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Title: Chapter 10

Great time. Love the Starr I see here. Not like the other Cramer women. Glad Todd/Vangw
E went to the carnival. I was bracing for some drama.

Glad that went well.

Lisa...Why? And get life!

Nora's just being a friend. Phew Layla...he's slime...run!

Ok Vangie took the 'old Todd' well. One of reasons I love-hate Todd so much is because of Roger...and why I hate OLTL is because they flipped the storyline of the rape...ugh!

Good stuff...thanks Chocolate! ;-)

Author's Response:

Yeah Spark,

I do adore little Starr. So you were bracing for some drama...sorry I disappointed you...LOL!!! Don't you believe they have enough drama! It's like I have two ways of thinking when it comes to Nora calling Lisa so I can support both points of view from the readers but as usual you're the first.

Well she is just experiencing love and she has to put his confession into context...'old Todd' Yeah the way RC made Todd and Marty get involved...yuck, yuck, yuck

Thanks for the awesome review!

Reviewer: SparkApCider Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/08/09 02:44 am

Title: Chapter 10

Well at least she didn't go from the penthouse screaming.  And GO TODD for taking the initiative to tell the truth before Nora or momma Williamson got to her.  I am glad that she seemed to be messing well with Starr.  Blair just never learns.  she is going to really step over the line this time.  Great chapter.

Author's Response: Yeah Vange had to take a deep breath on that one. You tell a guy you're in love with him and this confession hits you in the face. She also understood that Todd has a dark side maybe she didnt know how dark it was but it is in his past. He couldnt pull that in the present or 'she'll run from the penthouse screaming' as you say. She adores Starr. Blair always wants to keep her hands in Todd's business because she has been doing it for so long.  Thanks for submitting a review!

Reviewer: letitia Signed [Report This]
Date: 18/08/09 02:11 am

Title: Chapter 10

Oh Choclate, you know how to make a girl smile from ear to ear. This was such a lovely update.

Todd did my proud about telling Evangeline the truth about his past about raping a classmate. Too many people wouldn't have done that, but Todd did. That is why I love him so. Evangeline was great and understanding in knowing that the Todd that was standing in front of her isn't that samw Todd who did that horrible crime. She's in love with him and she is going to see this relationship to the end. The was the best scene in the chapter.

Starr continues to be a doll and I love her relationship she has with her father and her new relationship with Evangeline. I believe Starr admires Evangeline and it's beautiful to see too. Goodness I love your Snarky Todd, not to fond of his neighbors huh? LOL

You had me laughing about Evangeline stated no more loving from white chocolate until she heals LOL. They were working it that hard huh?

Boy Nora is a trip about getting in all of Evangeline's business and Mama Williamson. She a force to deal with I see. Ugh, RJ is just nasty, I'm sorry. He's hitting on Layla, a girl who's just old enough to be his duaghter. Yet, he continues to say she's reminds him of Evangeline. Maybe because they are sisters you fool!

Blair is loosing her mind and she will be heading to crazy house with Addison if she doesn't wait up.  Great Update dear. *hugs*



Author's Response:

Hey M,

Seems I'm doing the opposite for you since I'm frustrating dye...LOL!

Starr would consider Evangeline the opposite of her melodramatic mother besides her daddy is very happy. Todd is something else when it comes to dealing with other ppl. I always see him as having this huge chip on his shoulders. It takes a woman like Evangeline to make him deal with the public at large..LOL! 

Working it that hard? I know you wanted snapshots...LOL! oh gosh.

As for RJ you know some dudes...think they're all that. Blair...blah! but necessary...

Thanks for the great review as always and hugs right back at yah!

Reviewer: Megumi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/08/09 10:51 pm

Title: Chapter 10

great update! i love todd/van/starr together- especially like this!

Author's Response:

Thanks kelley,

Todd/Van/Starr if only things could have been done all over again. After what BF said about GL that dude is an idiot and is in his own make believe world.

Reviewer: KelleyLi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/08/09 10:33 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Bad choc, bad, bad Choc.  [tears] How could you do this to us? There's war coming from every side,

 [kicking my feet and rolling on the floor in protest] [banging my head against the wall]

My choc, yeah you keep doing what you do, which is making things difficult for Tangie before they can finally have some peace. While I on the other end....well, I don't know what I'll do just yet.

I sound wasted dont I, everybody gets wasted when Nora and Vangie's mom are having their little let's get Todd plan.

Eva is a big girl, she can handle herself, gosh Nora needs to mind her own damn business, she makes me feel constipated and Blair gosh! I just wanna throw up in my mouth then spit it in her face.

