Beautiful and very sweet!! I am officially team Donovan and Kendra!!! Excellent excellent exceellent!! Loved this story sweetie..good job!!
Author's Response: Thanks Nene... I breathed a sigh of relief cause it ended how I think it should... happy and sweet.... Reviewer: neneburge Signed
[Report This]Date: 13/03/10 12:48 am
Well they finally got that prevert good..I hope he gets what he derserves and Donovan does not get into any trouble...
Those two are becoming quite the sexy duo....yum yum!!
Good job sweetie....I am glad they were able get that punk!!
Author's Response: Thanks Nene... Glad you enjoyed it... Reviewer: neneburge Signed
[Report This]Date: 13/03/10 12:40 am
Glad to see that nasty david got caught and that donovan and kendra are together. I hope you are feeling better and look forward to the next update.
Author's Response: Thanks Jai... I am on my way to 100% thanks for reading Reviewer: jai03 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/03/10 04:55 pm
I love this story!! I hope that you are feeling much better. Take care of yourself. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm feeling a lot better. I appreciate you sticking it out with me.
Date: 09/03/10 02:28 pm
No apology necessary...glad you're on the mend...take as much time as you need to get yourself back healthy...I love your stories and will wait until you're up to giving us more...
I love Donovan and Kendra...David is an arse of the highet order...though I'd have loved to seen Donovan do more than punch him that one time...scum like him is better dealt with by hitting him where it hurts...in the pockets...so glad his malice will be rewarded with him getting his and hopefully getting kicked out the training business...he's a real psycho with no respect for other people...
So glad Donovan and Kendra reconnected and Donovan is such a good guy and definitely husband material...you hear that, Kendra...he wants your heart and soul girl...don't be afraid to give it to him...
Great update, DS1...looking forward to more...
Author's Response:
Thanks for being so patient with me. It's been a trying beginning of the year, but hopefully, prayerfully it will get better soon.
I like Donovan and Kendra too. Something easy with them. No pretenses....
Reviewer: attheritz Signed [Report This]Date: 09/03/10 05:46 am
Good! They need to get that pig David.
Author's Response: Its about to go down.... :) Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/10 05:23 am
Wow, great update
Author's Response: Thanks ma'am. I appreciate you still reading this.
[Report This]Date: 09/03/10 05:18 am
Love this story, I was patiently waiting for you to update and you did. Thank you. David is looking mighty stupid, and I am so glad that Kendra sang like she was on "American Idol". Donovan is in love and Kendra feels the same way. Awesome update. Please don't make us wait too long for the nest update.
Author's Response: I'm working on the next update now. Thank you for still caring about these characters.
Date: 09/03/10 04:17 am
Awesome!!! Glad the scumbag got beat at his own game.
Author's Response: Yep, now its time to shut the door on Garrett
[Report This]Date: 09/03/10 03:49 am
Hot dam!!
Someone should have gotten more of a beatdown. The asshole.
I just love the fact that Kendra has already decided to be with Donovan, no matter what the outcome is.
I just love them together.
can't wait for your next update.
Author's Response: Thanks for sticking with me and reading this. I love them together too. I like the ebb and flow of their relationship. Reviewer: Janetbd Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/10 01:24 am
NO PROBLEM. YOU ARE TALENTED WRITER CONTINUE WRITING WONDERFUL STORIES.
Author's Response: Thank you so much.
[Report This]Date: 09/03/10 12:07 am
wow glad that he punch that guy wish he could do more but that be bad if he got lock up. i'm glad they handle it like a couple togehter fighting evil trying to keep them apart. I Hope you feel better it suck to be sick and hope things get better for you. love the story and thanks for the updated.
Author's Response: Thanks for your well-wishes. I hate being ill..
[Report This]Date: 08/03/10 11:57 pm
Nice update. I'm so glad they got all they needed to get rid of the trainer. He told her he loved her, now will she say it back?
Author's Response: I didn't even notice that...
