 

I'm not going to say anything against your observation of Nora and Lisa. Evangeline is the type of woman that holds a special place in everyone's life that she comes into contact with so sometimes they can be overprotective. 

You believe that about RJ...lol! Thanks for the great review!

Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/08/09 04:11 am

Title: Chapter 10

Nora called her mother, how childish. Vange is grown and can date whoever she wants.

Author's Response:

Hi Sweet,

Yeah Nora called up 'Big Momma'. She's afraid of two things. Todd being a bad boyfriend of course and influencing her decision to go tthe University. She has never trusted Vange's judgement when it comes to men especially bc of her past relationships. These two are certainly going to buck heads over this one bc of the obvious...love. Thanks for the great review!

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/08/09 03:01 am

Title: Chapter 10

Blair is a pathetic wackjob.  Lisa and Nora need to mind their own damn buisness, Van is an adult and can do what she wants.  I can't believe RJ was hitting on Layla, I hope Layla doesn't fall for or give into his BS but she probably will, apparently Layla's ungrateful and unloyal ass likes getting a piece of Van's ex boyfriends.  I really love Starr in this story (nowadays, I can only enjoy and like Todd and Starr in fanfiction otherwise, both can go to hell for all I care) White stallion and white chocolate LMAO, their so silly.  Todd and Van are so happy and so in love, it's great to see.  I was also glad Todd was honest with Van about his past and that Van didn't abondon him.  Even though many are trying to tear them apart, I'm sure no one will succeed.  Their love is strong.

Author's Response:

Hey bsb,

You know in the past before I would step out of the house my mom would tell me everything that could go wrong if I didn't take something along with me...lol! Hard for Lisa to realize her baby is growing up. Layla doesn't know about RJ. Vange didn't want to mention that she had a boyfriend in Llanview bc she knew that Layla would probably spill to Lisa although Nora beat her to it.

When you have that first feeling of true love...nothing else matters but the two of you. Thanks for posting your reviews!

Reviewer: bsbgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 18/08/09 05:34 am

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