Oh that heffa is good....she has Edward eating out of her hands. But I think she has met her match with Miss Keisha.....and before you can say, Howard the Duck, Lady Elizabeth will be on her way out of the door. I can see Miss Keisha being the lady of the manor. Lets all hope! Elizabeth better hope no one finds out about what she did to the dog or she will be fighting a PETA lawsuit! LOL!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed
[Report This]Date: 13/11/11 03:40 pm
Lady Landon? Be for real! That is one treacherous heffa....she is no where close to being a real lady. Besides this is U.S. of A and not the United Kingdom.....so there is no royalty here and she can come off that pretentious Lady Landon crap! I can see this is going to be a H.A.M. story. (hot ass mess) But I seem to like the story line!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: 13/11/11 03:23 pm
Your story is funny. However it was a bit hard to read because it seemed to run on a bit. Not sure why. The part about Grandma and the 9 and bible was really good, but again, I had to go back to reread because it tended to run on.
I think it is because you have one long paragraph and it should be broken up for an easier read because it makes it like a person talking nonstop without a pause. (Hope Im making sense).
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/11/11 01:06 am
Why is there no more! I got sooo happy planning what to do with that evil mother duck, then i click to find no more! Sooo sad :( but the positive thing is so far is absolutely great! I love the story and the different characters even though some are a tad bit crazy e.g. Grandma with the 9mil and her bible! ahaha Beautiful story, please come back! God blesss :D
Reviewer: chatty504 Signed [Report This]Date: 07/11/11 12:44 am
You are really funny, I love your characters and what I can grasp of the plot... You just need a really good editor and you're good to go :)))
Reviewer: BurntSienna Signed [Report This]Date: 04/11/11 10:58 am
This is very funny. Full of humor and wit!
Reviewer: FranklinsMuse Signed [Report This]Date: 28/03/11 01:26 am
Where are you girl. I love this story! Update please.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 21/08/10 05:15 am
I HAVE NOT LAUGH SO MUCH from reading a story. YOu are crazy. I love this story. When she met Liz and she started talking about "What is wrong with her face." And Edward talking about her being so beautiful to him. Please he must be on crack. And that is a slam against th crack user.The way you describe the whole thing was positively unbelieveable. Please keep writing . I am waiting to see who will get the hot grits thrown on them first Liz or Edward. Because they both are stupid beyond understanding. Luv it
Reviewer: cimmy1 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/05/10 03:24 am
Gurl you so crazy. This story was recomended by a friend. I love it . Its funny as all get out. Please keep writing
Reviewer: cimmy1 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/05/10 02:24 am
Girl you are funny. I don't know which one made me laugh more Grandma with the 9mm, Howard the Duck or the suicide dog. You really need to finish this story.
Reviewer: Junebug66 Signed [Report This]Date: 25/05/10 06:02 am
hey great start i can tell this is gonna be a great story now plz just finish it!
Reviewer: jenny Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/05/10 02:29 am
Elizabeth is ridiculous.
Reviewer: JoiousMaye Anonymous [Report This]Date: 05/12/09 09:42 am
Wht the hell is wrong with Edward? Why can't he see Elizabeth is pure hell?
Reviewer: juno Signed [Report This]Date: 01/12/09 03:05 am
Loved the update.
Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]Date: 01/12/09 02:23 am
Ugh...have you ever wanted to just slap someone so badly?
I feel like slapping elizabeth lol
Man shes a bitch, I hope edward realizes it soon.
Date: 01/12/09 02:16 am
soooo good. ive been waitin forever please write more soon!!!!
Reviewer: lis Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 30/11/09 11:41 pm
Please keep writing. These two chapters had me rolling in my chair with laughter. Great story!
Reviewer: KJ Anonymous [Report This]Date: 12/11/09 05:51 am
oops, I meant Keisha not Heather. I'll get the characters down, eventually. :0
Author's Response: That's ok I knew who you meant.
Date: 12/11/09 03:50 am
Howard the Duck! What an image. That wife is scary. And if George doesn't watch out, she might do him some bodily harm. She tried to murder poor Charlie! Dang, how did Edward get mixed up with that skeezer? And why is it that he couldn't see her for what she was before he married her? It's going to be fun seeing Heather handle this family. Heather's grandma is a hoot. Yeah, all she needs is her 9 and Bible. I can't wait to see her get a hold of Lady Liz.
Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous [Report This]Date: 12/11/09 03:48 am
This story is pretty funny.
Author's Response: TY that is what I a going for funny, However there will be some drama in the future
[Report This]Date: 12/11/09 03:05 am
I am loving this story so far!! Lady Landon is pure evil!! And I love Heather already! And I was rolling at the dog carrying a picture of his girlfriend!!!
Hope you post the next chapter soon!
Reviewer: Redbird Signed [Report This]Date: 12/11/09 12:03 am
I love grandmamma. Looks to be another fun read. Looking forward to the next update.
Author's Response: TY
[Report This]Date: 11/11/09 11:28 pm
It's a good start. I injoy it and hope you write today.
Author's Response: TY
[Report This]Date: 26/10/09 07:36 pm
Would love to read more about how this plays out so please update soon and often.
Author's Response: I will try to update more. TY for reading my story
[Report This]Date: 26/10/09 07:24 pm