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Title: Character Pics

Nice, these two would look lovely together.

 Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/06/11 05:04 am
Title: Chapter 1

its good please continue

 Reviewer: jadadominique Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 28/03/10 12:56 pm
Title: Chapter 1

That was cute!!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading!evil grin smileys

 Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/03/10 03:38 pm
Title: Chapter 1

 I remember reading this story soemwhere else. I loved it. I hope you write him in another story someday.

 Reviewer: Latise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/12/09 12:30 am
Title: Chapter 1

Wow, this was really great! I loved that chilly atmosphere you pasted. You’re good with visual writing and that’s one of the hardest aspects to writing, I feel. If you can do that well, you’re a great writer.

And fantastic scenario, unreal and so realistic at the same time. I wish I could meet my fave rockstar all by myself and get his phone number. It sounds like such a fantasy yet in your story I believed it.

Can’t wait to read more from you, great work!



Author's Response: Thank you so much.

 Reviewer: dissociative_identity Signed [Report This]
Date: 20/10/09 02:43 pm
Title: Chapter 1

This was a very nice short story.

 Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/08/09 07:39 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Your first time writing? Really? Well bravo! This was really good! I love the pace of it and the visuals; I could feel the cold! LOL And her Vans. Love those too. AND the afro. :)

I loved Johnny's insistence at her to sit and mingle with the guest. I love Jason's reaction to the hot cocoa (being too hot ha ha). And I love that he gave her his number.

Fluffy is cute; fluffy is fine. This was a treat and I love the Mraz and had no idea his name meant what it means, so thanks for that bit of info. in addition to this cute story. I look forward to reading more from you :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. You have no idea how hard I'm smiling.

I'm glad you liked the visuals. I was worried the story didn't have enough detail.

 Reviewer: madame z Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/08/09 08:13 pm
Title: Chapter 1

i read this at the sweetest tabo and loved it.too bad its not longer. i would to see more of them.

 Reviewer: KelleyLi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/08/09 01:28 am
Title: Chapter 1

Def. does not suck. I liked the little bit of fluff you had in there. Great job. Write more.

Reviewer: OrangesAtHome Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/08/09 05:17 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Stop selling your self short... this did not suck. I hope u make it  longer

 Reviewer: lyn78 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/08/09 02:58 pm
Title: Chapter 1

I thought it was cute. It made me feel like a teen again, daydreaming about meeting my favorite singer.

 Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/08/09 07:03 am
Title: Chapter 1

This story doesn't suck at all. In fact, I enjoyed it immensely. Keep writing!

 Reviewer: Suprina Frazier Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/08/09 06:51 am
Title: Character Pics

That Jason is a cutie. lol.

 Reviewer: Suprina Frazier Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/08/09 05:57 am
Title: Chapter 1

I enjoyed it!! Thanks for sharing!!

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/08/09 04:25 am
Title: Chapter 1

I love it.  It's really real.  Are you a big Mraz fan?

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I like his music but I love his quirkeness. He seems like such an adorable oddball.

 Reviewer: Dsmoothone Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/08/09 03:12 am
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