I'm definitely in like with these two.  They're just too cute.

Author's Response: Thank you.

wow ok like her friend said i would had jump on that man qucker then you can say hello lol.  i like he slowing things down and not trying to hard with her. glad she going to send it to her girl to get it test  the cream and hated that guy who trying to mess with D. love the story and thanks for the updated.

Author's Response: Thanks!  Happy new years

I love Kendra and Donovan story.

I hope that Kendra listen to her intuition and check out the cream that her boss David the dirtbag gave her.

Loved the update. Glad Kendra put David on the spot about the cream he gave her. I hope she decides to find out the ingredients of the cream. Still loving me some Donovan. Dani and Chad make a cute couple.

Author's Response: Thanks for still reading and I appreciate your review!  Thanks!

good update.  I like that D took a step back and is romancing Kendra.  Can't wait for next post.

Author's Response: Thank you lady!  I hope to post soon!

I really like this story but could you try to develop the plot b/w D&K and post more often, before telling Dani and Chad's story.

I was disappointed that the update on Donovan and Kendra was so brief. It seems to me that their relationship hasn't progressed at all. I know that Kendra wants to take things slow but I don't think that you get the sense of why she is feeling Donovan but fighting it. I guess with each update I am looking forward to more interaction and deep meaningful conversation between the two. For instance in the last paragraph you wrote "Donovan listened to her as she talked and opened up.  He was hopeful that she would feel comfortable with him and allow him to treat her like the queen he had been looking for."  What did Kendra reveal? what was Donovan's reaction? Did he fall for her just a little bit more upon hearing what she had to say?

I look forward to reading more of this story; thanks for the update.

i loved the update. i can't wait for donovan and kendra to get together. i think that they are such a cute couple.

Author's Response: Thank you ma'am!  I appreciate you taking the time to read it!  :)

Thanks for the update, D...

I loved the A Bronx Tale reference...one of my favorite movies BTW...Dani and Chad are so cute together...trying to hide there feelings from one another...but uh-oh...trouble looms ahead...Kerrington in the same restaurant they're sharing a meal after work hours...and the no-fraternization clause in their contracts...wonder how they get out of this one...

I can't stand David...he is just plain evil...I bet there is some type of illegal substance in that cream...and Kendra will take the fall when it comes to light that she has been using it on Donovan...David will play dumb...and Kendra career will be in ruins...Donovan will probably face some type of suspension from the league...will he blame Kendra for it...how will it affect their budding relationship...

The picnic at the beach was great...so romantic...glad Donovan started to slow it down a bit in his pursuit...yeah, he's found a good thing...just sit back and watch her come to him...

Loved it as always...until next time...later...

I hope you're feeling better. Thanks for this update! I literally shouted 'No, don't use it!' when Kendra picked up that nefarious cream. If it's a topical steroid and she uses it only once, it shouldn't be picked up on a drug screen but if she keeps using it on Donovan, both their careers could be finished! I hope Donovan has an allergic reaction or something, or Kendra gets wise to the head trainer's machinations. Great update!

Author's Response: Thanks lady. I'm trying to figure out in my head which way to go with the cream.

Glad you are back sweetie..I hope you are feeling better!

I love these two's innocent sexuality. They are so hawt for each other that trying to avoid each other is making it worse. I think these massages just might lead to something neither is ready for just yet!!

That creme mixture is trouble..I am hoping they find out about it before it is too late!

Great job sweetie..I cannot wait for more!!

I loved the update. I think Kendra and D really make a cute couple. I hope she does check into the ingredients of the cream before the caoch puts his plan into action.

Author's Response: I think she will step it up. Thanks for loving them.

Oh, snap she used the cream that the evil man gave her.  SHe is going to loose her job!!!  I can't wait for the update.

Author's Response: She had to use it. But it won't be as bad as we think.

Wonderful update. We have another couple you're adding to the stroy. I'm excited to read about them. What her stupid boss doesn't realize is that this could affect Donovan's performance on the field as well as hurt him physically. It makes no sense to try and teach her a lesson at the expense of their star player. I hope she takes that stuff and gets it analyzed since he didn't have a label on it. That should have been a warning sign for her not to use it since she has no idea what is in it.