[Report This]Date: 08/03/10 11:37 pm
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR UPDATE. GLAD DAVID GOT HIS AND GARRETT CAREER IS ABOUT TO GO DRAIN BECAUSE HE IS JEALOUS OF DONOVAN
Author's Response: Sorry for the delay. thanks for sticking with me...
[Report This]Date: 08/03/10 11:26 pm
Ok i know its been a minute since you last. i need an update soon before i good stir crazy.
Author's Response: I just updated it! Yay me! Reviewer: tcarey Signed
[Report This]Date: 24/02/10 08:11 am
damn that was hot
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 21/02/10 05:46 am
Wow, this is getting good
Author's Response: Thanks Gale...
[Report This]Date: 10/02/10 06:41 am
Great story. I can't wait to see what happens after the video has been shown. Garrett and David need to get gone with a quickness. Update soon.
Author's Response: Yes ma'am I will update soon.
Date: 10/02/10 03:22 am
WONDERFUL!!!
I love it when a plan falls thru.
Thank you for the wonderful update...
I was struggle right along with Kendra as he was licking and kissing on her neck and she she walked in to have him touching himself then pulling it out OLE DIRTY NASTY BASTARD!
Please update again as soon as you can.
Thank you again!
Author's Response: It was hard to write that, but I could just imagine him doing that... Reviewer: Thundakat Signed
[Report This]Date: 09/02/10 05:56 pm
Finally!! Garret the kid, got the beat down that was coming to him. the whining dickhead.
Now it's time for David's turn, old pervert.
Great update.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading. We had to get Garrett... LOL Reviewer: Janetbd Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/02/10 02:39 pm
Okay, D...David almost made me throw up a little in my mouth...oh, my....he's beyond disgusting...skeevy pervert...but he's about to get his backside handed back to him back on a silver platter...couldn't happen to a 'nicer' cretin...Candid Camera indeed...but I doubt he'll find much humor from the fallout...can Donovan beat the brakes off of that fool before he's dismissed...
Glad Garrett finally got his...not only did Donovan hand his *ss back to him...but he got exposed to the whole team as the pathetic, jealous bitch he really is...
So glad that Kendra didn't get fired when those pictures were exposed and the GM and owner were fair to her...
I can't wait till this all blows over and we can get back to some more Kendra and Donovan loving...and hopefully...wedding bells will be ringing in the near future...and Kendra...learn to keep your trap shut around your 'girl'...who seems to have a bad case of diarrhea of the mouth when pillow talk is involved...
Author's Response: The end is near! Reviewer: attheritz Signed
[Report This]Date: 09/02/10 06:58 am
For real that guy is repilsive. I was sick to my stomach just reading about him. I hope they recorded his sorrry perverted behind!! I hope they get him put away for a very long time.
Garrett was a punk and I am glad Donovan called him out in front of the entire tam!!
I hope after all this is said and done that our kids can come out of this ok and still in love!!
Great updt sweetie..looks like the chickens have come home to rest!!!
Author's Response: Thanks Nene... Reviewer: neneburge Signed
[Report This]Date: 09/02/10 04:19 am
ROTFL!!! I love it! Donovan "You're on Candid Camera!" Talk about catching a man with his pants down, literally! Girl keep it up, I'm glad they got what they need to knock his ass down a few pegs! Putting them on the line that, what is that's fools problem!
I hope somebody get's Garrett ass, away from the stadium. They said it right too, Punk ass bitch! Girl I love it. Can't wait for more.Thanks for updating.
Author's Response: Thanks for sticking with it... Reviewer: PasionK Signed
[Report This]Date: 09/02/10 03:10 am
Really enjoy this story!! Hope you update soon!!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading...
Date: 09/02/10 02:51 am
Garrett is such punk ass bitch!!! David is a sexual predator and racists. Donovan handled his business and whooped Garrett like he stole something. Have I told you that cliff hangers are evil? Please update soon!!!
Author's Response: Cliff hangers are evil and I hate them too...
Date: 09/02/10 02:22 am