finally some tangaline loved it.Damn they have alot of kids
Hey jadadominique, Happy New Year
Glad you loved the bit of of Tangeline magic. Yeah they do have a lot of kids and they don't mind especially Todd who I believes has super sperm...LOL!!!!Reviewer: jadadominique Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/01/10 01:51 pm
I just love the insight into their life going forward. I can just imagine Tangie really becoming a 'Todd' in the future. And from the looks of it, he has reason to be concerned. I hope that he can fix whatever is happening with Jack. Just a great great update.
Author's Response: Hey letitia, Tangie is a mini version of Todd and part of him knows that nothing can be done about it except he hopes that Evangeline's good genes will allow her to make better decisions than he has done. When it comes to Jack he wants to fix it but at the moment Jack isn't letting him in and all he can do is just manage from the outside. Thanks so much for posting a review for this story and I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 07/12/09 03:02 am
Awww, that was such a cute little story. This is just a one shot right? I loved all of their kids (damn, they got busy lol) and I liked Jack too. I love Jack and Keke. Todd was so cute with all the kids, I loved seeing him in daddy mode, even when he caught TT and Tangie fighting like he was going to take out the belt lol. I thought it was cute when Todd asked his other daughter to kiss his forehead to make him feel better, how cute. I liked Todd and Van's little reunion at the end, just wish it was longer with more loving lol.
Yes its just a one shot. Sometimes its easy to write them but for someone like me who is so multi-chaptered its hard to say what to put in there and how long it should be...lol!! Busy? lol!!! Some I took from my nieces bc when they are altogether watch out...the house gets crowded and noisy and someone is usually saying something. I think if Evan wasn't in his arms he would have taken out that belt...LOL!!! Todd loves his little girls...his angels, princesses! I knew someone would have asked about that short ending but it left you wanting for more and that was the point...LMAO! Maybe I should have gotten Black or Jordanna to write the last part for me...don't you think...LOL!!!Reviewer: bsbgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/12/09 11:40 pm
Loved it. The family dynamics were great!!
I'm glad you enjoyed the family dynamics of my short tale. I hope I continue to write stories that will allow you to feel this same type of enjoyment. Thanks so much for leaving a review!Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/12/09 04:44 pm
I like this a lot. I know this is just the beginning and I love love Keke and Jack; they are too cute. I just hope whatever is going on with Jack and Todd dispereses. You're making me like the idea of Tangie even though I'm a diehard someone else fan. What can I say, Todd really does it for me as of late!!!
So you must be a JoVan...welcome to the darkside that is Todd and Evangeline...LOL!!! I promise I won't say anything negativo about Johnnie...lol!!! Yeah it is just the beginnning especially for the children. Todd and Evangeline are the patriarchs of the family and they will always have a story and so will a couple of the kids.
Thanks so much for leaving an awesome review and I hope you continue to enjoy my tales even if it isn't about that certain other person...LOL!!!Reviewer: Vie Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/12/09 06:23 am
My Choc, okay why did it take so long for Vange to come in the picture, their conversation was too short for me, you know how I like my Tangie dont ya?
Having a family has made Todd a big whole softie, he seems like a pretty cool dad who know when to discipline his kids. You have been on a long break, cant take it no more, I need a follow up story STAT, ASAP, NOW.
By the way, I was very happy to read from you again babe, it's been way too long.
In some parts of this tale I was thinking about you and I don't know why....LOL!!! I knew you would say those exact same words about Evangeline. Yeah Todd will always be a big softie for his wife and kiddies. You don't know Mrs. Manning do you....LOL!!!
I am working on another one-shot different from this one. I have a bone to pick with you bc I left you a review in your tale but not a peep out of you so I am waiting for a response and an update! LMAO! or I may be dragging my feet on my next tale...you know I need to get the story straight, make sure all the ts are crossed and is dotted...you know...LOLLLL!!!
So Happy that you read my little shortie and left an awesome review!Reviewer: dyehanna1 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/12/09 06:11 am
I love it. I just wish this story was longer.
Thanks for the awesome review! I know, I know but I'm trying to push myself to write these shorties until I can come up with a real multi-chapter Tangie tale and improve on my writing skills.Reviewer: juno Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/12/09 03:41 am
wow all those kids guess todd put it on van lol. what is going on with jack skipping classes? thanks for the updated it was nice.
You know our guy has super sperm..LOL!!! No matter how hard she tried one of them came sneaking through...LOLLL!! Jack is being the typical son of a millionaire and going through that teenage stage about authority that's why Todd didn't even bother punishing him except remind him about Evangeline bc he knows how much he respects and loves her.
I'm glad you enjoyed my little update. I'm hoping to finish another one shot real soon. Always grateful for your reviews. thanks!Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/12/09 02:13 am
OMG!!! this story is so adorable and real too. Yup, I knew Todd and Evangeline will have many little Todds and Evangelines running aroung the house. I love all the children and Tangie is too funny and typical sister to her brothers and sisters. Though she and Jack have a icy relationship, I can tell they really love each other. I love Jack and KeKe!! Can I see more of them one day? Todd's and Jack's relationship is strained but I sense they both are going to try to work it out soon. The two babies were adorable and TT was so cute too. I love him being a genuis. Now to Todd and Evangeline, they are so loving and supportive of one another. Todd was the good husband by taking care all the babies and I see he got his reward for all his hard work by having Evangeline back home with him. I love they still have so much passion like the first day they fell in love with each other. Thanks for writing this sweet tale Chocolate. Though this story is screaming for more, I won't ask for it because it is perfect as a one shot.
Hey there M,
Now I couldn't make them Tangelina with all those kids..LOL!!! Todd always loves his girls and that stems from his relationship with Starr but as for Jack that relationship has always been sort of strained partly because of Blair. What kid likes taking sides between their parents and my character of Jack hated it. Yeah Jack and Keke are too young to be out there but who knows what I might do later on down the road ;) I knew you would say that you want more bc isn't that what one shots are suppose to do..LOL!!! Thanks for always being so supportive chica!!! *hugs*Reviewer: Megumi Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/12/09 10:56 pm