I really loved this update. I guess one could think of the possibilities but actually writing it down. It was truly a great read and I love the way Todd is there for her...
Author's Response:
Hi chocolate470, I'm glad you liked it, it actually took a while for me to cook that up but I had fun writing this specific chapter because it really broke down the layers of defense that Evangeline had on.
I'm glad Todd is stuck on his ways when it comes to her, I guess it will take more than a troubling past or kissing another dude for him to back off.
Thanks for the review and the stars.
Reviewer: chocolate470 Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 17/09/08 10:22 pm
Bravo! I cant wait for todd to get back andrew, get her pregnant, and maybe make a few calls and have her ex in prision be secsetly 'taken care of'- hint, hint-wink,wink. Go handle it and take care of your woman. Please update soon!
Author's Response:
Hi kelleyli, I always look forward to your reviews because you always crack me up. I'm waiting to see what will happen with their future, I think things are looking up for these two.
Thanks for the review and the stars babe.
Reviewer: Kelleyli Anonymous [Report This]Date: 14/09/08 12:12 pm
I'm glad Vangie has a friend like DR Smith, she really put things in perspective for her.
I always thought that Vangie's character had a hidden issue with men I'm glad you brought that to light. No one should ever have to go through what happened to her and the little girl, it was nerve wrecking.
It's great to know that Todd will always be there for her. Great update dye.
Author's Response:
Hello Kayla 22, sometimes, things get really bad and you realize that you cant cope alone and that was where Dr Ruth came through for Eva as a shrink and a friend. I'm glad she finally spoke with Todd, I believe this will increase the level of trust between them.
Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: kayla 22 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 14/09/08 06:38 am
OH MY I AM IN TEARS. HOW COULD THAT SICK ANIMAL KILL HIS OWN CHILD. THAT POOR BABY, AND POOR,POOR GRIEVING VANGE...WHOOO THIS CHAP THREW ME FOR A LOOP...PLEASE,PLEASE KEEP IT COMING.. FOREVER A FAN!!!
Author's Response:
Hello hershey_kisses, this chapter was very emotional for me, I was actually very frustrated because I could not find words to express this woman's hurt but then I realized that her pain and anguish was beyond words. Thank God for wonderful readers like you, you keep me going.
Thanks for the review babe.
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: 14/09/08 05:32 am
ok dye, why you gotta do that?
I'm this close to biting your head off for making me wait. I know that vange definitely has other stuff she's keeping for Todd.
Maybe Todd needs to slow down just a lil bit, by the way, I find your stories very addictive. Update soon.
Author's Response: HI sugar n spice, relax baby, I gat you covered. I hope the new update is good enough to protect me from your bite marks though. Thanks for all the love and support. Reviewer: sugar n spice Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 14/09/08 12:46 am
Okay I am so shocked and you have left me so confused. I can just imagine what is going through Todd's mind now. but at least we have some perspective of what is really going on with Vange.
Author's Response: Hello letitia, I bet you didn't see the " use to be married" part coming, I'm glad you're just as confused as I am. All you questions are about to be answered. Thanks for the review.
Date: 11/09/08 11:12 pm
NO YOU DIDNT JUST LEAVE ANOTHER CLIFF HANGER. EVA USED TO BE MARRIED, DAMN I NEED AN UPDATE QUICK...FOREVER A FAN!!!
Author's Response: Hi hershey_kisses, I just updated, I hope you enjoy the new chapter. As always, thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: 11/09/08 09:42 am
just so much history in this chapter. And now I am more hurt for Vange. Dru is really her biological child and Clay just took him. I am glad that Todd is still hanging in there. There is something else she is keeping inside and I can't wait to find out what it is. AWESOME chapter and story.
Author's Response:
Hi letitia, I'm glad you like the update, you know even though she doesn't have legal rights to the baby, Eva could easily bust Clay's bubbles by telling him that his wife deceived him but she doesn't want her friend to be remembered as a con artist.
I think the next Two chapters will give us an insight to why there's more to it than what meets the eye when it comes to Vange and her relationships with men.
Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: letitia Signed [Report This]Date: 09/09/08 04:17 am
Great updates! Please update and get vange pregnant by todd!
Author's Response:
Hi, Kelleyli, thanks for reading and the review.
There's nothing I would love more than to get Eva knocked up but she takes a birth control shot every three months, but who knows maybe she'll be too busy and her forget about her up coming appointment with the GYN.
Reviewer: Kelleyli Anonymous [Report This]Date: 05/09/08 05:16 am
HELLLLOOOO HEAVEN!!!!! Can someone please spell dyehanna? AMAZING.
Okay, now that i got that out of the way, I have to say I didn't see that coming. It's just getting better and juicer by the minute, WHOWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE, update soon give before I start chasing you in your dreams with a key beard.
Author's Response:
Hey Kayla 22, I think I saw you last night chasing me with a key board in your hand so I'm definitely going to update soon.
Thanks for the stars and review.
Reviewer: kayla 22 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 04/09/08 06:03 am
OH MY GOSH YOU DROP SOME MAJOR BOMBS IN THIS CHAPTER.. WHOO ANDREW IS VANGE BIOLOGICAL BABY, DRU BEING INFERTILE SINCE COLLEGE FROM CHEMO FOR OVARIAN CANCER, TODD PROPOSING!!!!!! OH I JUST LOVE IT ALL... PLEASE, PLEASE KEEP IT COMING..FOREVER A FAN!!!!
Author's Response:
Hi hershey_kisses, I'm so glad you liked this chapter. I have a little surprise present waiting for you in the next charpter. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: 04/09/08 05:36 am
DAMN THAT LOW DOWN DIRTY S.O.B. CLAY AND HIS TRASH BAG BLAIRHO IS GOING TO GET EXACTLY WHAT COMING TO THEM.. I MEAN CLAY IS A BASTARD FOR SNATCHING HIS SON FROM VANGE FOR SOME MONEY AND A COUPLE OF LAYS WITH CONIVING BLAIR.. THEN HE DOES NOT EVEN TAKE CARE OF THE BABY PROPERLY. THE YEARS HE AND HIS WIFE DRU SPENT TOGETHER MEANT NOTHING TO HIM BECAUSE THIS IS HOW HE REPAYS HER BY USING THEIR SON AS A PAWN IN A BLAIR SCHEME. I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH CANT WAIT TO SEE WHAT VANGE KEEPING FROM TODD IN TENNESEE....
Author's Response:
Hey girl, I can definitely tell you that there's a couple of huge good and bad surprises coming up but I promise to try and make it as painless as possible.
Thanks for the review babe.
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: 28/08/08 06:27 am
Although I hate that anyone would put their hands on a woman abusive, but sometimes there are just some times that I want Blair to get what she gets. I just hope that Vange and Todd can figure out a way to get Drew back. they need to work together on this. Awesome chapter.
Author's Response:
I totally agree with you when it comes to the abusive part, yet it's a story that has to be told. I'm not sure if you noticed but that was why I gave Blair a way out with the room service girl.
Thanks for reading, well appreciated.
Reviewer: letitia Signed [Report This]Date: 28/08/08 04:35 am
Am I allowed to slap Evangeline? I can't believe it, she cut him off just when he was about to talk marriage.
As for Clay, he's a complete sell out, he should be ashamed of himself.
Author's Response:
Common Sugar, give the poor girl a break. She has a lot going on.
Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: sugar n spice Anonymous [Report This]Date: 28/08/08 03:43 am
damn that sorry excuse for a man clay snatching little drew from evangeline.. if he ever loved his wife at all he would not punish their child because she passed away and nora really gets on my damn nerve with her i hate todd speech, damn can you get a life and stay out of tangeline, but i am glad vange didnt pull a marcie...........
Author's Response:
Ohhhh Hershey, where would I be without you? You always hit the nail on the head.
Clay is just lame, you'll see the reasons why he really did it in the next chapter.
Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: 21/08/08 09:14 pm
Oooh girl! Your fanfic went and grew up in a big way. I like the fact that you are not afraid to change lanes,so to speak. it makes it really interresting if even the author doesn't quite know what's goin' down....Or maybe you do and you're just getting your own style? Anyway, can't wait 4 more!
Author's Response:
What can I say? I'm a Tangie slut, I just had to do it.
Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Pasha Anonymous [Report This]Date: 21/08/08 06:04 pm
OMG!!!! That was just cruel and heart breaking, I really hope that Vange will survive this. Good drama though.
Author's Response: Hi Kayla, thanks for the review, the storm will be over soon. I promise.
[Report This]Date: 21/08/08 05:03 pm
awesome awesome awesome chapter. I am glad that Todd does have some type of clue as to what may have caused her to shift. And I love how Todd had to give a tantrum like a child. He is really going to have to grow up to get her back. Awesome blackmail when it comes to David.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it.
I have a little bit of drama on it's way just for faithful Tangelites like you.
Reviewer: letitia Signed [Report This]Date: 19/08/08 01:53 am
Hmmm....interesting...are you saying that David is too pretty??? I love this angle though. I, too, was wondering about Evangeline's reaction in the chapter before but you are doing a good job of taking us to the reason why....
Author's Response:
Yep apparently so, Vickers is an under cover brother.
Thanks for reading, I appreciate your review.
Reviewer: chocolate470 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 15/08/08 04:13 pm
All I can say is WOW, that is some blackmail that would really rock the BK family. I didn't see that chapter coming.
Vick: Am a very busy man, my hands are full.
Todd: With what, Crabs?
vick: You look a little swollen and bloated Manning, is it that time of the month?
I loved the conversation between Todd and Vickers, it was funny and evil at the same time. What Todd wants, Todd gets and there's no stopping him. Can't wait to see what the happens next.
Author's Response:
I have a very weird sense of humour, am glad you get it.
Thanks for the stars and the review.
Reviewer: kayla 22 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 15/08/08 03:50 pm
damn todd said some cruel sh*t to vange, but damn i was suprised or maybe shocked to find out david and clint getting it on, damn todd always has aa ace up his sleeve!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
I told you he was about to get Cranky, you can always trust Todd to dig up other people's deep and dark secrets for his personal benefit.
Thanks for the review and the stars.
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: 15/08/08 03:57 am
Me too, Todd can send me those chocolate anytime.
What's going on with our girl? She kept saying the situation is bigger than them, well, whatever it is I hope it brings them closer.
Don't worry Todd, E will always find her way back to you.
Author's Response:
Sometimes I wish she could put her foot down and say " screw the situation, am claiming my man" but for some reason, things always get complicated with those two.
Thanks for the review and stars.
Reviewer: kayla 22 Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 10/08/08 01:17 am
DAMN I NEED SOME OF THAT CHOCOLATE THAT EVA WAS EATING, OH MY TODD IS SO HOTT... EVA NEEDS TO LET HIM IN ON WHATS GOT HER SCARED BECAUSE DADDY WILL TAKE CARE OF EVERYTHING.......FOREVER A FAN
Author's Response:
Yeah he might be a little hot now but saddle up because he's about to get Cranky, as for the chocolate, I dream of it too, no one can take that away from us.
Thanks for the review and stars.
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: 09/08/08 04:00 am
Loved it! great interaction with everyone.
This is how dialogue should be.
Author's Response: Thanks a mil, your review just put me on cloud nine, I have been grinning all afternoon. I hope you enjoy the rest of it. Reviewer: Hopieland Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/08/08 07:34 pm
Oh come on... I know that Eva has to be scared but she has already made one step. Todd is not going to back down. And I think Blair knows that she is going to get in once Todd figures this out. I know that Eva wants the best for Drew and having his father is probably on her mind. I just hope that Clay doesn't hurt her and Drew too much. I can just see it coming.
Author's Response:
Personally, there's nothing i would love more than to see Blair dressed in rags and begging for a bagel.
Whatever she gets from Todd, we all know she had it coming. Thanks for the review and stars.
Reviewer: letitia Signed [Report This]Date: 04/08/08 04:31 pm