 I'm not mad at you though, as a writer, it's your duty to make us feel love, hate, warmth, anger, pain, joy, excited and sometime just plain frustration too sooooo two thumbs up to ypu babe. As always, you're the best, has anyone ever told you that? 



Author's Response: Dye you are so dramatic...LOL!! not wasted as you say unless you had something I don't know about...LMAO! Tell me Dye what really can Nora and Lisa plan? They are small fishes in Todd's big pond...yeah Evangeline is in his pond or is it the other way around...lol! When I first saw your review you really cracked me up on an otherwise damper day. So thanks as usual, as often, for your great reviews and support! hugs

Reviewer: dyehanna1 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/08/09 09:24 pm

Title: Chapter 9

That update was so good and my favorite so far.  I love Starr in this story, she is so cute.  I love the way she is with Todd and Van.  I also like that they wanted Van to go to that house with them for the weekend.  My favorite part of the chapter was Todd and Van saying they love each other *swoon* I especially liked their dialogue in that scene leading up to the ILY, the way Todd said "say it" was so sweet and hot then Van saying it slowly, I loved it.  I also liked their love scene, that was hot as hell too.  Lastly, I love how they handled their exes in this chapter.  Todd got Blair's crazy ass arrested and Van told RJ's stalker ass off, haha!  I just hope Blair isn't pregnant, loved this update alot.

Author's Response:

Hey bsbgirl,

Readers deserve one of those great chapters. I'm so happy that it was your favorite. Todd certainly swept Evangeline off her feet and she couldn't hold back on her feelings. Little Starr loves her daddy and as been around her mother's moody behavior so if daddy says its over then its over. What can I say about RJ and Blair...left behind ish that couples have to deal with from time to time...LOL! Always thanks for reading and posting a comment.

Reviewer: bsbgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/08/09 12:38 am

Title: Chapter 9

My heart bleeds for poor Blair...

She really needs to go into rehab. Todd is so generous. Love Little Starr. Adore her! Hot Sex!

Very well done Chocolate!

Author's Response: Alright Spark put yourself for good samaritan of the year bc you are the only one of my reviewers who feels sorry for Blair. When you say Todd is so generous do you mean money wise or you know...LOL!!! I'm grateful that you took time out (although not a Manning fan) to read my fanfic and give such great reviews!

Reviewer: SparkApCider Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/08/09 11:35 pm

Title: Chapter 9

My Choc, Yes. Lock that whench Blair up and throw away the keys. Love, love the way you wrote Tangie in this chap, there's so much love to go around especially with little Starr. The love scene just blew my mind, I'm happy that they are happy together, now, lets keep it that way okay?

If you are good, I might send you some coco puffs dear.



Author's Response:

Hey dyeHanna,

You want me to end the story in the next chapter...LOL! Blair is still a mother and she can't stay locked up forever...LOL! You are cracking me up. So I guess I won't be receiving the coco puffs...LMAO!!!! Thanks for the awesome review!

Reviewer: dyehanna1 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/08/09 10:55 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Big Mama's coming to town?  Blair is pregnant?  Van is leaving for school soon?  There are a lot of obstacles and problems coming their way.  I think pregnant Blair is going to be the thing that has Van running for the nearest exit.

Author's Response:

Hey YHH,

Thanks so much for reading and the review. These obstacles may or may not keep them together. It takes time to overcome these obstacles and find out what true love is all about.

Reviewer: YHH Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/08/09 03:07 pm

Title: Chapter 9

I love the way this story is going, but I dont want him to get back with Blair. I am rating it a four for now because it seem like you may put him back with Blair.

Author's Response:

Hey loveisreading,

Thanks for the review. I may do that because the way it works he usually falls back on Blair when things aren't going his way but it doesnt mean that he will stay with her forever if I decide to go that route..;)

Reviewer: loveisreading Anonymous starstar [Report This]
Date: 11/08/09 04:43 am

Title: Chapter 9

RJ is such as sleezebag. I think he purposely followed Evangeline into the story. He needs to get on with his life.

The same goes for Blaire. Can you really get anymore deseperate than Blair. She's just down right repulsive now. 

I wonder what hurdles await this couple, and who on earth did Nore call. With a friend like that, who needs enemies.



Author's Response:

Hey Sweet,

RJ mind's is finally starting to see what he had in Evangeline - and its worst for him because he lost her to TODD!

It blows Blair's mind that Todd is really with another woman and not coming to her.

Nora called Evangeline's mom...yikes!...LOL! Thanks for the great review!

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/08/09 01:38 am

Title: Chapter 9

great update. i love how you made starr how she was when she loved and cared for her daddy and evangeline.

