Simple and unique, loved every minute of it
Reviewer: Itssafaribaby Signed
[Report This]Date: 22/07/14 09:21 pm
very, very cute... I loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Date: 12/07/09 10:56 pm
First love the banner!
I loved the story..just perfect.Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks Pashmina! Reviewer: Pashmina Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 07/07/09 04:42 am
I think this awesome story expressed how most women feel with they first me a potential love interest. You're so busy noticing the sexy things about him, you forget what's going on around you. The humming thing did have me laughing, there is no way to explain that to a guy on the first date without blusing.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and understanding.
[Report This]Date: 06/07/09 07:38 pm
Nice. Short and sweet.
Thanks for sharing this love story.
Author's Response: You are so welcome. Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed
[Report This]Date: 06/07/09 01:30 pm
*clapping* Funny, sexy, and honest.
Author's Response: Took four months to write and polish. So your reading and enjoying is much appreciated.
[Report This]Date: 06/07/09 05:15 am
Cute tale of just a little bit of doing what feels right and then oddly enough it turns out better then expected.
Author's Response: Like this story. Way better than I thought.
[Report This]Date: 06/07/09 04:33 am
That was such a cute story and it was execute really well. Like everyone else I wish it was longer
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you.
[Report This]Date: 06/07/09 08:21 am
Wonderful story, wish it was longer!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to comment and read. Gladens my poor muse's heart.
Reviewer: LewisAlabama Anonymous [Report This]Date: 06/07/09 07:37 am
Damn that was good! REALLY GOOD! Loved it. Loved your technique: the first couple of lines I thought I was reading the synopsis but then I realized ‘no, this is the actual story’, which was quite interesting in-and-of itself.
I’m a hands-teeth-lips woman myself with a size 7.5W too, and one who loves to peruse a man’s features - how those thick thighs fit in a pair of nice jeans - just like....wait a sec...I don’t even her name! LOL
The non-sex, sex scene was juusst right! It was the perfect effect for this too-short non-story story.
FABULOUS.
Author's Response:
Thank you. The character never told me her name. I appreciate the comment on the sex scene, wasn't sure I did it right. Thanks again.
Reviewer: JV4ME Signed [Report This]Date: 05/07/09 11:26 pm
This is just a one shot, huh...wish it was longer...I'd love to hear her honest answer and see where she and Jace go from here...this was really good...always a fan of first person narrative...helps me to get inside of a character's head...also love stories about regular people having regular, everyday realistic problems...sometimes the familiar can be that much more compelling...good job, Realstone...
Author's Response: Thank you for reading. I have so much to learn when it comes to writing. Thanks for letting me know I'm heading in the right direction.
[Report This]Date: 05/07/09 10:17 pm
That was too cute.
Author's Response: Thank you so very much.
Date: 05/07/09 08:59 pm
I lOVVVVEEE this story sweetie..I love your style of writing...I was waiting to read something else of yours since the Vincent fic...this was no disappointment!!
I loved the reading it from the female's point of view (did I miss her name I read it twice,lol) and she is quirky and so funny! Her description of Jace is sexy and very telling. I think I knew something would happen but was surprised that trusted him so easily. I did figure this must be a small town sense her niece knew him already...anyway
I won't read so much into every word ie I can do I..I will just say this quirky, cute and sexy love story was perfecct!!
Great job sweeetie..I hope you write lots more!
Author's Response: I don't think I gave her a name. Yes, I was thinking of a small rural town, but just big enough for two people to miss meeting each other. Thank you. I'm working on other stories I'm just slow. Reviewer: neneburge Signed
[Report This]Date: 05/07/09 08:58 pm
Nice start. I hope there is more soon.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. I'm not sure these characters have more to say. The muse knows, she just takes her time informing me.
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 05/07/09 08:12 pm
Aww they are cute together! I hope to read more! :D Like a wedding and a baby!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed them.
Date: 05/07/09 05:52 pm
Me likey. Very nicely put together.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading. Glad you enjoyed it.
Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]Date: 05/07/09 05:28 pm
This was a cute story! I really enjoyed it!!
Author's Response: Thank you Redbird.
Date: 05/07/09 04:06 pm
Thanks for a cute story...I was LOL at the end...I hope she gfigures out if she needs to say I love you back...LOL Thanks
Author's Response: I think the character has she's just too stubborn to admit it, to herself.
[Report This]Date: 05/07/09 02:46 pm
That was just excellent. Well written, and delivered. The characters are real and you made me feel like I got to know them. I felt with her all the way.
She's going to have to admit that she is in love sooner or later (smile)
Really excellent. Thank you for a good story.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing. Yes she will, but she's a stubborn character. But she's been graced with a man whose willing to wait. Reviewer: Acorn Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 05/07/09 01:30 pm
Brilliant! I thoroughly enjoyed your tale. Although I would encourage ole girl to give food and sex a chance. Stawberries, cherries, fruit in general along with caramel, chocolate, whipped cream and/or honey can make for a 'heightened' sexual experience.
I'm just saying...LOL!
Author's Response: She's kinda slow but if Jace can sneak in a streak of whip cream now and then she might be able to broaden her mind. Reviewer: SebineDareau Signed
[Report This]Date: 05/07/09 12:04 pm