Great story...thanks
Author's Response: Thanks for reading Divsionred. I'm glad you are enjoyed the story.
Date: 13/10/08 12:34 am
LOL!...these 10 inches boy...
Rho you are getting good on those sex scenes. In the office fanning away at myself..LOL!!!
Author's Response: Hey Choc!! Hey, what can I say? They are truly blessed individuals. I'm glad you are liking the sex scenes. You have no idea I put into them. thanks for reading. Reviewer: chocolate470 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/10/08 09:29 pm
I just wanted to say I thought I was going to be a old lady before i seen a updated from you lol. Second glad she going to give him another change they are great together and make each other happy. thanks for the updated.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading Trina. Hey, I had stuff to do. I'll try to update more sooner. Can't have you deprived. Lol. Glad you like it.
Date: 10/10/08 03:41 pm
Okay, that can't be good. Wonder what his plan is, and if it even has a chance of working. Jolette seems pretty hung up on Cedric at this point.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading Token. LeMarcus is just an ass. and pretty darn jealous. Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/10/08 07:13 am
Dude, Dana'a hard core. I want to know more of course, but she scares me a little... :)
Author's Response: Thanks for reading Token. Dana is a little hardcore. And a little scary. LOL. I'm glad you are enjoying it.
Date: 10/10/08 07:09 am
Okay, Patrick is a bit of an ass, but he admits that, which is good. And I admit, I was surpised that he knew the stripper, that was pretty entertaining actually. Wonder if he's seen the last of Tiffany.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading Token!! Patrick is an ass, but he admits it like you said which is good. They all know the stripper. She is Antoine's ex girlfriend from college.
Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed [Report This]Date: 27/09/08 05:56 am
Tabitha's pretty strong willed I think Patrick better watch out. And she does have a man, so not sure how that's gonna go down. Can't wait to see though. :)
Author's Response: Thank you for reading Token. I'm so glad you are enjoying my story. Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 27/09/08 05:49 am
Whoa, was not expecting the slap. I like Keena, standing up for her sister like that. She might not have the whole story, but at least she's loyal to family.
Hope Daron can get in a word or two, so he can actually ask for forgiveness. :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading Token. Keeana doesn't have the whole story, but she is very loyal to her family. When one is hurt, they are all hurt.
Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed [Report This]Date: 26/09/08 08:11 am
I don’t care what I have to do, but I’m going to make her forgive me. I have to try to get her back,”
Nice, I like it when men get over themselves and go after the ones they love. I like Jason, seems like he's got a bit of sense, despite his mistakes.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading Token!! I appreciate it. Great analysis. Jason does have sense. He knew he made a mistake and he wants to make up. Glad you enjoying the story. Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 23/09/08 09:27 pm
Jason thinks Keena cheated on him? That's interesting, wonder what acutally happened between them...
Author's Response: Thanks for reading Token!!! You should read the rest. More is explained. Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 23/09/08 06:58 pm
Heh, that's was nice, here she was reaming them out and Kyle shows up. Brianna is a bit tightly wound, isn't she?
Author's Response:
Yeah she is. Very feisty and outspoken. Lol. Thanks for reading Token! I appreciate it
Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed [Report This]Date: 23/09/08 06:49 pm
This was a good chapter, it's interesting that Keena still thinks about a man that hurt her that much all those years ago. If she were truly over him, she wouldn't have to show him anything, or care what he thought about her. But we've all done that at one point, haven't we?
Author's Response: Yeah we have. Classic case of denial. She's in denial big time. Thanks for reading Token! I appreciate it.
Date: 23/09/08 06:45 pm
Rho you really did it this time. You make me feel for the brother..poor...poor Steven. It hurts when the lady has someone else on their minds...LOL!!! Great update...
Author's Response: Yeah Steven was blindsided. He didn't know what hit him. I felt for him too. Hard to love someone who has someone else in their heart. Thanks for reading Choc!! I appreciate it Reviewer: chocolate470 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 23/09/08 05:14 pm
Nice Rhonda... glad to see that she forgave him :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading Jmee! I appreciate it
Reviewer: Jmee Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/09/08 07:20 am
Nice one Rhonda. I knew that Steven would see that Tabitha still has deep feelings for Patrick, and thats why she didn't move in with him when he asked her to.
IMO Steven is the "safe" boyfriend, thats why she's with him.
Author's Response: Thanks Shina. Your analysis is spot on. She has unresolved feelings for him. Thanks for reading. Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 23/09/08 06:38 am
Well it sucks that her and her boyfriend breaking up but it for the best she in love with her ex and always will be. thanks for the updated.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading wwefan. They need the time apart to work out their feelings.
Date: 23/09/08 06:26 am
First I love how you have the rock in your story I think he is the sexy actor/ wrestler ever beside my sexy john cean any way. I'm loving the couples are getting back together and never gave up on each other. Thanks for the updated. Updated soon I just love this story.
Author's Response: The Rock is very sexy. He fits my character I created. I'm glad you are enjoying the story
Date: 16/09/08 05:49 am
I love this story I love this story did i metion I love this story lol. Finaly I thought she would never forgive that man but she did and he gave her one welcome home baby lol. thanks for the updated.
Author's Response: Thanks for loving the story wwefan. I'm glad you like it. That was a good welcome home. Lol.
Date: 16/09/08 05:43 am
Dam I need me a conversation my dam self lol. That was hot hot hot hot girl. I'm glad she let him in and they going to try to work it out. Love this story. thanks for the updated.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. LOL. I'm so glad you liked it wwefan.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 16/09/08 05:37 am
I don't get how these woman can not jump these guys bones. I would in a spilt sec lol. So Corey wanted her back but is she going to let him back in her heart? can't wait to find out. thanks for the updated.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading wwefan. They have strong wills. LOL. i would have jumped them too.
Date: 16/09/08 05:29 am
Girl if she doesn't take him I will. That man is sexy sexy sexy and trust me he wouldn't have to ask me twice we would be on that desk lol. I love this story and the charcters in it. Thanks for the updated.
Author's Response: You welcome wwefan. Glad you enjoying the story.
Date: 16/09/08 05:25 am
Very Hot Chapter, man I guess thats what yrs of frustration will do.
I hope they talk about everything.
Author's Response:
Thanks Shina. I'm glad you liked the chapter.
Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous [Report This]Date: 15/09/08 10:20 pm
OK...this guy is a senator and you have that picture of him...Rho you slay me...LOL! and he is at war with P-Diddy..this is making me LMAO!!!
Author's Response: Glad you like it Choc. It isn't at war. LeMarcus is such a bastard. LOL
Date: 15/09/08 06:17 pm
LOL...you really have these sisters defending each other's honors and slapping the crap out of the ex...I love it!..
Author's Response: Hey they are sisters. They ride or die. LOL
Date: 15/09/08 04:25 pm
Nothing go worked they were both just horny as hell for each other...let's see how things go when the wake F* up to reality once niether is craving the other...
Its about time i got my up date...lol...
Author's Response: Cami you are a mess. lol. you are right. they were horny as hell. but you never know. they may work things out. Reviewer: Cma Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 15/09/08 12:39 pm