i miss this story please update.
Author's Response: i've been really sick. i'm sorry for the delay
Date: 28/11/09 04:42 am
oooooooooo i just love how D man went all cave man on for his woman. i so hated the other trainer i hope she doesn't use the cream on him or find out that he set her up love the story and thanks for the updated.
Author's Response: thanks. David does leave alot to be desired right?
[Report This]Date: 07/11/09 04:06 am
Girl, I LOVE that he loves some chocolate sistahs! I know you have more chapters but I had to just say that...I'm off to read the rest! Great job D :)
Author's Response: thanks girl...
[Report This]Date: 07/11/09 03:59 am
Ok I knew David was up to something , so he would ruin Donovan's career just to get rid on Kendra...he would willfully ruin two young people's lives out of jealousy..that is very sad!! I hope he does not get away with it...he neds to get found out and quick!!
Garrett and Donovan about to get a show down and it will be good..let's hope it happens on teh playing feild!
Great job sweetie...this one keeps getting better with each new revelation...loving it!!
Author's Response: Thanks Nene... Reviewer: neneburge Signed
[Report This]Date: 07/11/09 03:29 am
Our little Kendra all flustered by he handsome football star..rotfl..I don't blame her..but good for her standing her ground..he does not need to get it that easy...make him work for it and he will appreciate her more!!
I would have stayed with him but I am a sap for lonely handsome rich men..rotfl!!
OK men gossip more than women so I guess the other players will talking about the new couple...hope they can come up with a credible story for her being there...
Author's Response: you are such a good reader! love you! Reviewer: neneburge Signed
[Report This]Date: 07/11/09 03:14 am
I'm not liking David, not liking Garrett, and most importantly I'm not liking Donovan either. I think he could ease up on pushing so hard and be a little more respectful of Kendra's career aspirations. She's young, just starting out, and has a long career ahead of her. Any mess that goes down, she will be the first one to go, not David, not Garrett, and not Donovan. I think for Kendra's sake he could make more of an effort to keep thing's low key. And that testosterone-filled challenge with Garrett, not cool.
Author's Response: thanks for your review. Sorry you don't like any of this! Its how its coming out of my head. I appreciate your review and will definitely take some of your suggestions to heart.
[Report This]Date: 07/11/09 02:52 am
I am not liking David and I hope that Kendra goes with her gut on the cream that David gave her to use on Donovan. David needs to feel pain, and soon.
Author's Response: more action coming soon.
Date: 07/11/09 02:35 am
See now, I dont to wishy-washy chicks! She told the man no and that she wanted to go home, so he took her. Then she gets disappointed because he didn't press the issue? Come on now Kendra, I had you pegged better than that.
I do hope she has enough good sense not to put that cream on Donovan without checking it out first. If its something she didn't pick out herself, and gives her no substantial information about what it is, she shouldn't be putting on him anyway.
Garret...take him out Donovan!
Author's Response: Yeah, i know that was kinda wishy washy, but think about it, he'd been all over her and for him to speed off not even caring was like a slap in the face to her. Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/09 02:29 am
I just knew that shady as David was up to something.
I can't stand his ass. I hope Kendra does not use the cream and continues to be wary of him. He just mad cause she is doing well in her chosen profession and alot of the men especially Donovan are interested in her.
He would be messing up two people's careers Donovan's and Kendra all because he think that women should stay @ home babefoot and pregnant being weak docile and submissive.
Please Please Please Kendra don't use the cream girl. I hope someone steals it or she ask other trainers about the creams they are using or something but her not using it.
Author's Response: i think she will do her due dilligence before using the cream. Reviewer: Thundakat Signed
[Report This]Date: 07/11/09 02:27 am
OH Boy is on...Donovan is already staking his claim on Kendra,but he better slow hsi role big time.... but Kendra does need to loosen up just a little bit.
Garret is nothing but a boy pretending to be a man, you are not in HS anymore, its not about getting the girl b/c you play football, Garret needs to go after those groupies that hang around the players.
I knew David was a JERK and a chavinistic PIG... he also his a self hater b/c women never gave him the time a day, maybe b/c he is a TOOL.... and IMO needs to come out of the closet.... I hope Kendra doesn't use any of that cream on Donovan.
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 07/11/09 01:50 am
That sneaky bastard...and he's crazy too...playing with the team's star player's future and health just to prove his archaic point...I hope this backfires on him but good...gosh, I hate David...
