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Title: Chapter 1

I thought that Fred was ask her to take care of his daughter that he had with another woman.  THe sex maybe good, but is it worth all the drama that he brings into her life?  I want to see her Brent together, that would be awesome!!!

Author's Response: Drama plagues poor Jessy.  You'll see in 'Hello My Name is Sammy..."  Thanks for reading and for the feedback.

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 20/02/10 04:24 pm

Title: Chapter 1

OK, seriously though I don't know how I missed this one.  Great interesting something I would like to know what happened with Bristol was that resolved he going gain custody of his little girl and ask Jesse to help him with her that was my thought.

 Thanks Spark for sharing....



Author's Response: Bristol and Quincy will appear in the story 'Hello my name is Sammy' There has been some interesting on-goings in the two years since this snippet...and you will get privy to all of your questions...hopefully. I will say this...Jess did not take custody. And it didn't go over well. But...you will see why. Again thanks sor reading.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/09/09 05:45 am

Title: Chapter 1

That was excellent. Usually, I don't like it when someone tells the story in first person, but you have a gift.  Thanks

Author's Response: Thanks shereads48 for reading. First is challenging. I'm glad you took a chance on it. I love this serial and hope you come back to meet the children of Jessy and Fred. It's running now 'Hello my name is Sammy'

Reviewer: shereads48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 27/09/09 12:25 am

Title: Chapter 1

I TOTALLY LOVED THIS STORY. Liar!...LOL! You are good at this one shot deal... I felt all she was going through in her marriage. Like you captured a piece of every woman's story - being there, supporting even though they do cheat and when he delivers those damn divorce papers you look at life differently even doing shit you wouldnt. Suddenly he comes back and you are his again even if its only for one time on that special occasion. They always come back don't they? Absolutely outstanding writing. I bow to you Spark!

Author's Response: Nuh uh! I'm struggling still with it. Yes chocolate, we may not want to admit it but they do come back...indeed! Thanks for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed!

Reviewer: chocolate470 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31/08/09 09:23 pm

Title: Chapter 1

It sounds like he wants her to take care of Bristol.

Author's Response: Ooh! Sweet Pea, you know he's thinking it even if he can't verbalize it yet. Thanks for reading and gor the great review.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/08/09 02:54 am

Title: Chapter 1

I would have shown that trifflin' mofo the door! Don't come at me with your cheating ass talking about the woman you cheated on me with! I feel for that innocent baby but what is she gonna do? Adopt her?? HELL NO! Get outta here with that Fred before I make you disappear permanently...fool.

Loved the story Spac! I won't ask for a continuation because this was a one shot deal but...well you know what I'm already thinking, haha!



Author's Response: LMAO Renee. Glad you enjoyed. Thanks for reading. I'm thinking it over!

Reviewer: Renee Banks Signed [Report This]
Date: 30/08/09 01:16 am

Title: Chapter 1

Girl I love Jess!! She has got to have her own longer story! She is crazy, funny, wild an wayy to real life!! I want to know about her life after Fred and her children...

This was a great story and I was captivated throughout the entire piece...now I am just like Jess I want more!! rotfl!! Loved it sweetie!! 

 



Author's Response: Jessy is so much fun. She was always a hoot. And in spite of the money she grew up with, she was so casual about it. She's been trying to break free from her father's influence, although there's been times she wished she could have it. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks fir reading.

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/08/09 11:00 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Yeah. I really do hope it is only for the one night. Jessyca needs to continue to move on. Fred's needy. She's comfortable, reliable, and convenient. Next he'll get the baby and she'll find herself taking care of another kid? I think not.

I totally enjoyed reading this short story. Thanks for sharing.



Author's Response: Thanks blue for reading and the wonderful review. You know he's thinking about it! But as much as Jessy cares about his kids...she's finished with diapering. He's on his own,

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/08/09 09:40 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I thought that she was going to end up with Brett not her ex.  Thanks for a great read.  Her talking to her self conversations were funny.

Author's Response: Divisionred it's so hard to tell at this level of the game. But Brett has to work out his dilemma. He's a great catch. And if he ever gets his conflict straighten I'll know what to do with him.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/08/09 07:43 pm

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