Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Yes, I can't wait either!
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed
[Report This]Date: 03/09/09 09:15 pm
Good start.
Author's Response: Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 03/09/09 09:09 pm
seem like a good story so far
Author's Response:
For my first story I think I am doing great! I hope you continue to read it and give your input. Thanks!
Reviewer: loveisreading Anonymous [Report This]Date: 03/09/09 06:39 pm
Good update. More, More, More and soon please. Pretty please!
Author's Response:
More to come!
Reviewer: jjazz59 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 03/09/09 04:54 pm
OH! It is coming along quiet nicely. More please I am enjoying it.
Angel finally got a job and it sounds like one she is truly going to enjoy and thribe in. The mysterious stranger that almost hit her has been thinking about her as well. I can't wait till they met up again.
Thanks for the update.
Author's Response: I am happy that you are enjoy the story. Yes, they will meet again. Reviewer: Thundakat Signed
[Report This]Date: 03/09/09 09:35 am
Hmmm, wonder if this is her mystery man??? Loved the update.
Author's Response: I wonder too!
Date: 03/09/09 06:18 am
wow orgasms in her sleep wow he must be a very hot man lol . It good she found a job it be crazy that her new boss can be the man she saw that invads her dreams. like the story and keep up with the work. thanks for the updated.
Author's Response:
That was just funny! LOL
A lot of things will be happening for and to Angel very soon!
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 03/09/09 05:59 am
that good that the woman going to let her stay there most land lords would kick people out on the street. Angel i like that name it sound nice.
Author's Response: Yes, Mrs. Nevells is a god sent.
[Report This]Date: 03/09/09 05:55 am
It's promising. Angel and her plight sucked me right in, so I can't wait to see what happens with her.
Author's Response: Stay tuned because it is going to get HOT!
Date: 03/09/09 05:29 am
*chuckle* Is this love at first sight? Or lust at first sight? Maybe a little of both? LOL!
Thanks for updating so fast.
Author's Response:
I wonder..............
I think its both. LOL
Reviewer: Suprina Frazier Signed [Report This]Date: 03/09/09 04:43 am
So Angel will be working for her dream man huh!!! This should be interesting to see what happens. Keep it cominig
Author's Response:
Yes, she will be working for him and it will be very interesting.
Reviewer: PAW Anonymous [Report This]Date: 03/09/09 03:55 am
Loved the update. She's about to meeet her mystery man!
Author's Response:
Yes, she is about to meet him.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous [Report This]Date: 03/09/09 03:33 am
I love the story cant wait for your next update.
Author's Response: I am happy that you are loving the story. Keep on reading it is going to be interesting. Lol
[Report This]Date: 03/09/09 03:18 am
Hey Paula,
Prina sent me over this way and I love how this story starts...I will be checking back often.
Author's Response: Thank you for checking in and I hope you like it. Reviewer: SoulMatters38 Signed
[Report This]Date: 03/09/09 12:39 am
Great start. Please continue.
Author's Response: Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 03/09/09 12:02 am
Me likey.
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope you continue to feel that way.
Date: 02/09/09 09:54 pm
Hey I just received an e-mail from Suprina saying to check you out a new author, but of course I had already read your story. Good luck on your first story!!
Author's Response:
Because of Suprina I have the courage to put my story on this site.
Thanks for the support!
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: 02/09/09 08:21 pm
Well done sis! Can't wait to find out whats going to happened next......
Author's Response: Thanks for the support sis!
[Report This]Date: 02/09/09 06:18 pm
When she finds that benefactor I hope she doesn't forget Mrs Nevells kindness. I think I'm going to Love Angel. Great beginning! I look forward to reading it!!
Author's Response:
You will have to wait and see!
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: 02/09/09 03:52 pm
Good start to the story. Looking forward to reading more. Thanks
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed
[Report This]Date: 02/09/09 01:27 pm
Thank you for responding to my review I always love it when the authors interact with the readers. Yes, I will definitely be continue reading this story and I know I will enjoy it. I apologize for critiquing your work when in my review I noticed I made some mistakes of my own.
Happy writing and please continue I can't wait for your next update. :D
Author's Response:
Critique is good because it will help me improve while writing this story or any other that I attempt in the future.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 02/09/09 12:36 pm
Can't wait for more, Please update soon.
Author's Response: More to come!
[Report This]Date: 02/09/09 12:29 pm
That was a pretty good start. I was confused though a bit. Some of what Angel said was in italic does that mean she was talking to herself in thought or did she say those things out loud cause Mrs. Nevells responded to her.
Also in the beginning you had the same thought in the first two sentences but worded differently.
Again nice start I am interested in seeing what you have to come for this story so will be looking out for you next updates. I hope they will be coming soon. Also congrats on starting you first story here I am sure you will be preceived well.
Author's Response:
I will go back over it and make sure I make those corrections. Thank you very much for your honesty regarding my work. I hope you continue to like it as the story goes on.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 02/09/09 12:04 pm
First of all, major kudos to you for being brave enough to share your talents with the world. That first story is always the scariest to share because you don't know how it will be received.
Well, here's what I think of your first try. I LOVE it!
1. I love the fact that the title is a play on the heroine's first name and the hero's last name. Very creative.
2. I also love how you gave Angel someone in her corner from the jump. Struggling college students need those.
3. Lastly, I love how nice Angel seems. I am worried about her possibly being corrupted though if her wish for a wonderful (and I assume 'wealthy') benefactor comes true.
Good job! Keep 'em coming, Ajani.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much Suprina!
I am nervous about it but I will continue until the end and hopefully others will like it also.
Reviewer: Suprina Frazier Signed [Report This]Date: 02/09/09 09:21 am