I hate chauvinist...and he's a coward to boot...so he believes that women should be home barefoot and pregnant does he...is it 1959 or 2009...seriously...and poor Kendra...she's too busy trying to fend off Donovan's much wanted advances trying to prove to David and the others that she belongs there...she doesn't suspect a thing...
Can't wait until the next update...loving it!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading....and i love your reviews! Reviewer: attheritz Signed
[Report This]Date: 07/11/09 01:29 am
How stupid can DAvid be. He is willing to set her up to fail but at the expense of the star player on the team. I know Kendra isn't going to trust him. Great update
Author's Response: thank you
[Report This]Date: 07/11/09 12:58 am
Really loved this update. I feel for Donovan but Kendra has a point about trying to keep it professional even though she likes him alot. That coach David is a jerk. He's willing to hurt Donovan with steriods to get Kendra in trouble because he has a problem with women in the work place. How Sad!!! Garrett is acting like a bully and a jerk. What's his problem???? He needs a reality check but I don't want Donovan to get in trouble because of him. This is getting intense. Yes!!!!
Author's Response: thanks for your review!
Date: 07/11/09 12:15 am
Kendra has great self-control...I think these two are going to make a really cute couple! Great update!
Author's Response: Thanks Tammy...
[Report This]Date: 06/11/09 09:11 pm
i love this story and thanks for the update.
Author's Response: Thanks Darlene...
Date: 06/11/09 09:02 pm
Oh my Kendra is fighting it so hard and I can understand why they work together and it could cause complications and I just don't like her boss David he seems like a shady mo'fo to me.
I do think they are so cute together and Donovan is so out there with Ken he knows she is the one for him and he is so going after her no matter what anyone else says. And she is trying to keep it light not because of another man cause this man has her doing things she would not normally do but she keeps putting that factor in there that they work together and apparently there are folk out there that want to see her fail and I already think it's David.
Great update...can't wait for the next one please don't torture me with a long delay :D
Author's Response: Yeah TK, she's gotta fight it. She's worked too hard for her job. Equal rights and all that jazz! Donovan is really over the top. I think he's still pissed over how it ended with Taylor. That's my opinion though! Reviewer: Thundakat Signed
[Report This]Date: 06/11/09 06:13 am
well i dont' blame her for going home i proably jump the man my dam self lol. oo not good people saw them togehter but i know that kendra can stand up to them and that sexy donvan will look out for her thanks for the updated. ooo can't wait to family comes to visted.
Author's Response: The family is coming soon. Mama got come check on her baby!
[Report This]Date: 06/11/09 06:04 am
Trouble is on the horizon. Looking forward to the next update!!
Author's Response: it is brewing in my mental cauldron!
[Report This]Date: 06/11/09 01:39 am
Oh, this is getting soooo good!!!
Poor Kendra...her heart and mind are at war...and Donovan's laying on the gentlemanly charm thick...can Kendra resist...or will she take a chance on her heart...I hope she does...yes, girl...he really is real...lol...
I can't wait to Donovan's family to come for a visit...and I knew David had something sneaky under his sleeves...Kendra...watch your back girl...
Loving it, D...more, more please!!!
Author's Response: David is a sneaky bastard... Donovan knows what he wants and will get it this time! Reviewer: attheritz Signed
[Report This]Date: 06/11/09 01:29 am
Damn! Cant keep a secret from anybody!!
Author's Response: I know right. they too old to be sneaking around anyway!
Date: 06/11/09 01:20 am
I'm so loving this story. Kendra is really trying to keep it together. I fear the fall out from all those guys seeing them.
Author's Response: It's getting ready to get a little sticky for them...
Date: 06/11/09 12:32 am
i love this story. please update soon.
Author's Response: Updating today! Thanks for reading!
Date: 05/11/09 12:18 am
Great update, but too short. I like the closeness with Donovan and his mother... Rhonda was right Donovan needs to be careful how he goes about this with Kendra.
As for Kendra, she better be on Alert with David.
Author's Response: I promise 2000+ words for the next update... Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 29/10/09 03:42 am
thank you the update. i really enjoyed and i am looking forward to hearing more about donovan and kendra.
Author's Response: Thanks for enjoying it....
Date: 28/10/09 04:30 am
I wouldn't trust Dave either. He may be setting her up, he seems to have a problem with a woman being there. Great update
Author's Response: Thanks....
[Report This]Date: 28/10/09 03:33 am