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Title: Veggie Tales

Loved the update. They are sooo cute together. Donovan needs to listen to his mom and take things slow. Hope they continue to be careful around her boss.

Author's Response: thanks...

Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 28/10/09 03:10 am

Title: Veggie Tales

Loved Donavan's mom...some sage advice...especially after the fiasco with Taylor...and he has to be careful for the sake of Kendra's career...but Donovan's so sure he's found the one...I think he has too...

Can't wait to see what happens next...



Author's Response: thank you honey.

Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/10/09 02:25 am

Title: Veggie Tales

Ok now Donovan is going to have to head his mama's warning cause he will have his job no matter what..he is the star player but they will fire Kenya w/o a second thought!!

I don't blame her for being cautious. They will have to figure out how to make it work w/o her losing her dream job!!

BTW I don't trust David either..this could be a set up!!

Getting  more and more interesting sweetie..I cannot wait for more!!



Author's Response: Thanks Nene... I didn't want to be on the shoutout list! LOL

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/10/09 02:03 am

Title: Veggie Tales

Nice story. I like

Author's Response: Thanks for reading

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 28/10/09 01:45 am

Title: Veggie Tales

VEGGIES!! Gotta do better than that for grub now....lol! Love Donovan.

Author's Response:

You know all those muscles and all... he's a clean eater... BTW John Cena is a clean eater in real life... lots of Veggies, salads and protein shakes... that's how he stays in shape... YUMMY! 

You always liked Donovan.. thanks for reading...

Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: 28/10/09 01:44 am

Title: Veggie Tales

wow yeah god send that woman to him but like mom says take it slow if you rush you get your heart broken agian. like she doing thing that he like togehter. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response: Thanks yor for reading and reviewing... did I satisfy your need for family?

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/10/09 01:16 am

Title: Veggie Tales

*Clapping* Wonderful update...Donovan is so funny and he knows what and who he wants.

Yeah he knew Taylor was not his for real cause he didn't go this hard for her as he is for Ken.

More please...Thank You



Author's Response: I will be trying to update more this week. Glad that you are enjoying it....

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/10/09 12:51 am

Title: Your Personal Trainer

Well Well, its seems that Donovan is getting one on one time with Kendra like he wanted, I wonder how they will handle this situation.

David isn't fooling me one bit, he lookes down on Kendra b/c she's a woman invading a "Man's Domaine"  I have a feeling that this sexist pig is trying to set Kendra up to fail.



Author's Response:

I don't know how they are going to handle this, but I think its going to be a lot of sexual tension involved.

Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/10/09 08:33 pm

Title: Your Personal Trainer

this is a very cute story and i started reading it today. i love the characters and will wait patiently for an update.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading it and giving me a chance.  Did you read the prequel?

Reviewer: darlene433 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 25/10/09 04:34 am

Title: Allow me to reintroduce myself

i am loving this story.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: darlene433 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 25/10/09 04:02 am

Title: Your Personal Trainer

Sweeeeet...it looks like Donovan's prayers just keep getting answer left and right with Ms. Kendra :D I love it.

Great update. update again soon please



Author's Response: will do ma'am

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/10/09 09:52 pm

Title: Your Personal Trainer

Wait until David learns what he has REALLY done. LOL.

Nyeesha



Author's Response: i know right.....

Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 24/10/09 05:27 am

Title: Your Personal Trainer

Loved the update. They are being thrown together, there will be no way to avoid each other. It was more than just coffee!!



Author's Response: Yeah, but there has to be some angst in there somewhere... Yeah it was more than coffee... LOL

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/10/09 04:06 am

Title: Your Personal Trainer

Now why would David do that? I dont know about this but Donovan is really happy about it...lol!

 



Author's Response: David has ulterior motives.....

Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: 24/10/09 03:21 am

Title: Your Personal Trainer

I wonder if David is setting Kendra up or something..I a not sure about his intentions yet..he seems a little shaddy!

Kendra trying to play it non chalant with Donovan may be harder to do with her being his personal little trainer..rotfl!

I cannot wait for more..good job sweetie!



Author's Response: Thanks Nene... glad you're enjoying it.

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/10/09 03:05 am

Title: Your Personal Trainer

Yeah!! Loved it. I feel that David is setting up Kendra somehow.

Author's Response:

Get outta my head....lol

Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24/10/09 02:30 am

Title: Your Personal Trainer

hmmm i don't trust or like boss man.

Author's Response: thanks for reading. its gonna be made clear soon enough

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 24/10/09 02:15 am

Title: Your Personal Trainer

dam i supires she didnt jump that man looking good in that towel all wet dam now i'm getting hot thinking about it lol. Like she his personal trainer something tells me he wanted her to train all of his body parts lol. thanks for the updated. have question when is D family coming in the picture soon i hope.

Author's Response: his family will be showing up soon.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/10/09 01:45 am

Title: Your Personal Trainer

I almost thought David was going to turn out to be a chavinist...but he recognizes Kendra's merit...wonder why he decided to make her Donovan's personal trainer...what an interesting development...

My girl woke up with a smile on her face and late for her first day of work...all courtesy of the D man...the man has mad skills after just 'coffee'...Kendra's feeling Donovan too...but she has to walk a fine...she wants respect from her boss and the other trainers...so she'll have to watch her step...but knowing Donovan...that's going to be a pretty tall order...I know it's hard to earn respect in a male dominated career but I have faith in Kendra...

Getting good...more, more please!!!



Author's Response: Thsnk you. it's going to get better and motives will be made clear.

Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/10/09 01:30 am

Title: A kiss of Coffee

Awww, D, I'm loving me some Donovan...

I love how he's so confident that Kendra is the one...I love a man who knows what he wants and isn't afraid to go after it...that girl just don't know what she's in for...I also love that Donovan is so spiritual...he believes in God and he believes that He has sent him the woman he's supposed to be with...

I'm also so interested in Donovan's family...they seem very interesting...so his parents were foster parents...lots of love in that family...it takes some very special people to take in homeless/orphaned/emotionally and physically abused children nobody else wants and love them...I love how you're peeling back the layers to reveal just how fine a young man Donovan is (we all can see what a great physical specimen he is)...but he is a good man through and through...also love how much respect he has for his intended...though he wants her...he wants more than her body...he wants her heart...

Sorry for the late review...too tired last night to leave one...but please continue...love this story so much!!!



Author's Response: Thanks.  I appreciate the fact that you're good with the more layers of this guy.  I love my hero's.... I want you guys to love them too.

Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/10/09 02:58 am

Title: A kiss of Coffee

fantastic story. when can I get a next fix?  soon I hope.



Author's Response: I working on it now for you!  Trying to have it up by 3.

Reviewer: Janet Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/10/09 02:44 pm

Title: A kiss of Coffee

Donovan is my kind of man, can you send one just like him by fedex?

Author's Response: I wish I could package him up and send him off.  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 20/10/09 05:08 am

Title: A kiss of Coffee

Again I say......I LOVE THAT BOY!!!

Author's Response: glad you are approving! :)

Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: 20/10/09 04:36 am

Title: Miami Nightlife

Oh please send me a man like Donovan, he is so sweet, and the coffee and the beach and the kiss was romantic, Kendra doesn't know it but Donovan had already laid his claim to her.

Btw D, I must love me some Cena b/c I can hear his voice as I'm reading this story LOL.

Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

I am so glad you can hear him! Doesn't this sound like him? LOL... I'm glad you like it!

Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/10/09 03:00 am

Title: A kiss of Coffee

I love Donovan. He is such a gentleman. He says it feels right then she must be the one.

Author's Response: i appreciate your review! :)

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/10/09 02:37 am

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