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Title: Chapter 1

This is really a wonderful start for a wonderful story to be told. Please finish it, this couples story has to be release into the world. 

 I love your work, keep writing your wonderful stories for others to read and enjoy. Thank you so much Miki.

Reviewer: nightseer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/11/12 05:33 pm

Title: Chapter 1

That was hot!!!  Was this one shot or will there be more?  I hope that their will be more.

Author's Response:

Aww... not sure.  Someone else mentioned there should be more, but for now just a one shot.  Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/02/11 03:17 am

Title: Chapter 1

Short and sweet little thing

Author's Response:

Thank you.  I enjoyed writing it.  Delayed response due to being away for a bit.

Reviewer: AJ Taylor Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/02/11 12:48 am

Title: Chapter 1

Yeah, sometimes a guy just grows on you... your brain finally clues into what your heart realizes.  I'm glad Rachel had the courage to admit her love for Leo.

This was a very nice short story. I enjoyed reading it.

Thanks for sharing.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you.  Sorry for the late response have been away.

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/05/10 09:35 am

Title: Chapter 1

What a sweet romantic story. I loved your use of 1st person POV. It allowed me to see the situation through the heroine's eyes perfectly. Great use of descriptive terms as well.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!  Delighted that you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: Suprina Frazier Signed [Report This]
Date: 19/07/09 08:55 am

Title: Chapter 1

Nicely done...glad that they worked out.  Thanks



Author's Response: I am too.  Thank you for taking the time to read and review Divisionred!

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/07/09 03:02 pm

Title: Chapter 1

For a second I thought he was going to push her away from him, but I'm glad he didn't. At least now they can work on making that child, and it will be child created out of love.

Author's Response: I hope they do.  Thanks so much for your review Sweet Pea!

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/07/09 07:36 am

Title: Chapter 1

Ok I LOVED it..I am such a sap for happy ending but this one did not come easy!! I relationship concieved in friendship and marriage of convenience but some how love found a way into their hearts!! Not easily though, it had to over suspicion and accusation but it did find it's way..I love this story sweetie  lot!!

I love your style of writing as well..so visual and emotional..I was so happy he said I love you too..it was as if I had read a whole series on them and had developedd feeling for them already..wow..fantastic job!!



Author's Response: What a wonderful compliment!  I'm always nervous when I post.  Thank you so much for the kind words!

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/07/09 03:07 am

Title: Chapter 1

Thats just the sweetest thing I ever read. I want to tell someone I love them then get threaten afterwards.


Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: guitarlovechild Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/07/09 01:17 am

Title: Chapter 1

loved it. I wish you could build the whole story! :D

Author's Response: I was tempted to, but I most likely will leave it as is.  Thanks so much for your review!

Reviewer: kooshasay Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/07/09 12:57 am

Title: Chapter 1

Nice story!

Author's Response: Thank you so much qualidee3!

Reviewer: qualidee3 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/07/09 12:44 am

Title: Chapter 1

Arghhhh!!!!  Why do y'all keep doing this to me...these one shots are killing me...but oh, how do I love them...

I was actually transformed into Rachel's world...I felt the love she has for her beloved Leo...I felt her timidness...her trepidation...her resolve to reveal her feelings to her husband who was husband in name only...

I wish I could learn more about these characters and their story...it might have been a 'fluff' piece...but the way you wrote it was beautiful and oh so poetic...

Thanks for sharing...

 



Author's Response: My first one shot.  I wanted to try something new.  Glad you enjoyed it.  Thank you so much for your wonderful review!

Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/07/09 10:53 pm

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