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Title: Sorbet and Candles

Whew, Hot!!!

loving it.

I told you, Garret is a punk ass under cover brother on the down low. He's just hitting Rachel to find out info on D

 

 



Author's Response: LOL... ya'll are funny thinking he's DL... LOL... Thank you for reading. 

Reviewer: Janetbd Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 14/01/10 01:32 am

Title: Sorbet and Candles

what hot dam boy know what he doing and loving it. he right that do need to let it go and move on but of course he still going to act like a kid. finaly glad these two are a couple now. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response: I'm glad you were happy with it... Thank you for reading

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/01/10 12:59 am

Title: Sorbet and Candles

TY for the freaky.

So Garrett smoke blunts. I like Gerald calling him on his bullshit. I have a feeling he is gay. He is always tryong to prove his manhood. (getting into fights and sleeping with anything in a skirt.) He kind of make me think he is on the DL.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked the freaky.  I guessed it was time.  Garrett is a trouble maker period... Gerald is a good ole country boy! 

Thank you for reading it! 

Reviewer: Dimples Signed [Report This]
Date: 13/01/10 11:29 pm

Title: Sorbet and Candles

Loved it. Garrett needs to be taken down, like now. He's a menace!!!  I hope Rachel sees through his front before its too late. Wow, Kendra and D were hawt!!!! They need to watch their back though. Can't wait to see how they handle their relationship from here.

Author's Response: I'm anxious to see what they do too from here.  They got it bad for each other... Garrett, is horrible and I don't know how to get rid of him.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/01/10 11:26 pm

Title: Haters everywhere you go

OMG! The haters are making my ass ache.  I knew it was Garret fairy ass that had someone in the Key West taking pictures of them.

I am glad Breanna was able to get the result and let her in on what was going on with the cream.  I hope Donovan drug test does not come up anytime soon and they are able to flush the toxic out of his system but that is hoping to much huh. Ken should tell Don though this is his tool for work that David has been messing with.

I can't wait til Garrett and David get their's and get it good.  I knew Rachel had told that fool where Ken and Don were @ she can't hold water I know it was not in malice but damn somethings u shouldn't tell everybody and Ken has been telling her that she can't be dating the players because of her job status.  Plus ewww nasty she sleeping wit that dickhead you just can't be sleeping with anybody and everybody either so even though her feeling gon be hurt (maybe) when she finds out that Garrett used her I ain't feeling sorry for her love Rachel like a step-sister but she talks too much.

Great update I hope to get another one soon.

Thank You DS1!



Author's Response:

Yep, Garrett is a total tool! 

Kendra is scared to tell Donovan...

Rachel, is well don't we all have a friend like that...

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/01/10 10:13 pm

Title: Haters everywhere you go

WHat is up with Garrett and David?  They both need a psych eval.  Hopefully they'll both get their own in the end.  I'm glad Kendra started thinking.

Author's Response:

Narcissism syndrome...Kendra had to grow up.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 13/01/10 04:26 am

Title: Haters everywhere you go

David is evil and Garrett is jealous!!  She should Donovan what she found out, so that they both can be prepared.  IF she doesn't tell him he will be so angry and hurt.  Have I said that I love this story!

Author's Response: David is evil and Garret is jealous.  She will break it down to Donovan soon.  Thanks for reading and loving this story.

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 13/01/10 03:50 am

Title: Haters everywhere you go

Lawd it is a bunch of haters on that team. They obviously need their own life cause they are all up into Kenya's and Donovan.

I am soooo glad she found out about the steriods and hope and pray she gets David caught up in his own little web of lies. He is a pervert. One minute lustiing after my girl and then the next minute wanting her barred from the lockerroom for life..what an idiot!

Ok the pictures of them kissing will probably cost Kenya a job but may push her in to Donovan's arms...we will see!!!

Great job sweetie..this story just gets better and better and better!!



Author's Response:

Haters exsist everywhere... She may lose her job, but bigger things may happen.

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/01/10 03:02 am

Title: Haters everywhere you go

I am so enjoying this story.  I can hardly wait to see how this story plays out, the steroid use, the forbidden romance, so much packed into one story.  I eagerly await your next update.

A.



Author's Response: Arabelle, thank you for reading and reviewing and enjoying it.

Reviewer: Arabelle Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 13/01/10 02:37 am

Title: Haters everywhere you go

Loved the update. Garrett is acting childish. Such a shame that he's trying to ruin someone's life for spite. They did nothing to him. Hope Gerald calls him on his sh*t and report him. Garrett's so petty. I hope Kendra's friend figures out that he's using her for information about Kendra. I can't wait until David goes down. Trying to injure Donovan to get to Kendra was low down and dangerous. He should know better.

Author's Response: Garret is horrible isn't he? David will be going down.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/01/10 01:59 am

Title: Haters everywhere you go

Garrett is such an ...

D and K got trouble from all sides but they will figure it out hopefully together.  Thanks for the update.

David is a dirty old man.



Author's Response: David is icky... Garrett is a jerk and those two will work it out!

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/01/10 01:08 am

Title: Haters everywhere you go

I knew that it was that hater Garret.

I bet his ass is gay as well.

My girl better make sure she has bases covered before she goes A-Team on David ass.

Great update.



Author's Response: Thanks and she's working on a plan now.

Reviewer: Janetbd Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 13/01/10 12:31 am

Title: Haters everywhere you go

omg that trainer and that football player are some hatters for real.  I can't wait to someone bust them for messing with my D . like the story girl and too cute how they were texting each other lol. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/01/10 11:38 pm

Title: Haters everywhere you go

Garret sorry you are acting gay. get over yourself. I hope Gerald turn his stalker friend in because he his acting a little on the crazy side.

