it appears that this story is trying to heat up. i can't wait for jaki and angel to get together
Author's Response:
You will have to wait and see!
Reviewer: darlene433 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 22/09/09 08:58 pm
well good thing he pray before he mad a mistake and lose her before he every had her. i hope that she able to do school and her job may be he let up on her. i like the story and can't wait to see the pics of the cast. love the story and thanks for the updated.
Author's Response:
Yes, homeboy prayed hard for guidance on the situation. As for Angel you will have to wait and see. LOL
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed
[Report This]Date: 22/09/09 08:43 pm
I LOVE a praying man! Good post, Ajani. I'm looking forward to seeing his prayers answered.
Author's Response: I thought you might like that. I figured since he dug himself in such a hole he might as well seek help from a higher power, because he is going to need it.
Date: 22/09/09 11:47 am
Okay, Jahki. You need to stop tripping, man, and fast. You are starting to creep even me out and I KNOW why you're acting so crazy. lol.
Thanks for another great update, Ajani.
Author's Response:
LOL
I find it kind of funny how a man who has always been able to control his emotions, could be so out of control when it comes to awoman.
Reviewer: Suprina Frazier Signed [Report This]Date: 22/09/09 11:43 am
OK Jahki has got to get himself under control, Angel is not his girlfriend, she is his employee, and if she was his girlfriend, he should be proud that other men find her attractive..... he just neeeds to tell her how he feels b4 he really loses control.
Author's Response: I agree with you on how Jahki should handle his feelings for Angel, but he will not risk anything when she has shown him nothing but attitude.
[Report This]Date: 22/09/09 11:34 am
Great update. Jahki really needs to get a hold of himself or he'll lose her before he even gets a chance.
Author's Response: He will and Angel better watch out! LOL
Date: 22/09/09 06:11 am
I really dont like the way Jahki is treating Angel. I hope he gets a grip on himself.
Author's Response: He will just as soon as he can control himself while in her presence
Date: 22/09/09 06:03 am
Tomorrow will be a better day. Tell him you're in school and tell her you're interested in her. Thanks for another update.
Author's Response: This position does not leave room for Angel to really go to school. If he was not in such a bad mood she probably would have had to stay there much longer and missing classes.
[Report This]Date: 22/09/09 05:32 am
Just tell her how you feel and start things slow. He's going to make himself crazy.
Author's Response: You will have to wait and see how he handles things.
[Report This]Date: 22/09/09 03:21 am
yeah he a very weird man lol but she figer out soon enought mr werdio wanted her lol. i suprise he didn't kick the guys ass that been fun. love the story girl and thanks for the updated.
Author's Response: He did not kick his ass because he had to remember that Angel was not officially his yet!
[Report This]Date: 22/09/09 03:17 am
I saw this story and decided to give it a try, and I'm glad that I did, I like what I have read so far.... I know that Jahki is Angel's boss, and that means hands off, but does he really have to be a TOOL... I have a feeling that the drama with these two is just beginning.
Author's Response:
Thanks for giving my story a try and I glad you like what you read so far.
Yes, the drama is just beginning. LOL
Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous [Report This]Date: 20/09/09 11:46 pm
okay. i love the update but he is a jackass.
Author's Response:
LOL
Thanks for loving the story!
Reviewer: darlene433 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 19/09/09 03:41 pm
I wanna see pics of them! :D Hurry write more please!
Author's Response: I was having trouble loading them when I first started the story. I will try again today! Posting Later!
Date: 18/09/09 07:30 am
Loved the update. Why is he being so mean to her??? He could get his point across without being a jerk. I hope she can make it work with school as she seems so worried about it. I hope she doesn't have to drop out.
Author's Response: He is frustrated with himself and he is taking it out on her. He has never really been in this type of situation before. As for Angel dilemma you will have to wait and see.
Date: 18/09/09 06:23 am
hurry write more................................... like tonight please
Author's Response:
I will be posting later!
Reviewer: lis Anonymous [Report This]Date: 18/09/09 01:21 am
Wow Jahki having the hots for Angel is making him act like an ass LOL!!! This is getting really interesting, look forward to more.
Author's Response: Yes, he is! Stay tuned I am about to make a ROYAL ASS!
[Report This]Date: 18/09/09 01:04 am
Oh, Jahki. You are going about this the wrong way, man. It's gonna be your own fault if Angel starts hating you.
Thanks, Ajani, for another good post.
Author's Response: Yes he is going about it the wrong way. The wuestion is will he beable to redeem himself or dig himself deeper? Reviewer: Suprina Frazier Signed [Report This]
Date: 17/09/09 10:29 pm
Jahki is being rather ruthless about the whole thing.
Author's Response: He sure is! I wonder if it going to get better or worst.
Date: 17/09/09 09:18 pm
At the rate he's going she's going to hate him in the end. A bit to agressive to me, why not just talk to her. Great update!!
Author's Response: Remember that he is her boss and that if she does not like his advances then she could call sexual harassment. He is fighting his attraction to her and it is making him act like a butt. LOL Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed
[Report This]Date: 17/09/09 07:28 pm
well dam i guess no don't in any one mind he wanted her and nothing going to get in his way lol. it cute how one mintue she wanted him and the next she wanted to slap the hell out of him lol but who can blame her lol. i like the story girl and thanks for the updated.
Author's Response: They both have a long way to go. It is going to be an up hill battle between these two. LOL
[Report This]Date: 17/09/09 07:27 pm
omg! i loved it! please hurry and write more.
Author's Response: I am glad that you are loving it and want more. Will be posting more later.
[Report This]Date: 17/09/09 03:20 am
this is way good
Author's Response: Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 16/09/09 02:49 pm
this is a very exciting chapter, i love the part of him saving her from joe blow.
Author's Response: That was funnyB
[Report This]Date: 16/09/09 02:37 pm
good job
Author's Response: Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 16/09/09 02:24 pm
chapter really pulls you into the story, which made me eager to see what would happen next
Author's Response: Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 16/09/09 02:16 pm