That was beautiful, albeit heartbreaking. I have so many unanswered questions, like "who does he belong to, is he married?" "why aren't these two together?" "how did they meet?" A part 2 or back story is in order I think ;) I really enjoyed that Midnight. Thank you for this gem of a story.
Reviewer: Renee Banks Signed
[Report This]Date: 28/04/10 01:58 am
Nice..I enjoyed this...It seems like it would be a really nice story..
Author's Response: I thought about it but I want to finish WYSM first. Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 03/12/09 05:02 am
Sweetie that was so emotional and beautifully written. You could feel the anguish, pain, longing and desperation of both of them. Like Persia you want to reach out and hold him and comfort him but you want much more also. You want to know the root of this turmoil and why (because it is clear she really cares about him) does she let him use her to releive his stress then leave. Only to come back again when he needs relief again.
Excellent sweetie just excellent!!
Author's Response: Thank you Nene I hope you stuck around for the series. Reviewer: neneburge Signed
[Report This]Date: 03/12/09 01:57 am
Your story was wonderful . I'm so sad that last night (Tuesday ) was the season finale of SOA . Oh, how I do love Jax .
Author's Response: I love him too I felt bad for the way it ended with Jax.
[Report This]Date: 02/12/09 05:30 pm
I loved reading this short but it sort of left me with some questions, foremost being- were they having an affair? It seems as if he's using her for a booty call and she appears to be wishing for more to the connection.
Author's Response: Yes they are having a affair but it's more then that.
Date: 02/12/09 04:00 pm
Wow, that was quite intense. Powerfully written and very sad.
Author's Response:
Thank you.
Reviewer: EvilAngelfish Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/12/09 03:26 pm
That was sad but hot!!!! Jax put it on Persia, he hurt her so good!!!
Author's Response: lol he did didn't he?
Date: 02/12/09 02:29 pm
The story was very intense. Why does she allow him to use her in this manner. I take it he is married to someone else? Thanks
Author's Response: He's not married but he is taken and my next one shot should answer some questions for you. Reviewer: Divsionred Signed
[Report This]Date: 02/12/09 09:53 am