I love the start of this story. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you.
I will have one next Monday
Reviewer: raven004 Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 20/10/09 04:50 am
Me likey.
Author's Response: Thank you
Date: 20/10/09 02:48 am
I think it's really a good start. You might want to re-read it before you post it, just to get the feel for the read. But I think it's a great start and I'm interested in seeing where this goes, since Heather's daddy is already married. Hmmm... great start!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your comments. I will try to do better on my editing next chapter.
All I can say there will be some Lucy and Ethal moments between Keisha and her best friend. Who will be putting in an appearance soon.
Reviewer: Dsmoothone Signed [Report This]Date: 19/10/09 07:04 pm
Hi Dimples,
Nice start!! There is a lot of potential here.
Keisha needs a job but wants her big singing break. She will have to thread very carefully for Edward to believe that she didn't use the nanny job to get next to him. (She did, but it's not something he'd soon forget or forgive.) I also can't wait to see what you do with the suicidal dog angle. LOL
Readers absolutely love nice long updates on a regular basis.
Please continue.
Author's Response:
I am glad you in enjoyed what you have read so far.
As for the suicidal dog angle her best friend is going to help with that, lets just say the four of them (Keisha, her best freind, Heather, and Charlie) will have some Lucy and Ethal moments in the story.
Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed [Report This]Date: 19/10/09 12:47 pm