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Title: Chapter 4

I'm sorry that I'm jsut getting around to commenting on this story, I have liked what I have read so far... Sammy/Farrah are kinda cute together and it seems that Jalin has taking an instant liking to Sammy.

It was great to see John/Pat and Brian/Nicole and the kids again.

I hope that Farrah and Jess can repair their relationship b/c Jess is no saint, isnt she sleeping with a married man (who IMO should be divorced) Jess needs to look in the mirror b4 she starts judging Farrah.



Author's Response: Jess lives in a glass house! Time has eroded her omniscent views and made her cold and desolate. Her issues will be covered. Sammy/Farrah are definitely attracted to each other. Jalin has bonded with Sammy. And I was glad to bring the original families here to give this one authenticity. They won't be around extensively. But Pat's relationship with Farrah makes her presence necessary, so she will be around. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/11/09 01:14 am

Title: Chapter 4

Loved the update. His family has really taken to Farrah and Jailan. Ms Gia really has her family in check. They also see abit more than Sammi and Farrah are willing to admit. Jailin and Sammi bonding was cute. 23It was really nice to see Farrah reunited with Pat. That was really sweet. I'm liking me some Sammi and Farrah. Hopefully Jessyca doesn't cause too much drama when she catches up with Farrah.

Author's Response: Gia runs shit for sure. Strong formidable woman. Farrah's reunion with Pat served to be the chaser. Jess has intent. You'll see as the story goes. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/11/09 12:26 am

Title: Chapter 4

Nice get together. Aviree wants her husband back after abandoning them. Great update!!



Author's Response: Aviree..definitely wants Quarto back. Thanks for reading. ;-)

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/11/09 10:21 pm

Title: Chapter 3 - Reposted!

This is progressing nicely.  Sammy is soooo interested and so is Farah and Jalin. LOL. 

Looking forward to the next Update.

Nyeesha



Author's Response: Thanks for catching up Nyeesha. I'm glad you are enjoying.

Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/10/09 09:41 am

Title: Chapter 3 - Reposted!

Thanks for a great update.  To bad Jessyca has lost her damn mind.  She needs to take a step back and stop being a noisy parker and stay out of folks business trying to control everything.  Sammy and Farrah are cute together.  I can't wait to be reconciled with Pat, this will be great for both of them.  What will Farrah say when she finds out that Sammy owns the auto repair shop?  I really hope that she will take it in stride and not want to date him.  Thanks

Author's Response: Thanks for reading. Sammy and Farrah are cute...he's very much in control of his life, and how he communicates with her. He has his reasons as to why he's playing the cards close on his 'business'. I'd say he's road testing her. He's very impressed with her. You'll have to tune in to see her response to the 'truth'. I can say that this story is going to go for a lot longer than I predicted. But it will be worth it.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/10/09 12:51 am

Title: Chapter 3 - Reposted!

Glad you re-posted.  Thank you for the update.  Can't wait for them to meet the family.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading. The party is almost on now!

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/10/09 11:10 pm

Title: Chapter 3 - Reposted!

Loved the update. Please continue!!!!

Author's Response: More to come. Thanks for returning to catch the update.

Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/10/09 10:52 pm

Title: Chapter 3

I thought it was my connection, one minute I was reading it, the next it had disappeared.  Thanks for reposting.



Author's Response: I apologize for that inconvenience. I still have no clue what happened. But I'm glad you were able to finally catch the update!

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/10/09 09:27 pm

Title: Chapter 3 - Reposted!

Here I was getting all excited thinking you had already posted another chapter.



Author's Response: LOL...after the stress of the deletion...I'm hiding under the bed like it's a Ghost Tale!

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/10/09 05:27 pm

Title: Chapter 3

awe man no fair dont do that to me.....i was looking forward to this update....

 crying my eyes out over here....



Author's Response: I haven't a clue as to what happened to it.  I did post it...seriously!

