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Title: I'm Gonna Get Up...

That cliffhanger ending in the last chapter stirred up many scenarios in my mind, including one in which Sunny is there to witness this unfolding madness. Given this new cliffhanger I see that my mind will have to go swirling again. Wow Onimosity! This suspense is going to kill us loyal fans. As it stands, I am in knots and in need of a happy ending for our golden couple. Sunny and Nikolai deserve one. But there you go making it a possibility that either Sunny or Nikki may have gotten shot. I think I will have a meltdown if one of them dies… lolol.

As we say where I come from, “that was a ‘boss’ chapter.” Sergei did get some of my sympathy at first, but not much I am afraid after I thought about it some more. I can’t help but look at Nikolai situation and reflect on what little option he has of becoming who he is and being where he is.

Sergei, by contrast, was not forced into the lifestyle that he ended up in, did he? He had options, options his brother wanted him to explore. He drifted into the life with his eyes close. Did he give full thought to the lifestyle he so nonchalantly agreed to enter? Where the hell did he think his brother was working? Did he think people in the 'organisation' were playing with guns and shit? He wasn’t forced, pushed or threatened into the life. He had options, but his aimlessness set a path for him and look where it took him - gun in hand pointing it at Nikki and then at Sunny, trying to save Sunny when she didn’t ask to be saved. Did he ever listen to her? WTF. Who appointed him Sunny’s keeper. Suddenly he has a sense of purpose and it has a name, Sunny. I think he is projecting his frustrations, unrequited love and obvious insanity into the belief that he is trying to save Sunny. He didn’t seem to think things through and Nikolai’s reaction to him pointing his gun at Sunny shows further that all bets are off when the woman he loves is in harm’s way.

If Nikolai is wounded maybe now she would say those golden words. One thing though, I don’t think Sergei is dead (at least I hope not) but my fear is for Sunny and Nikolai or even Priscilla who may well be in the house. Please, at least if one of them is hit, don’t break my heart and kill them off :(

So when are you updating again, later tonight you say. Ah that’s good :D. Thanks for the rollercoaster ride and for keeping my interest. This read has been worth it all… lolol…

 

Reviewer: Introspection Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/03/10 05:41 am

Title: I'm Gonna Get Up...

I love this story. I am definitely cheering for Nikki and Sunny. They have both grown sooo much. Now that the mob boss is stateside, let's hope this means the couple can have a long love life together.

 Great Story!!

Reviewer: rosie rolle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/03/10 04:51 am

Title: I'm Gonna Get Up...

First I will say I hate cliff hangers...they are are neccessary especially in such complex, emotionally challenging, expertly crafted , beautifully written stories as this....But I think you are trying make this last for us so I forgive you! :)

Sergei is a sad man that he puts a woman that does not love him, that he apparently does not really know and does not need saving, ahead of hhis own life and his families.

If he killed Nikki or Sunshine...he is dead and his family is dead...why? why? I selfish , immature and foolish!!

If Sergei dies Sunny and Nikki may break up but Sunny heart will be broken and she will never be the same again or she may not leave Nikki at all..so his purpose is defeated. 

Anyway it goes there is no win for Sergei in this situation..even if no gets physically hurt the emotional scars will be permanent and his freindship with Sergei ends today.

I think Sunny got shot or Nikki or an innocent but not Sergei..the title of the chapter does suggest that however gets shot may not die..but who really knows...I know it is a huge turning point.

Why is it everytime Nikki and Sunny have a small section of happiness something horrible happens...hasn't their lives had enough sadness that they deserves some happiness...I think they do...it would be so sad that after all this....Stanis coming down to free his son and talk to his girl....Nikki changing becoming a better man.''.giving and revealing his real heart to Sunny and her leetting down her guard with him...that it would all end in tragedy...but many many times life is just not fair...'so who knows what you will give us sweetie...just do what is real to you...if the ending meets with the rest of this wonderful excellent story..we will not feel short changed or slighted no matter what happens...just be true to you or more so true to the magnificent piece of work you have created!!

Good job sweetie....no more cliffies please!!

