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Title: A kiss of Coffee

I love me some Donovan...gentleman , fine and prayerful..all my favorite things and rich don't hurt!!

I love how is treating Ms. Kendra..this is how a real woos and real woman!!

I hope Kendra does get scared off...but accepts how she is feeling and let's it happen!!

This is just the kinda sweet love story I adore...good job sweetie!



Author's Response: thanks nene!

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/10/09 01:58 am

Title: A kiss of Coffee

Ahhhh! Thank you for the update.  Donovan is so sweet and gentlemanly.  I guess he found out enough about her for one night. Plus she answered his question just as he would have liked her to.

Kendra is a sweetie pie and she was made just for Donovan and sent to him just as he requested and I am happy he recognizes that.

Now you know I am greedy but I will try to curve it but I want more please thank you.



Author's Response: I'm working on more. I'm glad that you like this.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/10/09 01:39 am

Title: A kiss of Coffee

ok don smart move about the top one thing black women don't play if you mess with the hair lol. i like the talked the walked on the beach and him showing her places  around the city so romatic. i heard about your family passed you in my thought and prays and thanks for the updated.

Author's Response: Thanks maam.  We appreciate your prayers!  I'm glad you like this so far.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/10/09 01:28 am

Title: A kiss of Coffee

I just loved the update. Donovan and Kendra are sooo cute together. Please update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks ma'am.  I will be updating soon.

Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 20/10/09 01:20 am

Title: Miami Nightlife

Great update things are moving along quiet nicely.

Author's Response: Thanks TK! I appreciate it.  I should be writing more this week.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/10/09 02:32 am

Title: Miami Nightlife

OK Donovan is kinda smooth and I am really feeling him way more in this story than in the last one.

I think whether or not Ms. Kendra realizes it...she has a little crush on swirl man Donovan..lol!

This is going to be interesting to see how their realtionship develops..it appears her biggest battle will be the battle within herself. She likes him and he is close to perfect...and feeling her as well. Donovan knows what he wants now he has to convince her that she can take a chance on him...go with her heart and not her head...that will not be easy !!

Good job sweetie...I am really enjoying this one...more more more!!



Author's Response: Thanks Nene....

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/10/09 02:25 am

Title: Miami Nightlife

Great update D..... Donovan and Kendra are into eachother Big Time, I love the banter and the flirting between the two of them.

Oh Shelby needs to be fired, does she get like that when the boss buys females drinks, I think that she has a crush on Brian.... as for the Jackass on the dancefloor, forget him, he would have been PO'd if a Brother would have done the samething that Donovan did.

Can't wait to read more.



Author's Response: Hey.  Thanks for your review.  I'm wondering if Shelby should just be a passing fancy or give her a more substansial role...

Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/10/09 12:21 am

Title: Miami Nightlife

ok love how don came to her resure to save her from that  jerk. lol her friend is a trip but i tood to have a friend no matter what.  love the story girl and they so cute togheter . thanks for the updated.

Author's Response: thanks

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/10/09 03:09 am

Title: Miami Nightlife

Hmmm, Donovan making his move. Can't wait to see how this plays out. Loved it.

Author's Response: thank you

Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/10/09 02:41 am

Title: Miami Nightlife

Yaaay!!! I love my Donovan! Smooth move boy!

Author's Response: ya'll love some donovan! lol

Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/10/09 02:22 am

Title: Miami Nightlife

Loving it, D!!!!

Can't wait to see what happens when they're alone!!!



Author's Response: Thanks... I'm enjoying this....

Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/10/09 01:39 am

Title: Miami Nightlife

Enjoyed the chapter. Don't let the hoodrats get him. He wouldn't be interested in one of them anyway.

Author's Response: Thank you ma'am.  We don't even want the hoodrats to start sniffing around him....

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/10/09 01:04 am

Title: They Meet

Great start can't wait to read more . I'm glad Donovan wil get a girl of his own.

Author's Response: Thanks honey!

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/10/09 06:45 pm

Title: Allow me to reintroduce myself

This was a really good chapter! I really enjoy your writing style. I am looking foward to the upcoming chapters.

Author's Response: Thank you.  I appreciate you!

Reviewer: Tammy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/10/09 01:50 am

Title: They Meet

Loved the teaser.Can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: thank you

Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/10/09 05:49 am

Title: They Meet

Good intro to their meeting. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: thank you

Reviewer: SparkApCider Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/10/09 04:50 am

Title: They Meet

OH I like Donovan and Kendra already, and Don was Flirting with her Big Time, I have a feeling that those two are going to be fun to watch.... Question, are we going to see Matt/Taylor is this story?

Oh and BTW, you are going to have to find another WWE guy for your "fantasy threesome" b/c Batista is MINE girlfriend.



Author's Response: i hadnt thought about Matt and Taylor. Hmm... new idea!!!! Umm let's see Orton and hmmm nah, there is no one else other than Batista.... Triple H????

Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/10/09 04:41 am

Title: Casting

Yay Donovan! Get your woman!

Author's Response: I knew you'd approve... LOL

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/10/09 04:23 am

Title: They Meet

His prayer has been answered. Great update.

Author's Response: Yep. I'm looking forward to writing this

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/10/09 04:06 am

Title: They Meet

You go Ms. Kendra live your dream and find your dream man in the process!!

Looks like Donovan has found his match and she is a little intriguing..lol..or just sexy..rotfl!!

Cannot wait for more,,good start sweetie!



Author's Response: Thanks ma'am

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/10/09 02:55 am

Title: Allow me to reintroduce myself

Well now I love that Donovan is a praying man looking for a beautiful sister to be his WIFE and share his life with. Love the clean living and focused man...yeah he is a catch!!

 Kendra is quite the catch also, pulling her own in her profession..not caught up in who she is treating or their status. She is herself and true to herself..great catch!

I hope they find each other and take the plunge into a meanful relationship together..

 



Author's Response: thanks for the review

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/10/09 02:49 am

Title: They Meet

ooooooooo some body flirting with the hot football player but who can blame her lol. like the little batter btween these two love it. love the strory and thanks for the updated.

Author's Response: Thanks girl... I am trying to keep it real lite and sexy with these two

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/10/09 02:18 am

Title: They Meet

sweet nice meeting.  I think Don and Ken are going to be good together.  She is blushing he made her blush.

 

Great update 



Author's Response: I think a man that can make a lady blush deserves to know more about you.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/10/09 01:51 am

Title: They Meet

I love it!!  And I am excited that Donovan is getting his own story!  I can't wait for the next chapter!!  :)

Author's Response: Thanks ma'am!  I promise to try and update again this week...

Reviewer: Redbird Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/10/09 12:39 am

Title: Casting

I absolutely can't believe you started the follow-up with Donovan! I liked him from go and he's not disappointing yet.  I do like that he prays.  Can I say how much I like who was casted as his interest...at least I hope so!

Author's Response:

I like her too.  I think she's gonna be perfect! 

Reviewer: SparkApCider Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/10/09 06:05 pm

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