Yes Rho you made them work through their issues in a biblical sense...LOL!! and I didn't miss the ten inches comment either. I wondered about that engagement surprise but Kyle...hiyah men...but Latoya didn't seem to mind at all!
Author's Response: Hey Chaos!!!!! Thanks for reading. I really appreciate it. Hey there's nothing wrong with a well-endowed man. I happen to like those kind. LOL.
[Report This]Date: 22/04/09 11:44 pm
Thanks for a great update. I missed the story. Take Care
Author's Response: Aww thanks for reading Divsionred. You are one of my faithful readers and I greatly appreciate you taking the time to read my story.
[Report This]Date: 07/04/09 06:59 am
Wow they work it they realy realy worked it lol. I hope he smarts up and fight to be with her and don't run. loving the story girl thanks for the updated.
Author's Response:
Hey Trina. "Hugs to you". I'm glad you enjoyed the update. I plan to update really soon again so I'm glad you like it. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 07/04/09 05:44 am
That was HOT... I think that Kyle and Latoya will work out, seems she is ready to leave D.C.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading Shina. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Kyle and Latoya are smoking hot together aren't they? I'm glad you liked the update. Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 07/04/09 03:19 am
LeMarcus is PATHETIC, and a LOSER, how many ways can Jolette tell him that she doesn't like him, he doesn'teven love Jolertte, he just wants to have sex with her PERIOD.
Its funny how he has success and money and still is jealous of Cedric b/c he can't find a "good"woman, no wonder all he attracts is HO's.
Author's Response: LOL. Thanks for reading Shina. You hit the nail on the head about Lemarcus. He is just pathetic and a loser. Its a shame too, because if his attitude wasn't so messed up, he may could have a "good woman" in his life. Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 27/03/09 10:22 pm
Ok lemarucs is a crazy son of a bitch the woman dont' wanted you crazy ass. I hope they stay strong and don't let him or others runin their love. Love the story girl and thanks for the updated.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading Trina. I really appreciate it. Lemarcus is crazy isn't he? and that is the worst kind of person. Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed
[Report This]Date: 26/03/09 10:57 pm
Ok i don't know what going on with jason but he better get it together before he lose her agian. Glad that keeana put that bitch in her place. Is keeana going to have jason baby? mmm. Glad to see another chapter post love it and thanks for the updated.
Author's Response: Hey Trina. Thanks for reading. Keeana did put her in her place didn't she? lol. Hmm.....a baby? you'll find out soon enough.
[Report This]Date: 19/03/09 05:20 am
This is a great update. Stephanie needs to move on asit is obvious that Jason doesn't want to be with her. Thanks for a great read.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading Divsioned. Jason's a typical male. He really does love Keeana, but he is scared of commitment.
[Report This]Date: 19/03/09 12:37 am
OMG Stephanie needs to get out of the bitter barn, she is so jealous of the Cole sisters its making her STUPID... that crap happened 10yrs ago GET OVER IT, and I think that Jason dumped Stephanie b/c either he saw her for the shallow person she is or she cheated on him.
Btw, I love how she lied about everyone especially Dana and Jolette, I have a feeling she tried to push up on Cedric and he turned her down.
Can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading Shina. She really is jealous and needs to get over it. She is so bitter that it is making her stupid. Jason did dump Stephanie b/c he realized she was a tramp.
Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous [Report This]Date: 18/03/09 11:31 pm
great start
Author's Response: Thanks for reading my story. it is greatly appreciated.
Date: 03/02/09 06:52 pm
May I say that you did a splendicious job on this chapter Rho...Rho...I wonder what the heck you were talking about regarding writers block...what writers block...LOL!
Keyshia Cole is Tiffany and that bombshell confession that Nicholas is Antoine's son. The girl had to try to make that money even though she ended up with $1...that was a riot!
Best damn chapter!
Author's Response: LOL! thanks for reading Chocolate Chaos. I must say that I had a hard time writing this chapter just the way I wanted to. Nicholas is not Antoine's son though. Too bad for him though cause he could use a good male influence. Reviewer: chocolate470 Signed
[Report This]Date: 03/02/09 05:41 pm
Hey Rhonda, thats for updating and it was good.
Tiffany is nothing but a Golddigging bitter used up TRAMP... she never loved Antione she loved his MONEY, and she's mad and jealous of Ashley b/c her life is CRAP and she believes Ashley took the life that SHE wanted.
I have a feeling that Antoine and Ashley haven't seen the last of that Hooker.
Oh and Antonie making her look like a FOOL had me LMAO.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading Shina. What I had Antoine do to Tiffany was priceless and only something that he would do. lol. Nicholas is not even Antoine's son and she is using him for profit. She's trifling and a used up tramp. Anyway, thanks for review and I'll try to update soon. Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 03/02/09 08:38 am
Tiffany was wrong for using her son that way...she should be locked upa nd they need to throw away the key the conniving so and so, the nerve of her. As for Antoine and Ashley enough already either be together or not but come on....this has been going on to long...dude is way into her and she is showing her natural ass...like his brother said, get over it if she doesn't want to be with you then move on.
Thanks for a great read, and please update sooner than later and don't stay away so long. Take Care.
Author's Response:
Hey Divsioned. Thanks for reading and sticking with my story even though it took me a long time to update. Writer's block is a killer on the spirit for writing. Anywho, Antoine is not Nicholas' father. Its a shame he isn't cause the poor baby needs some type of parental guidance and structure in his life. Ashley and Antoine are going to keep frustrating you i hate to tell you. They are both just alike......stubborn and set in their ways.