 

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/03/10 04:50 am

Title: I'm Gonna Get Up...

You're trying to kill your readers aren't you! How could you leave us hanging yet again?

I'm so disgusted with Sergei.  He has no right to try to save Sunshine like this.  The woman knows what she has in Nikki and has chosen to stay with him...for now.  Sergei's weak and thinks Sunny is as weak as him. 

I was hoping that neither Cilla nor Sunshine would come to the house while the situation with Nikolai and Sergie was in progress. I hope neither one of them is hurt. 

Please update soon.

Reviewer: sherprin Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/03/10 04:31 am

Title: I'm Gonna Get Up...

This remind me of the song we only just begun our romance is not over I got so much love to give. 

All I can say is great chapter.  Dang cliffie

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/03/10 03:33 am

Title: I'm Gonna Get Up...

I can't believe you left us hanging like that!!!

Who got shot? Was it Sunny or possibly Priscilla walking in? 

Sergei needs to mind his own business. Now because of his crazy behind I'm gonna be checking the site like 20 times a day for an update. PLEASE give us an update VERY soon. 

Reviewer: Jules Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/03/10 02:50 am

Title: I'm Gonna Get Up...

I am hoping Sunshine do not get shot.  Great update

Reviewer: Gale Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/03/10 02:31 am

Title: Who they are

Sergei has went off the edge. I knew Sunny would come sooner or later since it was unusual for him to not answer her calls or return them, can't wait to see what happens next.

Bumps 

 

 

Reviewer: Kiah Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/03/10 01:43 am

Title: I'm Gonna Get Up...

I knew Sunny was going to walk in on them. I REALLY hope the bullet didn't hit her. Although, I could honestly see her dying, and being taken form them. Well Sunny will get to see Nikki at his worst. Sergie pointing that gun at her was a huge mistake.

Reviewer: Cholyn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/03/10 12:56 am

Title: I'm Gonna Get Up...

Ok. I haven't read this in a while, but I have got to say, damn, girl! I am so inspired by your creativity, talent, and plain ol' stamina, lol. You've got to share your secret; barring that, you've got to go out there and get published. I would gladly buy your work. This has been a joy to read, and I'm bummed that the end is near. You're terrific!

Reviewer: Dani Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/03/10 12:38 am

Title: I'm Gonna Get Up...

How you can you leave us like this !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  

But awesome chapter none the less I can't wait for the next update. 

 

Reviewer: Kiki Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/03/10 12:30 am

Title: I'm Gonna Get Up...

Ms Onimosity,

You seem like a sweet lady. Surely you don't plan to leave us to suffer through an entire weekend without resolution with that type of cliffhanger...right? (pouty face in full effect)



Author's Response: Mwah ha ha! Very nice pouty face. I am **trying** to have something up by 12:01 Sunday morning.

Reviewer: Shea Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/03/10 12:11 am

Title: I'm Gonna Get Up...

I would like you a lot better if this was a two chapter day.

Reviewer: Karnythia Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/03/10 11:52 pm

Title: I'm Gonna Get Up...

OK I'm calm and collected, no longer planning on getting on a plane ...... well I'm calm....

I have to admit this was a great chapter in the tale of N&S. I must also admit it was a master stroke having the stand off between the guys and Sunny walking in trying to talk down Sergei and the stray shot.  Yes this was the perfect place for a cliffhanger. BUT hey it's hard to bear right now and like all the other reviewers and lovers of your story I can't wait to find out who got shot and if fatally or not.  I too think that Sergei made good points and that Sunny has to take some responsibility in this also, however, it's none of his business and if he were a friend h could of tried talking to her again.

Now if you don't want me to get on that plane please update soon! 

Cheers

PS what are drive by edits????



Author's Response: Hi Penny from across the Pond. Thank you for reviews! Drive-by edits are just when I clean up the text, add a period, stuff like that. So the content doesn't change but it looks neater.

Reviewer: Penny Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/03/10 10:19 pm

Title: I'm Gonna Get Up...

That's so cruel to leave us hanging like that!  Come on and update.  I hope Sunshine isn't laying on that floor cuz Nikki is going to beat Sergei to a very bloody pulp and Sergei deserves it!  Too bad Anatoly may lose a stupid brother.