Reviewer: Cma Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 15/10/09 03:49 pm

Title: Chapter 3

You know I have always liked the saying...People with glass houses shouldn't throw stones.  I guess Jessy is findng that out the hard way.  I understand that she wanted better for her children but she CANNOT run their lives.  She has to just be there and be their support system when things go wrong and have confidence in herself that she raised them right.  Apparently she has no faith in her parenting.

Sammy is so cute and has fallen for Farreh already sweet and she is close behind him.  

I can't wait til Pat and Far meet up at the barbeque.

I hope Jessyce get's her shyte together and get that chip off her shoulder and stop trying to run everyone else's life namely her children.  Her's doesn't sound exactly kosher.

Great update more please.  Thanks.



Author's Response: Thanks Thundakat...glad you caught the update...curious how you managed it LOL.  It vanished?  It's reposted any way!  Yes Sammy likes her.   She's geniune, pretty, determined.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/10/09 05:34 am

Title: Chapter 3

Huh..SparkApCider....I think you forgot to give us the Update to enjoy. LOL.

Nyeesha



Author's Response: Sorry Nyeesha...it disappeared.  It was up...honestly!  Check: 3-Reposted!

Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/10/09 04:14 am

Title: Chapter 3

Well where is the update?  Thanks

Author's Response: Sorry D'red it disappeared!  I reposted it in the new update. 

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/10/09 03:52 am

Title: Chapter 3

I am enjoying this story alot.  Looking forward to the family gathering.  I can really see this story going longer than 4-6 chapters.  There is alot to tell.  Hope to see another update real soon.  Thanks



Author's Response: Indeed meme...I don't see it either...LOL!  I tried to write a short...I'm failing miserably, even with the larger chapters than I usually write.   It could take 10, at minimum.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: meme Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 15/10/09 03:19 am

Title: Chapter 3

Hey Spark,

Great chapter!!

We learned more about Sammy and what he's looking for. He is a wise man to get his business going and hold out for the "right" woman and not just someone convenient for the order of his life and future. I also like that he has not been deterred by Jalin. Yes, Jalin will be Sammy's key to Farrah's heart, an aspect that more women should give greater importance in choosing a partner.

But is he holding out on telling Farrah that HE IS THE BOSS, because of what happened to his brother or he just hasn't really goten around to it? Or???

Oh good gracious, so planning and running her children's lives has not gone very well for Jessyca. Well, it's about to get even tougher. LOL.

I can't wait for the BBQ and the "meet the folks." I'm glad Farrah decided to go. Personally, I woulda caved to the horror of meeting so many relatives all at once!!

But like most family get togethers, I have a feeling that the drama will be as good as the BBQ. Can't wait to read more!! ;)

Keep those chapters coming!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks Blue...glad you caught the update before it vanished down some black hole.  LOL.

Yes...everything in Farrah's life revolves around Jalin.  She fears Jessyca...you'll see more of that.   Sammy and Jalin are fast buddies...and that comforts her.   She hasn't dated, really hadn't planned on it.   More to come on that regard as well...

Sammy hasn't told her...hmm...you'll see why, though you aren't far off from it!

Barbecue will be coming of course in the next chapter...getting her through that...and then it will roll out.

I expected it to be a short one...but I fear it could take a minimum of 10, even with these 4000 word plus updates.  

More ahead! 

 

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/10/09 02:45 am

Title: Chapter 3

Thank you for the update. I really like the direction this story is going. Love the interaction between Sammy and Jalin its so cute. Keep it coming its going to be another great one

Author's Response: Thanks PAW for reading.  I'm glad you enjoyed.   Sammy and Jalin are bonding fast.  I will continue, I'm having fun with this one.

Reviewer: PAW Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/10/09 01:06 am

Title: Chapter 3

Jessyca knows what she need to do to mend fences, so she start working on it or be a lnoely old woman. I can't wait to see how they respond to her at the get together. Loved the update.

