Awesome! I'm liking it more and more. Glad Kendra told Donovan about the cream, it will probably help later on. Glad Kendra and Donovan are coming to an understanding of sorts.

Wonderful! All I can say.

thanks very much. i loove this story so much.

Author's Response: Thanks Darlene for reading it. 

So sweet. His career is going to be ruined because of the steroid cream. Wonderful update!!

Author's Response: I believe in Happily Ever afters around here... LOL... we will not ruin his career....

Loved it but I'm sure that photo is gonna cause some trouble for them somehow. Glad she sent the cream off to her friend. Hope she and Donovan continue to bond.

Author's Response: The photos will add some excitement and she and Donovan are finally coming to an undrstanding.

Why some nosey person always gotta be snooping. 

Thanks for the update.

I've been thoroughly enjoying this story so far, especially Donovan's persistance and old-fashioned charm. Now I'm a bit worried about who's taking those photos - was someone tipped off that Donovan would be there? Are the photos going to be splashed across all the tabloids or used for more nefarious purposes?

Author's Response: I'm glad that you are enjoying it so far.  The next two chapters will address the photos...

Is it that darn trainer have someone following them to take pictures or is it his salty teammate that has someone taking pictures. Either way they both have ill intent on their minds with those pictures.

Trainer to get her fired. The teammate expose their relationship and hasel Don but the blow back will get Kenda fired or he will try and blackmail her into not seeing Don again.

I am glad that cream has went out to get test. Good looking out girl. I just hope it gets the results before Don has to get a drug test.   

TY for the update.

Don't tell me that was the paparazzi...or maybe someone David hired to get some more ammunition to use against Kendra...bet those pictures are going to come back to haunt both Kendra and Donovan...I hope Kendra gets those test results before those pictures come out...I also hope she disclosed to Breana that David gave her that cream to use on Donovan...because knowing David...he'll deny everything and place the blame squarely on Kendra's shoulders...

Key West sounds beautiful...hope to one day get a chance to visit...Kendra and Donovan are growing ever so closer and the fight is just about out of them...I love how Donovan is the perfect gentleman around Kendra...shows he was raised right and has the upmost respect for her...and that he doesn't want just a passing fling with her...but a real committment...

Thanks for the update, D...more, more please!!!

Loved the update. Hope she gets some answers back on the cream soon. Donovan needs to beware of that Garrett. Glad Kendra decided to give him a chance and went to Key West. Hopefully they do more bonding. 

Author's Response: The intent is to bond... Cream will be addressed soon

Me likey, D...

Glad Kendra's following her instincts and remembering David's suspicious behavior and having that cream independently tested...hopefully the affects on Donovan won't be too far-reaching...

Garrett...what is his problem...sounds like he's going to be trouble with a capital T...me suspect there's a whole lot of jealousy, envy, and resentment coming from that camp...is he so upset that he's being upstaged by the star rookie...watch your back D-man...

Rachel is a hoot...glad Kendra listened to her and decided to go on the road trip to Key West with Donovan...romantic setting...a weekend alone...getting to know each other better...sounds like a recipe for a little naughty *wink, wink*

Love the restraint that Donovan's showing...and Kendra's not blind to his charms and softening toward him...as if she wasn't feeling him already...can't wait to read more...

Thanks for the update...on pins and needles looking forward to what happens next...

Great update I have missed Don and Ken...

I am happy to see that Ken is trying to open up to Don...

David I just want to hit him in the head with a bottle.  I wish Ken could read people a little bit better then she has been. With the sweating on his forehead when she asked for the ingrediants in the cream.  The attitude he gave her and all that.

I hope he gets what is coming from him and I hope that Don does not suffer any long term effects after using the cream.  He is pretty healthy and he takes good care of his tool his body so maybe that will be a bonus.

Thank you for the update!

Happy New Year!

Thank you for the update....Great Writing...

Garrett is going to be trouble I would not be suprise if he is the one that tell everybody about D and Kendra.

Then they the issue of the cream hanging over Kendra head..

I love the chemistry between D and Kendra I love it.

Garrett is just salty. He ain't getting interviews after the games and Don is going to get Kendra. I hope Don keep his eye out because Garrett is going to try something maybe not today maybe at the end of the season.

I am glad she is giving Don a chance and I am real happy she is going to have that cream test. I hope she sent it out before she left because I don't want her to forget and then have it come back and bite he on the @$$. I think the head trainer will try to wait until the end of the season to try something, because he want the team to win and if it is after the season the team owner and coach won't report it or make him sit out. It will also give Kendra time to get that stuff out of his system.