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Title: Rising

Yay! I love these two and the strory was great...maybe a bit short..? Please write more!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I love them too. I'm not sure if I'll write anymore but there are two other stories on here about them that I wrote so you can check those out. I hope you like them. :)

Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 21/02/10 03:55 pm

Title: Begging

OMG, can I just say that this fic was brilliantly done?? I loved everything; from Kat's inability to talk in the face of Bell's sexiness to August and Amara's girl time drinking coffee (very bittersweet). I hope you write more Kat/Bell soon! I love your portrayal of their relationship.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm sort of obsessed with them right now so there just might be more of them on the way... ;)

Reviewer: LClaire Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/12/09 02:38 am

Title: Rising

Very nice story.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/12/09 08:52 pm

Title: Rising

I love that he's going to help her heal. Not that she's broken, I think Kat's been through too much in her life not to be able to bounce back on her own. But she finally has someone to help her do that and is so obviously good for her. I loved the resolution of the case, it was sad, but also a little hopeful, in that Amara is finally able to move on with her life without her daughter. 

Oh, and comment aobut the dress? So cute. Bell is so awesome. :) 



Author's Response:

Thanks I'm glad you liked it.

One of the things that I like about Kat's character is that, unlike Lilly, she's really quite secure with herself and her life. (I think they focus too much on Lilly's dysfunctions and it annoys me.) So when I was thinking about her relationship with Bell, especially b/c they both have kids, I was thinking that they were searching for partners, no a boyfriend/girlfriend but a partner. 

Anyway, :)

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/12/09 07:11 am

Title: Rising

Me likey!!!

Author's Response: hahaha thanks! ;)

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 17/12/09 11:30 pm

Title: Rising

This was just perfect. Love the relationship between Kat and Bell. You did a wonderful job capturing the two.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)

Reviewer: jjazz59 Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 17/12/09 11:03 pm

Title: Begging

I loved this story!  I am relatively new to Cold Case (been watching the first few seasons on TBS) but I loved that it was just like the show!  I could almost hear the music playing at the end while everything was wrapping up!

You did an awesome job!



Author's Response: Wow, this is a really big compliment. It's a great show that I'm (obviously) in love with. Thank you so much for reading! :)

Reviewer: Redbird Signed [Report This]
Date: 17/12/09 06:24 am

Title: Begging

Loved the story. I'm feeling for that mom though.

Author's Response:

Thanks I'm really glad you liked it!

Yea, when I came up with that back story even I was a little sad at it. It's got to be the most heartbreaking thing in the world to bury a child. 

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/12/09 03:18 am

Title: Begging

That was sad and sweet all in one..I can wait for the next chapter

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the story and I really hope you enjoy the way it ends.

Reviewer: JoVanAdDek Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/12/09 01:38 am

Title: Begging

KAT! o/

*takes a deep breath and tries to contain her glee*

So yeah, this is even better than I thought it would. Your first fanfic? Really? This just feels like the show. The dialouge the format, and I love LOVE that you have a case going in this too. And one that's so much like Cold Case, my heart is breaking for Amara and her loss. It's never easy to lose a child, even one that was obviously as difficult as August was.

I love that Kat is so affected by this woman the case, she is a mother. And the ones like these have to give her nightmares. That scene of her waking up in the middle of the night was just beautifully done. 

And Bell! o/

Okay, you know I'm a Scotty/Kat shipper first, but I'm also a huge fan of a man who sees how awesome this lady is and isnt' afraid to make that known. You really captured the fun vibe of this couple and his facination with her, which is just as lovely here as it is on the show. I love that he throws her because she's not a easy woman to throw. And the non-kiss at the end of the date was AWESOME, you know something else is on the horizion. Something more I mean. 

I'm wondering just how much this case and her relationship with Bell will coverge before its all over. And I can't wait until all that tension bubbles over, because you know it will. 

You are awesome for doing this. Like I said before, this feels like Cold Case. And nothing makes me happier than reading fanfic this close to the real thing. 

Thank you, thank you and I look foward to you next udpate. :D 



Author's Response:

This is like the biggest compliment. I have to say that I think fanfic is, by far, the hardest thing in the world to write. I have even more respect for all of you who do it semi-regularly.

I was originally going to write this story w/o the mystery but it felt wrong and, of course, that's because it was... When I finally realized what it needed the pieces just fell into place. 

Amara's story is so heartbreaking. I don't have kids, but I can guess that it must be shattering when you lose a child. Kat's motherhood is so incidental to the show, mostly because they focus a lot on Lilly's troubled childhood, and sometimes I would catch myself wondering how Kat felt in these situations. So... here's my guess. 

Oh Bell, I love him! The minute I realized what the writers's had in mind in "Witness Protection" I became obsessed. And I'm with you, the fact that he gets how awesome Kat is.... PLUS!

Thanks for being a great support and pushing me. Just knowing that someone really wanted to read this made me happy and forced me to really put my all into this, even when I was freaking out about getting everyone's characterization down.

I hope you like how it ends... ;)

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/12/09 12:26 am

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