Her friend should have kept her mouth closed on where they went over the weekend. Because, I think Kendra told her what went down with Garret and Don.

Please Let them bust David before he set her up. Kendra really need to tell Don about that cream tonight because Don is series about his body sense it is his job. I knew David had a thing for Kendra not only is she smart, pretty, I think he feels threaten by Kendra. 



Author's Response: Rachel is gonna get hers.  Garrett is a jerk... and I'm trying to work on something gooood for David..

Reviewer: Dimples Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/01/10 11:02 pm

Title: Haters everywhere you go

Haters!! How stupid can David be, he gave her the cream and she told D and her friend. He is so worried about getting her out of the locker room, but he fails to understand what the cream being in D's body could do to him. Garret is a punk, let it go! Great update!!

Author's Response: Thanks, ma'am!

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/01/10 10:43 pm

Title: Sailing

How can you not fall in love with sweet, sexy Donovan. He respects her, treats her like the lady she is.  A true gentleman. I likey, I likey a lot.  I also like Kendra’s unassuming, straightforward manner.  Their unhurried progression into a real relationship is a nice touch as well.  They complement one another perfectly.

Can’t wait to see who’s taking pics and why and…how they dodge or handle allegations of possible steroid use.

Nice job. Thanks for the update.

Author's Response: Thanks JV.  I've been busy working today so I'm not sure if I'm going to be able to update today. Thanks for reading...

Reviewer: JV4ME Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 06/01/10 08:39 pm

Title: Sailing

Ahhh! That was so sweet. 

I hate that a storm is coming I hope it is not too rough but I guess all couples have to have their trials and tribs.

I can't wait til Ken gets the results back on that cream.

I am glad she did that so that when the storm hits she can have proof that she had it analyzed and I am glad she is going with her gut on it.

Though I know she did not want to worry Don-Don I think she should have told him what she suspected or what she did.

Girl this story is so good, sweet, romantic...Don-Don is the G.

Thank you!



Author's Response: THe storm is definitely coming soon.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/01/10 09:26 am

Title: Dancing

There whole date was so romantic and sweet and it sounded so fun. 

Don-Don was afraid of butterflies when he was a boy I wonder if he grew out of it.  Ken did not try to bring it up close to him and I don't think he was saying the butterfly was beautiful when she said it was gorgous :D  I'm just saying.

I love this couple and Rachel is going out with Garrett huh does baby girl have no standards other then a football player and rich gee whiz.

I wonder who is having pictures taken of them it has to be btwn Garrett and David I think it is Garrett b/c he is going out with Rachel and she has the tendency to talk too freaking much...and her not knowing that Garrett doesn't like Don well there you have it.  He only probably asked her out just so he could find out what Ken was up to and see if she was with Don.  

DAMN! DAMN! DAMN!

Great update as always can't wait for more



Author's Response:

More will be coming today.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/01/10 09:13 am

Title: Sailing

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

That was so romantic can't get enough of D



Author's Response: Thanks Cherry!

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/01/10 02:11 am

Title: Sailing

Darn that Donovan, he is pouring it in big time. I think he has my girl all wrapped up tight.He has been a gentleman, somewhat sexy, romatic and generous. He has told her exactly what he is looking for and why he feels it is her. He has respecteed her enough to take it slow which is admiral. Yeah I think he is a keeper and I think Kenya realizes that too. Things are going too well though, something is bound to happen..we will see!!I know they are establishing a good foundation so things may turn out just fine..fingers crossed!!

I cannot wait till they get the lab results back...wonder what they will do with the information!! 

 



Author's Response: Thank you Nene... information will be coming soon.

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/01/10 02:07 am

Title: Dancing

Very sweet and romantic. I love that Mr. Donovan stayed true to his word and was a perfect gentleman. I think my girl was very impressed as she should be...I think taking it slow ia a good idea though it seems someone has found them.

 I hope whoever it is taking their pictures does not plaster it all over the papers and get my girl in trouble.

Excellen updt sweetie..you are rocking it!!



Author's Response: You know we gotta have some drama

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/01/10 01:54 am

Title: Sailing

wow i feel in love with that man to myself lol. he such a good guy listen to her taking care of her and taking it slow. im glad she giving him a change and can't wait to see finds out what in the cream. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response: Thanks and you know you're already in love with him... LOL

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/01/10 01:19 am

Title: Sailing

That was really sweet...so they're both ready to take that leap of faith and pursue a relationship...but for Kendra's sake...Donovan agrees to keep it in the closet for now...it never ceases to amazes me how much of a good guy he really is...okay...confession time...I always knew he was a good guy...just didn't want him coming in between my chosen couple of Taylor and Matt...*drops head in shame*, LOL...but I'm his number one cheerleader now and I want him to get the girl...Kendra is his destiny...

Thanks for the update...looking forward to more...



Author's Response: Taylor and Matt are my all time faves. Matt is based off of a real live person well, about 65% off him. Anyhoo, Donovan is a good guy!

Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/01/10 11:47 pm

Title: Sailing

Oh man...such a sweet chapter. BOO the haters who are trying to stop them before they start. I love a man who respects what his woman does for a living and wants her to be happy doing it. Can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks for the update.

Author's Response: Thanks lady!  You guys make my day for reading it...

Reviewer: kellyklue Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/01/10 11:06 pm

Title: Sailing

David and Garrett are determined to ruin both Donovan and Kendra. David did something to that cream and I bet if it is tested for steroids he will put the blame on Kendra. Garrett probably hired some slick ass photographer to spy on them and have their contracts revoked. I wish Donovan would beat the hell out of Garrett



Author's Response: Hmm, good idea... Donovan beating Garrett, note to self... Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: jai03 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/01/10 10:20 pm

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