Author's Response:

Hey kelley,

Thanks for the awesome review. I believe in the little adorable Starr not the all grown up version...LOL!!! I understand these sort of relationships usually become fractured when you grow and you have a father like Todd butting in but I also believe that RC has damaged Todd beyond recognition and in the end OLTL will pay.  

Reviewer: KelleyLi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/08/09 11:35 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Oh Chocolate, that was the best chapter ever!! Everything was wonderful. From Evangeline and Starr bonding to Todd and Evangeline saying 'I Love You' to one another. And their love scene. It was so H.O.T.T. HOT!  You really have a handle of their sweet and sensual scenes Chocolate. Starr is adorable and I believe she is opening Evangeline's heart to accept more love and happiness in her life. I'm glad Evangeline wanted to a independent woman with Todd. I believe that is why Todd loves Evangeline so much. She's her own person, though she sweet and loving around him. Though she fought tooth and nail to not be that way with Todd. LOL I see RJ and Blair still being a pain in the neck as always. Let's hope the move on. Because Todd and Evangeline has a bigger problem to deal with now. Mama Williamson. LOL Great update as always Chocoalate!!!

Author's Response:

Hey Megumi,

Always say you have one of those good ones..:) I'm trying M to write those sensual scenes maybe one day I'll steal Black's crown....not...LOL!!! I see Evangeline as a strong, independent woman. She knows Todd would give her anything her heart desires but she believes in looking out for herself. So you thing Mama Williamson is a bigger problem? Hmmm...LOL!!! Thanks for the awesome update!

Reviewer: Megumi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/08/09 10:24 pm

Title: Chapter 8

LMAO...Blair and Todd. Dear heavens! I can't stop laughing. He's a drug to her.

You write them swell! I'll give you that...A jovan tale???

Author's Response:

Spark!

In my mind TSJ sold Todd to me (not RC's crap that he's selling right now) Todd and Evangeline are both elixirs for other people so you what happens when the two meet and forget all others...LOL!!!

Are you telling me to write a JoVan or are you telling yourself...hmmm...Thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: SparkApCider Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/08/09 04:30 am

Title: Chapter 7

Why must Blair be so tranced??? Why? Why? Why? Chocolate you hate me! And Blair's the voodoo doll!!!

Author's Response:

Hey Spark!

She believes she loves Todd in her way. Partly because of Todd, Blair believes she has him under her control. She can't imagine that Todd will actually move on without her. Maybe you see Blair differently so write a story about it but she still has to get smacked down by Vange...LOL!!! Thanks!

Reviewer: SparkApCider Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/08/09 04:09 am

Title: Chapter 6

That was hot...in a VW? Buah!

Ok me hates RJ, but dayum Chocolate...a Nissan? LOL!

Author's Response:

Spark!

It was one of the best cars at a certain year. My fic isnt in the year 2009. Starr is only 4 years old. so you can't hate on him that much...LOL!!! Thanks for the awesome review!

Reviewer: SparkApCider Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/08/09 02:45 am

Title: Chapter 5

Loved this one. Spending RJs loot then walking off to dine with Toddler? Oh Vangie you are bad!

Author's Response:

Hey Spark!

Hooray you are still able to stomach my Toddikins...LOL!!!

You see what RJ did walked off in the middle of dinner and she had suspicions about him already. At this point she's not willing to admit the strong attraction between the two but its there...LOL!!!

Reviewer: SparkApCider Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/08/09 02:15 am

Title: Chapter 4

And ideed it begins...Don't like seeing Blair this way!

Author's Response:

Looks like I've lost Spark,

I'm grateful for your awesome reviews though! Since you like John maybe you can write a fanfic about those two and I'll read it just because its you...:)

Reviewer: SparkApCider Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/08/09 06:10 am

Title: Chapter 3

Oh dear...not good giving Toddler some sex now he's going make life complicated...ohmiohmy!

Author's Response:

Hey Spark,

She was experiencing a great deal of pain and Todd well...LOL!!! What would John do?...LOL!!! Thanks for the great review!

Reviewer: SparkApCider Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/08/09 05:41 am

Title: Chapter 8

Todd and Eva were so cute in that chapter.  I love the way Evangeline handled Blair, she put her old, raggedy, senile ass in check and Blair couldn't handle it.  She is so pathetic.  Blair better not be pregnant but I don't think she is and if she is, I bet it's not Todd's.  She has been very jealous of Todd and Van, probably had sex with another guy, got pregnant, and is now trying to pass it off as Todd's, WTFever.