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/03/10 08:46 pm

Title: I'm Gonna Get Up...

OMG!!!! I am literally sitting on the edge of my seat! I'm speechless! 

Please come back and post some more... Please, please, please with a cherry on top?? 

Reviewer: JazziePassion Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/03/10 08:44 pm

Title: I'm Gonna Get Up...

Please come back and finish :(

OMG..... please please dont let it be Sunny that got shot..... I have plans for her and Nikolai to live happily ever after on an island somewhere :D

Great add 

Reviewer: singlesexyfree Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/03/10 07:44 pm

Title: I'm Gonna Get Up...

omg who got shot was it Nikoali or segie ?? you can't leave us hanging that just rude lol. i love this story that crazy boy had points but Nikoali had some too he loves sunshine and will do any thing for her. i can't wait to see the next chapter thanks for the updated.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/03/10 07:44 pm

Title: I'm Gonna Get Up...

Please, please, please come back and finish this, right now.  Who got shot?  Oh my goodness tell me Nickolai and Sunshine are alright.  Okay, I'm telling myself to calm down, take a deep breath.  What the hell, hurry up and post the next update.

A

Reviewer: Arabelle Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 11/03/10 07:11 pm

Title: I'm Gonna Get Up...

I have a bad feeling you are going to have Nikki look around and see Sunny on the floor. I hope not. Sergei has little faith in Sunny himself. She has grown and is much stronger than she was when she first entered into this arrangement with Nikki. She may not know all that has happened in his life, or all the evil things that he has done, but she knows enough. With that knowlege she still has chosen to stay. Who is he to decide to set her free especially if she doens't want to be set free. Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/03/10 06:07 pm

Title: I'm Gonna Get Up...

Well Sunny has a up close and personal view of Nikki's world.  Sergi was right and wrong about the situation.  Wrong for using the crazy get yourself killed --by a over the heels in love Russian-- confirmation mode, but right regarding the gilded cage comments. Sunny has adapted and must make a choice without blinders on.  I am still team Sunny/Nikki, but she no longer has the option to avioid Nikki's "world".  As always, a great update.  So, you and the must are not going to leave us hanging through the weekend?  Right.........

Reviewer: VetRog Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/03/10 05:24 pm

Title: I'm Gonna Get Up...

OMG this ride!  This story has been amazing from the start and now it looks like it will end that way.  Sergei has made himself judge and jury over other people's lives.  He is smart enough to know that he will die from this, but not smart enough to let go of his crazy side and stop it.  He felt like he knew what Sunny needed and let that take him too far. Even being told that his brother would suffer for his choice did'nt stop him. 

I think I know who the world went black for but I will wait and let you tell me.  You are so good at this!  I have nothing else to say except.......PLEASE update soooooooooon!!!!!

Reviewer: Lovelybears Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/03/10 04:52 pm

Title: I'm Gonna Get Up...

OMG; I just got through reading and I am really anxious to find out who (if anyone) got shot!  Really hoping it's not Sunny or Nikki; I guess it would be too convenient if stupid Sergei shot himself!  What an excellent update, but another cliff-hanger...you big meanie:)

It's bittersweet that this is coming to an end, but it's been quite a ride; thanks for that!

Well, I'll be here waiting anxiously for the next update; soon, I hope.

Thanks.

Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/03/10 04:03 pm

Title: I'm Gonna Get Up...

That was wonderful. I'm so hyped up wanting to know What Happens ??! I can't wait. Thanks for the great read.

Reviewer: Orangesathome Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/03/10 03:36 pm

Title: I'm Gonna Get Up...

All I can say is wow. Sergei was willing to die for something that is really none of his business. Nikolai was right he isnt forcing Sunshine to be with him any longer he is who she wants to be with. So the gun went off wonder who got shot.? I hope know one got seriously hurt. I think Sergei needs to go back to were he came from. I hope Nikolai gets out of the business. Great chapter. Look forward to the last 2 chapters.Its been a wild ride reading about Sunshine and Nilolai.

Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/03/10 03:30 pm

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