So happy I clicked on the random story link. I loved it. Brava! If oonly I could see this played out on the big screen. Omg!
Reviewer: azzure1020 Signed
[Report This]Date: 13/07/14 10:00 pm
i enjoyed reading this, thanks
Author's Response: TY for reading Brandy. Glad you enjoyed! ;-)
Date: 04/11/09 05:56 am
Bravo! I enjoyed reading this remix of Top Gun.
Author's Response: Thanks Sweet Pea for your readership and the great review!
[Report This]Date: 01/09/09 03:27 am
I liked this! Maverick has moves. LOL. And Carol is something else.
Looking forward to more.
Nyeesha
Author's Response: Thanks Nyeesha for reading. Mav has the moves just about...hmm...every where? Carol is a riot! Glad you are enjoying. I have the bones to the next chapter, let me grow some meat on them and I will post shortly...hopefully tomorrow, but we'll see! Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed
[Report This]Date: 27/08/09 03:57 am
oh my goodness... you had me at the first word! pure hotness... i love it
Author's Response: Thanks Dsmoothone for reading. Naughty just didn't do it for me in the original. Let the workout begin.
[Report This]Date: 27/08/09 02:08 am
SOOOO HOT !!!! I love Maverick.
Author's Response: Maverick is yummy isn't he? So hot and so real, love him.
[Report This]Date: 26/08/09 10:22 pm
Oooh, I like this! Like I said, this was my FAVORITE movie growing up. And I like the "urban" flava...
Author's Response: Thanks Dsmoothone. Glad you are enjoying, thanks for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 25/08/09 04:45 pm
hot damn! i thought they would sex it up in the elevator..lol.. great story. way better than the movie. heck, this should have been the movie. with an IR cast.
Author's Response: Awe...thanks sweetie. That's ten gallon coming from a writer as yourself. I loved loved loved the original, but I always saw myself in that role, wishing it had an IR cast. Well...now we got one. If that movie was remade, I'd leap at it!
[Report This]Date: 25/08/09 03:53 am
I can't believe he just left like that. He definitely left he wanting more, point scored for Maverick!!
Author's Response: Yes. Maverick has her card. But he wants her to be honest. Tough call, considering her professional relationship with him. Maverick scores! LOL!
[Report This]Date: 23/08/09 10:22 pm
hot damn! lol... she should have let him use her shower and maybe her fingers wouldnt have been needed...lol.. great update.
Author's Response: ROTFLMAO. KelleyLi I would expect you'd chastise poor Charlie for that. She's trying hard to fight her attraction for him. She's going down in flames.
[Report This]Date: 22/08/09 09:28 pm
Loved the update. Hope he doesn't blow his chances.
Author's Response: LOL...you might want to catch the latest update...some things are cooking!
Date: 20/08/09 09:56 pm
another great update.
Author's Response: Thanks KelleyLi for reading and for the great review!
[Report This]Date: 20/08/09 07:35 pm
great update and kudos for stick to mr bruckhimer's (sp?) story. i think he sold his mama and daddy, because he created/ own/ and/ or produced half of the dramas on cbs alone...lol..
Author's Response: I love Jerry. He's a hometown hero and I think his work is untouchable. LMAO. Yes he has his hand in everything...loved G-Force~ Thanks for reading! :-)
[Report This]Date: 20/08/09 07:30 pm
Oooh, I am really enjoying this. My favorite line so far... Slider, I think Ice needs his bat and balls polished. {CUTE}
Author's Response: Buah! And see a few readers won't read because they hate my choice for Slider. But see I picked him because he makes a good ass kisser. LOL! Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 20/08/09 06:45 pm
I like this alot. This was my favorite movie growing up.
Author's Response: It was a great movie. I fell in love with Tom Cruise after this one. He was such so hot to me. Thanks D for reading. I'm going to try to push out more updates after next week when two of my other stories should be concluding. Reviewer: Dsmoothone Signed
[Report This]Date: 20/08/09 05:09 pm
Great update.
Author's Response: Thanks baha_malo for reading.
Date: 19/08/09 06:40 am
All that and he still didn't get the number!! At least he came out looking like a stallion to his boys, it was unearned but he has time to get the girl and make it right.
Author's Response: Hi Sweet Pea...no digits. She was really a good sport about it too. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :-)
[Report This]Date: 19/08/09 03:28 am
I truly Love this story. My favorite line so far " I nearly choked it was so HUGE" . One word PRICELESS !!! Just too funny . Keep posting .
Author's Response: Thanks Stacie. I'm excited with each chapter. It's moving right along and will go very fast. I will keep posting...
[Report This]Date: 18/08/09 06:10 pm
Loving the cast!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks MZ. It was such a hard pick...LOL!
[Report This]Date: 18/08/09 05:08 pm
Fantastic casting and great soundtrack! Look forward to reading!
Author's Response:
Thanks d_i
I wanted to keep some vintage classics. New chapter posted!
Reviewer: dissociative_identity Signed [Report This]
Date: 17/08/09 02:39 am
PLease don't kill of Goose. who ever Jessie is sapose 2B kill him off ......I love the cast except that air head Jessie/women beater
Author's Response:
Hello Anon...
Jesse's an ass...yep and he's perfect for the role!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 16/08/09 04:22 am
I'm a little embarassed that a bar full of male naval fighter pilots knew the chorus to that song. LOL!!!!
Author's Response: LMAO.
[Report This]Date: 16/08/09 04:16 am
I would soooo love to read Ur Top Gun story but U have got 2 B-kidding me !!!!!!!!! Jessie ...i hated him last season & hate him this season.......Dam this sound like a BB post but LOL
Author's Response:
LMAO Anon...
He's hired for the personality. He's the best tool for the role of Slider!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 16/08/09 04:14 am
Good start.
Author's Response: Thanks Jujubee50. New Chapters posting...I'm trying for two a week. We'll see.
[Report This]Date: 15/08/09 07:12 pm
Me likey.
Author's Response: Thanks baha_malo for reading. Glad you're enjoying it. I have should have another chapter up soon! :-) Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 15/08/09 05:21 am