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 03/02/09 05:53 am
Dam that shady bitch trying to hurt him but he got the last laugh lol. If he the father I hope he get full custody of him. I wonder what his girl going to say about this. So glad to see a updated on this story girl you know it one of my fav. thanks for the updated.
Author's Response: Hey Trina!!! Thanks for reading and sticking with my story even though it took me a long time to update. Writer's block is a killer on your writing spirit. Anywho, Antoine is not Nicholas's father. Too bad he isn't cause poor Nicholas needs some parental guidance.
[Report This]Date: 03/02/09 04:53 am
Hi Please update. Thanks
Author's Response:
Hey Divsionred. I've had writer's block, but I updated and i plan to update more in the near future. thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 13/12/08 03:42 am
I hate lemarcus....give me my switch blade....cedrics mom needs to take the stick out of her behind....seriously he cant be a moms boy eva...and Chocolatechaos is right just come out and say it....We dont like Shrimp lol...but 12 dayum can you say inside internal-disruptous (yeah i know not a word i made it up)...um i luv a nice size and all but uh Nah Thanks I Luv My Insides more....lol...
sorry it took me forever to get in here....just been super busy....but i got yer back valenita....awesome chapter until the next update...C
Author's Response: Hey Cami!!! Thanks for reading. Choc knows I don't like shrimp. I feel you on your comment. Don't want your insides torn up. LOL. I've made LeMarcus so unlikeable that I'm starting to dislike him. LOL. Anyway, will try to update soon. Thanks for reading. Reviewer: CMA Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 09/11/08 03:45 pm
Hey Rho...you've got to believe that I read this yesterday... but forgot to submit a review...ouch!
You had LeMarcus showing up like a dirty dog to interrupt foreplay...LOL!!! This time you gave him 12 inches...LMAO!!! with that one...I guess you're trying to tell me something undercover... be like C...just come out and say it..LOL!!!
Author's Response: Hey Choc!!! LOL. thanks for reading. LeMarcus is such a party pooper and a hater. LOL. Glad you liked it. Reviewer: chocolate470 Signed
[Report This]Date: 05/11/08 05:59 pm
Great update...I hope that loser stays gone but probably not. As for his parents I am sure that they will want to break them up again. Hopefully this time because they are older that they will stand together against any and all that oppose their union. Thanks
Author's Response: Hey Divsionred!! Thanks for reading. I am so glad that you enjoyed the story. Can't say that you have seen the last of the loser, but he is a big time loser. LOL. His parents are snobs. We'll see if they can stay together. Thanks for reading.
[Report This]Date: 04/11/08 12:58 am
I have been waiting for Cedric and Jolette to get back together for a while now, that was a HOT chapter... LeMarcus needs to get a Damn Life, he is so jealous ofd Ced that it makes him stupid and dangerous, which is a bad combination, Cedric.Jolette need to watch out for him.
I have a feeling that Cedric's mother is going to be a huge issue for them as well.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading Shina. I'm so glad you enjoyed the story. You are right about LeMarcus. He is pathetic and stupid. Just sad. I had fun writing this chapter. It was great fun. Thanks again for reading. You haven't seen the last of LeMarcus and Cedric's mother. Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 03/11/08 09:10 pm
First I wanted to say that was hot hot hot hot. I love how you threw the rock line it doesn't matter what your name is lmao. His parents need to shove their opion where the sun don't shine he a grown man and she loves him. Lemarcus needs to get a clue or better yet a ass kicking thanks for the updated.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading Trina. I thoroughly enjoyed writing this chapter. It was great fun. That ass kicking may be coming up sooner than you think. LOL.
[Report This]Date: 03/11/08 07:41 pm
OH LORD!!!!!.....WHY!!!!.....PLEASE RUNNN DANA RUNNN!!!!......aint he just conceited....ugh....
Sorry im late to leaving my review, but u know what i had to wait on before i could indulge myself in this fabulous story.....lol...i loved it...dont take so long next time to update lil ma...u know i go loco waiting....lol.
Side note: now see why did you have to say 10inches are you trying make a certain someone we know and love mad at you...LMAO...
Author's Response:
Hey Cami!!! Thanks for reading. LOL. You think Mike is conceited? You think all of them are conceited. LOL.
Just a side note. about the 10 inches. Not trying to make nobody jealous. just stating facts.
Reviewer: Cma Anonymous [Report This]Date: 21/10/08 02:33 am
Wow you responded fast to my comments...thanks and when is the next update. I am hooked on this story now. I also like your end notes on the story and the way that u asked questions.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading. I don't know when I'll update. Probably in the next few days. I'm glad you are enjoying the story.
Date: 13/10/08 07:20 pm
Of course it will last and last and last...thanks for a great read
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and you are very welcome. I'm glad you are enjoying the story.
[Report This]Date: 13/10/08 07:14 pm
OK, oh boy that is to bad that he walked out but I can understand why he did though because she still want the scandalous one...Mr NBA
Author's Response: LOL. You think he's scandalous? Hmm, he is a bit of an ass. LOL. but Steven felt he had no choice.
[Report This]Date: 13/10/08 06:07 pm
His work out clothes are Jeans? Great update. Thanks
Author's Response:
I think that may be a typo. LOL. I'm not a great editor.
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 13/10/08 06:03 pm