Author's Response:

Hey bsb,

I wonder if the OLTL Todd looks back on the way the writers have written his relationship with Blair. He'll probably be nauseated. When I look at those old T&E youtube vids you can see how TSJ was expanding his acting prowess. The interaction between the two was so refreshing and natural and showed their comfort level.

Blair is crazy obsessive with Todd. Vange has an idea of what she does to keep Todd circulating in her orbit. She'll use anything or anyone. She cant see that this is driving him further away because she has gotten away with it in the past. Like I said Evangeline is a huge threat to that assumption. Thanks for the great review!

Reviewer: bsbgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/08/09 04:36 am

Title: Chapter 2

LOL. As long as Blair isn't doing the leg humping thing I can stand the Toddler. He's just being Todd. Persistant as a stalker.

Author's Response:

Hey Spark,

Compare Todd and John for a second...LOL!!! Thanks for the great review!

Reviewer: SparkApCider Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/08/09 04:22 am

Title: Chapter 8

Poor Todd. Blair is such a bitch. What real woman uses her kids to hold on to a man that doesn't want her. Then she turns around and runs to his sister like some spoiled princess. Have you no self-respect Blair. I couldn't believe that this blonde bimbo had the nerves to call Evangeline a bimbo.

At least Todd's relationship with Evangeline is going well. They are well on their way to happily ever after. I just hope Blair's pregnancy doesn't come back to haunt Todd. He needs to tell Evangeline right now and be as upfront with her as possible.



Author's Response:

Hey Sweet,

Blair is a spoiled, selfish beast that can't tell the difference between real love and obsessive love. When she first came across Evangeline she wasnt worried until Vange gave her the business. We'll see if Todd is upfront about this or not. Sometimes Todd's relationship with Blair factors into what he does. It's hard to do away with some bad habits. Thanks for the great review!  

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/08/09 12:15 am

Title: Chapter 8

My Choc, I'm warning you, keep that skanky slut away from our Todd. Her nastiness just knows no bounds, she doesn't know when to throw in the towel. Goddarn Blair! she's yesterday's news and Evangeline is all the woman Todd will ever need. She can get pregnant all she wants but it wont stop the Tangie from dancing to the beautiful music they are making.

This is my third attempt to write a review, hope it appears this time.



Author's Response:

Hey dye, thanks for the awesome review and you not giving up hope writing this review!

If I don't keep her away then what? Maybe I need some treats to keep my spirits going like coconut tarts or brownies whichever...LOL!!! I'm sorry about that review thing and I loved that you updated that tangie fic of yours! Do you think we'll ever see anything like Tangie again on screen?

Reviewer: dyehanna1 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/08/09 11:49 pm

Title: Chapter 8

Blair's triffling ass better not be pregnant, and if she it, it better not be Todd's,but knowing that Tramp, she'll use this to try to come between Todd and Vange.... she truly makes me SICK... Vicki makes me Sick as well, how could any sister want her brother to be with a woman tht basiclly has treated him like a doormat, Blair treats Todd like an old toy, she doesn't want to "play" with him, but doesn't want anyone else to "play" with him either.

I see that Starr likes Vange, children are can be much smarter than adults.

I liked the way that Vange handled Blair.



Author's Response:

Hey Liberty,

We all know Blair has something up her sleeves. She can't handle Todd moving on without her because it hasn't happened in the past when she messed up so why now? Evangeline becomes the biggest threat to that control she had over him. Blair believes she knows and understands Todd better than anyone so to see this other woman intruding makes her do some crazy stuff just to hold on.

Indeed children are smarter than adults - to see the world through a child's eyes.

Todd is her man now..LOL! Thanks for the great review!

Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/08/09 10:08 pm

Title: Chapter 8

Thanks for the updating Chocolate. I love this chapter because we are seeing some of Todd's issues he has to deal with. Especially that faithless ex-wife of his. She's just toothache that you just want to end at all cost. I don't believe she is pregnant either. It' came out of her mouth too easy and quick.

I love Todd and Evangeline talk in this chapter. I see them falling in love with each other with each moment they are together.  I adore them so!! Star is adorable and I so looking forward to seeing Star and Evangeline having a great relationship. Thanks for the update Chocolate.



Author's Response:

Hey M,

Sometimes I feel like a prisoner to OLTL's concept of Todd and all the shit that surrounds him. I know for most people RC has forever ruined Todd but youtube keeps up my spirits.

So I know Todd loves Evangeline but I still want to bring across the concept of this "falling in love" and thanks for seeing it M and also thanks for the awesome review!

Reviewer: Megumi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/08/09 08:39 pm

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