I agreee that was very very INTENSESSSSSSSSS!!!!!!
Reviewer: kimyso Signed [Report This]Date: 24/05/13 08:25 pm
lol i loved it but u crack me up girl at the end your like 'wow intense'! Great job i wish it was actually a full story cause I want more!. U tease me :(
Reviewer: readlover Signed [Report This]Date: 18/07/12 01:15 am
I agree with ya!!! lol
Reviewer: cocoablue Signed [Report This]Date: 13/07/12 02:07 am
I agree with ya!!! lol
Reviewer: cocoablue Signed [Report This]Date: 13/07/12 02:07 am
I can't believe you used Synyster Gates as the main male charecter. A, I love A7x and B, I'm kinda in love with synyster Great story!!
Reviewer: IzzyLove Signed [Report This]Date: 08/08/10 04:37 am
Yeah that was intense, but I enjoyed it I would love a back story. What is he? Where's he from? I want to know if she will ever escape? This has so much potential to be an interesting full length if written right. Of course their would have to be good guy to balance this out, because I don't see him conforming.
Thanks for sharing.
Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]Date: 23/05/10 10:43 am
SADLY, I JUST DISCOVERED THIS STORY . BUT I LOVE IT .I'M SAD BECAUSE IT TOOK ME SO LONG TO FIND IT .SAD ME .
Author's Response: Haha, well i am glad you liked it and you found it Stacie...
Date: 05/03/10 06:03 pm
Oh wow that was really intense. I loved it. Hope to see more of these two.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review Happy2bNappy
Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed [Report This]Date: 01/03/10 03:42 am
Wow..I was about to read Vermillion and thought maybe I should start at the beginning..let me say..wow ok just wow!!
What ha sshe gotten herself into...I am afraid to read more but I am have to it is like a bad car accident you want to look away but your eyes are drawn to it....wow!!
Needless to say she was careless and foolish to bring a man she does not know to her home to have sex...but we all do silly things in our lives...I cannot wait to read the next story and finally Vermillion..I am more than intrigued!!
You really did an awesome job with this story sweetie...I was afraid of this SOB and I am so worried for our girl, Will she be abel to get awy from him...will he destroy her..he does not car about her just wants to use her body..but why..why her and how will escape!!
Excellent sweetie..cannot wait for next story!!!
Author's Response: Neneburge, i am so glad you decided to read scream before you read Vermillion, because i am sure things wouldnt have made much sense. Our heroine has gotten herself into quite a pickle and i am glad that you enjoyed my story. thanks for your review. Reviewer: neneburge Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/03/10 01:39 am
I hope you get to put the sequal back up...I simply loved reading it.
Author's Response: Thank you for your review Karena, and i have reposted Vermillion.
Date: 15/02/10 10:38 pm
Wow, wow wow and double wow! Nice job! I know, I'm a freak. I liked it. So one question before I read the second installement. Is he a vampire?
Oh another question: You like vampires don't you?
Ha! Great story.
Author's Response:
thanks Niclapy, sorry on my slowness in the response to your review... i do like vampires and as for what our gentlemen is, well you will just have to see in the second installment whether his is a vamp or not.
Reviewer: Niclapy Anonymous [Report This]Date: 17/12/09 03:42 pm
Interesting. I loved it!!
Author's Response: thanks for your review Indycoolchick
Date: 29/11/09 05:24 pm
Loved it!
Author's Response: Thanks!!!
Date: 09/10/09 12:09 am
Wow...this was really dark, but I LOVED it!!!! I got chills, man...
Author's Response: Thanks mocasoul for your review
Date: 08/10/09 05:50 am
That was very intense. It's amazing how some levels of pain bring great pleasure, but leave you feeling shameful.
Author's Response: Thanks Sweet Pea
Date: 07/10/09 04:00 am
That was intense! More please!
Author's Response: haha, Jujubee50 there might be some more of this story in the future but for right now it will stay a oneshot. but stay on the look out for its sequel
Date: 06/10/09 05:14 am
WOW!!!! That was definitely intense and very good. I can't believe you left it as a one shot I want more but oh well...it was awesome and my ear, face and head are on fire.
Thanks for sharing that dark fic.
Author's Response: THanks Thundakat, i am flirtin with the idea of righting more so stay on the look out... Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/10/09 04:46 am
I love this song, it's probably one of my all time favorite rock songs, and I like who you've chosen for him and her; very sexy.
Author's Response: Thanls for your review bree. I love Scream and avenged sevenfold so when i heard the song i was hooked and the wheels in my head started to turn...
Date: 06/10/09 04:42 am