GREAT! I'm impressed how you set up Evangeline as a broke hard-ass pregnant woman whose down on her luck. Well at least Todd is the same prick that I have grown to love...LOL!!! Definitely no spark. I half-expected a WWE throw down match between the two. She steals his money and throws hot peppery chocolate in his face - What a woman...after his own heart...LOL!!! LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT UPDATE DYE!!!! LOL!!!
Author's Response:
My Choc, I'm so glad you like it, thanks for leaving a review.
While waiting for an update, allow me to let you in on a little secret, all you have to do is bribe me with a couple of Nature Valley Chewy Granola Bars and I'll get my lazy pretty fingers back to work.
Reviewer: chocolate470 Signed
[Report This]Date: 17/06/09 05:58 pm
lol i love this story. i'm not really a big todd/evangeline follower but its kinda adorable how street she is. i just hope she loves her baby at least once she see's it.
Author's Response: Hi Jb, I'm so honored that you love my story, hopefully, I can keep you interested till the end. Thanks for the review babe.
Date: 17/06/09 05:47 pm
OH MY FREAKING GOSH THIS STORY IS FANTASTIC I LOVE IT WHEN VANGE SERVED TODD SOME HOT COCO WITH HOT SAUCE IT WAS GENIUS. LOVE IT, PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Heyshey_kisses, I've missed you, how have you been and where have you been hidding?
The hot sauce coco idea just came out of nowhere because it's something I would probably do if I had encountered him too. Nice to see you around babe, but I need some junk food to keep me hyped. Choc is in charge of the Granola Bars Just send me some Dole fruits and we'll be bff's forever.
I appreciate the review.
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: 17/06/09 05:45 am
Lol love how she threw the drink at him lol. I work in place like that before and customers will make your drink or throw something at them lol. Who the father of van babies? liking the story. thanks for the updated.
Author's Response:
Hello wwefanforlife, I use to work customer service too and trust me, somedays had me feeling like beating the crap out of some folks too. I have had a customer call me a B and I didn't hesistate to tell her about herself, she asked for my manager but I was lucky enough not to get the boot.
Thanks for reading, appreciate the review.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 17/06/09 05:45 am
I like the change. I think its time 4 van to chase todd. And she's not a goody to shoes that's even better.
Author's Response: Hi chocolate girl, thanks for reading. I was beginning to get bored with Todd dying to have her at first sight so I decided to make Evangeline a little crazy and I'll tell you now, she'll be real crazy in the coming chapters. I hope you like the rest of it.
[Report This]Date: 17/06/09 04:07 am
Oh Dyehanna1, this was good beginning. I enjoyed the different direction. I look forward to seeing what will happen next.
Author's Response: Oh Megumi, you're a darling, your reviews always make me smile, thanks for reading, I'll make the next chapter is just for your enjoyment.
[Report This]Date: 17/06/09 04:02 am