I need to find me a man like Jake, he's hot. Stephanie this was an awesome short story.
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 10/10/10 10:56 pm
Short and to the point, me likey lol. Nice work!
Author's Response: Thanks Elle!
Date: 16/09/09 01:29 am
Wow, that hot, dirty, flirty Sexay. This was just perfect. I like the forbidden once in awhile. Don't think. Do!
Author's Response: Thanks jjazz59! That was exactly my idea behind the short story. Glad you liked it!
Date: 14/09/09 10:17 pm
I love your writing style...so descriptive...
Yeah, that was definitely hot and no beating around the bush with these two...hope they don't do these kind of clandestine meetings often...could be bad for your health in this day and age...if one suspends belief...this was awesome and so easy to get swept away in the sheer power of the moment...but what can I say...I guess I tend to overthink everything...and like I said...this makes great fantasy material...but in the real world...not so much...
Author's Response: You are so right. But that's what makes it fiction/fantasy right? It tends to be something you wouldn't do in real life. I also think that's what makes it so intriguing... Reviewer: attheritz Signed
[Report This]Date: 14/09/09 07:09 am
Ha! I loved it. Short, hot and sweet.
Author's Response: Thanks LadyOfSpring! That was exactly what it was meant to be. Glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 13/09/09 11:42 pm
Well I enjoyed it . It was short and to the point. :o)
Author's Response: Thanks PAW! I always love to hear your feedback!
[Report This]Date: 13/09/09 07:41 am
Interesting but I think they moved too fast for people who don't know each other.
Author's Response: Thanks for stopping by Baha_malo. You are correct in your assessment but this story was meant to be a short erotic tale, not the sensual romance I usually write so that is the reason I went in the direction that I did.
Date: 13/09/09 07:19 am
Tht was hot!!!! More please
Author's Response: Well I hate to disappoint PAW but this was a short so unfortunately that was the end. Glad you enjoyed it though.
[Report This]Date: 13/09/09 06:09 am
Wow! That was great.
Author's Response: Thanks! I appreciate the comment!
Date: 13/09/09 06:00 am