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Title: Cleopatra...Remember the TimeŠ

You have a really grat writing style.

Author's Response: Thanks.  I love your name.  Glad you liked the story.

Reviewer: Flicker and Sparkle Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/01/10 04:46 am

Title: Cleopatra...Remember the TimeŠ

I just thought about how very sad and tragic her love life has been. She deserves to live happily ever after with John.

Author's Response: Yes...she had a rough one Sweet Pea.  Thanks for reading. 

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/09/09 04:31 am

Title: Cleopatra...Remember the TimeŠ

This was different in the contaction between the present, past and future.  I am glad that Pat and John are finally together.  Thanks

Author's Response:

Yes.  I loved the movie.  I actually was inspired by the story of Antony and Cleopatra when I wrote the names for the first draft of the story "Denied".  I had already named "John" and it wasn't possible to undo...

When the challenge came I decided to bring it out of the archives.  Thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed! :-) 


Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/09/09 10:24 pm

Title: Cleopatra...Remember the TimeŠ

Enjoyed the one-shot. Happy they found their way back to each other.

Author's Response: Yes.  Thanks for reading bayoumomma. 

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/09/09 10:20 pm

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