Author's Response: Thanks bayoumomma...for reading.  Jessyca is in a funk...I'd say she pinned everything, all of her hopes and dreams, redemption too in Farrah, and it's falling apart, so she thinks.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/10/09 09:56 pm

Title: Chapter 2

I think I'm anxiously awaiting and more excited for the Labor Day holiday than anyone else is.  Farrah better not let Finola change her mind. :)

Author's Response: Thanks for reading Vie.  I am working on an update.  I holiday will flesh out more cast and mitigate the thrust of the story.  I hope you enjoy it!

Reviewer: Vie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/10/09 01:55 am

Title: Chapter 2

*clapping* YAY!!! Great update. I am glad that she decided to go.  I am sure her god mommy that is if Pat turned out to be Jess's children's god mommy will be there with her husband John and that Farrah is aware of the Santi this is just speculation on my part not solid.  And I wonder if her mom will be there too since she is best friends with a Santi.

I am loving this story and I so want more please.

Thanks



Author's Response: Pat is the god mother of Jess's kids. But...Farrah hasn't made the connection. Jess has been stonewalling. You'll see why.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/10/09 01:42 am

Title: Chapter 1

That was a wonderful start....I started reading this on TST but with VC they let you know when and update is in place so I came over here.

The characters you chose for Farrah and Finola are they related in real life they look so similar?  So who is to be Sammy's love interest Farrah or Finola...I'm I getting ahead of myself more the likely yes but hey I had to ask.

I am so happy that Sammy was able to get Fair to her gig in time.  She is so sweet and trying to make it with an 18 month old and doing it by herself shows much character and determination to she the nasayers they are wrong wrong wrong....I thought so sure that Jess would not be so judgmental since she herself had children young and she herself did not complete college cause she said it was not for her, but you always want better for you children so I guess I can understand her on that part.  Jalin father bet not come back in the picture when his hoop dream flop cause he is definitely a dog.  So will we be seeing any of Farrah and Finola's siblings from another mother like Quincey and Bristol?

Great start thank you for sharing can't wait for what you have next for us.



Author's Response: Yes I love TST, but it's hard to find updates...you really have to search for them...feverishly at times. That is why I try to make Table of Contents which link chapters. I will tell you this...there will be some details mentioned of Jess/Pat and it has to do with Farrah, and Pat's opinion about an action by Jessy. Quincy and Bristol have separate moms. Quincy was a 'cheat' and Bristol was after the divorce. They will make an introduction, along with 'Ricky'. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/10/09 01:04 am

Title: Chapter 2

I am really intrigued with this story.  I can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: TY letitia for reading...glad you are enjoying.

Reviewer: letitia Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/10/09 06:54 pm

Title: Chapter 2

I hope she goes to the picnic.  Another good chapter.



Author's Response: TY Jujubee for reading...glad you enjoyed this one. I aiming at a continuance weekly.

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/10/09 05:30 am

Title: Chapter 2

This was a nice introduction to more characters.  Giacinta sounds wonderful and she has her husband, sons, and grandsons wrapped around her finger....as it should be. LOL.

I think Farrah will like Sammy and his family.  And I think they will fall in love with her, particularly if Sammy is interested. 

Please give us more SOOOOOOON

Nyeesha



Author's Response: Wow...Nyeesha, you got Gia figured. The Santi family has an immense capacity to love.

Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/10/09 05:23 am

Title: Chapter 1

Really good start.

Author's Response: Thanks Jujubee! I'm glad you're enjoying it. ;-)

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/10/09 05:01 am

Title: Chapter 2

Great update!!  Farrah better go to the BBQ . Look forward to  the chase between Sammy and Farrah.

Author's Response: Farrah has a natural adventure side inherited from her parents...but she has every naysayer buzzing about her head. Sammy and Farrah...let the adventures begin!

Reviewer: PAW Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/10/09 02:47 am

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