I can't take it anymore, you're killing me here ! I shed liters of tears for these two last chap... My heart is too fragile ! it's so sad. I'm gonna miss Abraham and Vernon, Adam was too weak (your life was at stake for god's sake, man up a little!) and Lucas, this prick, being a pawn for the fishes suits him better than being a survivor !
All drama aside, you're an artist, I'm in love with your story, original and really refreshing. I'm glad I've read ! Just one word : RESPECT !
All praise aside, I need my fix of hapiness, let's keep reading !Reviewer: Peanut Signed [Report This]
Date: 27/02/12 05:04 pm
I'm enjoying the story but hate to think of what happens next seeing as to how they are on the titanic.Reviewer: Royaldiva Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 26/08/09 01:18 pm
Wow!! I found this story, started reading, and didn't stop until the end of chapter five. What a great story.
From the beginning, Abe's baby was a miracle, left behind by his beloved wife so that he wouldn't be alone. What a sad, sad life it was too. Salomi has such spirit, smarts, and sass. Sometimes a little too much. Abe is simple and naive in his unsophistication. I fear that it will be his undoing. What a way to make a better living for yourself and your daughter.
This story has a smooth, easy flow in telling the tale of lives lived in such a simple depressing time.
I'm hooked. I don't know where your storytelling is taking us, but I'll be alone for the ride.
Author's Response: I am so touched by your review! Reviews like this are the reason why I like to share my work with the world instead of just keeping it for myself on my hard drive :). Reviews like this also make me wanna update. Thanks again for riding with me!!!!!!! Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed [Report This]
Date: 23/08/09 04:44 am
You definitely have my attention with the start. I can't wait to read more.Reviewer: sjrucker Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 19/08/09 02:42 am
Interesting start.Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 18/08/09 01:57 am