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Title: You Won’t Let Me Sleep

That was amazing, and insane and completely and totally awesome!! I loved it ^^ 

Reviewer: mizgardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/11/12 08:20 am

Title: You Won’t Let Me Sleep

THIS IS so red RED HOT!!

EFFIN LOVED IT GIRL!

Reviewer: TREATs-LOVES-JACOB Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/08/11 03:36 am

Title: You Won’t Let Me Sleep

well, damn, that was good.

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/08/10 07:58 am

Title: You Won’t Let Me Sleep

WOW! - that was one HOT story! Love the Stefan/Bonnie pairing. Hope to read more with those two!

Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 21/02/10 12:55 pm

Title: You Won’t Let Me Sleep

I love love love this story. I'm a fan of the show and adore Bonnie's character. Your story actually got me thinking....what if Damon found out about Stefan and Bonnie's little rendezvous and somehow used it against Stefan and then bam, brothers start fighting over Bonnie instead of boring Elena. But I can only dream that this would happen haha

 

but again love this story and all your other work.  

Reviewer: EPJ Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 28/01/10 03:47 am

Title: You Won’t Let Me Sleep

Wow, I actually like Stefan here :)  This is brilliant and hot, love it.

I would've loved if some transference like that actually happened on the show.



Author's Response:

LOL, I'm pretending this is what goes through Stefan's head instead of I love Elena over and over. He's pretty old, I think he would have gotten a little cynical about things at some point. :)

I agree, this really should have happened on the show. They kinda just dimissed that moment and went on with things, didnt' they?

Reviewer: Hetairai Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/01/10 04:23 am

Title: You Won’t Let Me Sleep

That was sexy!!!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 30/12/09 07:08 am

Title: You Won’t Let Me Sleep

Loved this so much and you know why? Because it's artfully written and in character. You have got to be one of my favorite VD fanfic writers, because you take the characters and keep them in character. Stefan's pain was beautiful, and I especially loved that Bonnie got to forget at the end... but Stefan is the one that remembers.

This was wonderful, and a perfect reminder why Stefan/Bonnie is my second favorite pairing after Damon/Bonnie. Thank you so much for sharing! Hope to see more of these in the future :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm still feeling my way around the show, but I'm hopeful that my next story will be a little longer than the last two. And yes, Damon/Bonnie, I'm still on that side of the fence too. Though I think I could write Bonnie with just about anyone, I love her character more and more.

I'm so happy you enjoyed this, thank you so much for reading.

Reviewer: Sasha (jensensmyluvva) Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/12/09 02:13 am

Title: You Won’t Let Me Sleep

I read this and cursed my computer. CURSED IT then realized *drops head* I have not the power to curse...but Bonnie does; Bonnie can get me Hulu! I must get to Bonnie ASAP! You think Stefan could umm put in a good word for me?

Okay so now that's sounding plain weird.

THIS WAS SO GOOD and my interest in this show? PIQUED.

I watched an eppy the other night. I think maybe it was the first eppy? Basically Stefan's first day of school. Folk getting "mauled" (kilt) left and right, then vwallah, Damon and all his sexy shows up with incisors sharpened to a 't' and eyes piercing, smoldering, seductive. First eppy right? 

Well i'm hooked and if they're doing some kind of hiatus re-view then I'm there and watching. 

I must say though that Elana? She's so 'dry' and plain drab to me...Bonnie has much more FIYAH.

I demand multiple one-shots from both you and Black from henceforth...I was so 'liking' the eppy I almost went out and rented the Covenant...*cough* but I didn't. Too cold to leave the house. Ha! Great job! Loved it. MOre please?



Author's Response:

Yay! I'm glad you liked the show so far, it really picks up after the first few episodes. Especially for Bonnie. I'm working on a Bonnie/Damon fic right now, so there should be more of this soon. But yes, the show is a little addictive and Bonnie's such a great character. Thank you for reading and reviewing MZ, I"m really glad you enjoyed this!

Reviewer: madame z Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/12/09 07:44 am

Title: You Won’t Let Me Sleep

Damn that was so HOT!!! Made me want to go into attack mode and show some fang. :D

Thank you!



Author's Response: LOL, thank you thundakat!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/12/09 03:37 am

Title: You Won’t Let Me Sleep

I've never watched the show and can't tell what's canon and what's now but I don't care. Again, I almost want to watch the show after reading your work. From the previews, Stefan seems like a bit like Edward Cullen and I got the vibe here that that's what Elena sees him as, but he's nothing like him. He's not innocent and not above doing some terrible things. Stefan seems aware and strong enough to resistant whatever was pulling him to Bonnie, but he didn't because he didn't want to. He's not that different from Damon, though he wants to be.

That line about him wanting Elena after is so sad and telling. She's safe and beautiful. She's the normal he's been looking for, but he has to have that bit of danger first.

Making Bonnie forget was the best thing at the end of the day. She keeps her innocence that way and in a world where vampires and witches are real, you need to hold on to that for as long as possible. 

Awesome as always, Token!



Author's Response:

I think Stefan's character is a little underdevloped right now, they really haven't gotten into why he does the things he does. But he'd definately not Edward, he lies to Elena about everything. And there have been hints that he's had a while past, so this was kind of my interpreation of what hasn't been show yet.

He does have a hero complex though, I know if this did happen his first choice would be to protect both Bonnie and Elena, especially from themselves. 

Thank you so much for reading Lucky, I'm so glad you enjoyed the story!

Reviewer: luckybrans Signed [Report This]
Date: 28/12/09 02:38 am

Title: You Won’t Let Me Sleep

Loved it!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/12/09 01:30 am

Title: You Won’t Let Me Sleep

It's bad that this is 20x better than any episode of the show right?

Ah whatever, how fabulously disturbing was this. And you've convinced me, I'm shipping Bonnie/Stefan so serious right now it hurts!

Great job. :)



Author's Response: Ha! You're awesome, thank you for saying that. And I'm kinda shipping them too. though I still love Damon/Bonnie. I can't wait to write a story for them too. :)

Reviewer: femmenoire Signed [Report This]
Date: 27/12/09 11:09 pm

Title: You Won’t Let Me Sleep

Loved this, it's been sohard to find good  VD stories, much less new Bonnie (non red-head) fics and I hope to read more Bonnie stories from you in the future, how about another D/B/S fic? ~hint, hint, nudge, nudge~



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading. You're right, there aren't a lot of fics for Bonnie going up right now. I'm hoping that will change once the show returns. I've started a Damon/Bonnie fic that will probably go up next, but I do love the threesome dynamic too. I'll probably revist that one soon. :) 

Reviewer: Raynee Signed [Report This]
Date: 27/12/09 06:40 pm

Title: You Won’t Let Me Sleep

That was intensely hot!! I loved it!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/12/09 05:27 pm

Title: You Won’t Let Me Sleep

Hawtness!! Extremely so...I want more of this story..Stefan and Bonnie need to be together! Great job sweetie~~

Author's Response: Thank you nene! This was a short one, but I think I'm going to write a longer fic for the show soon. I have way too many ideas for these characters. :)

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/12/09 05:15 pm

Title: You Won’t Let Me Sleep

Makes me want to watch the actual show...



Author's Response: You should! It's really fun and Bonnie's a really great character!

Reviewer: indycoolchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/12/09 02:51 pm

Title: You Won’t Let Me Sleep

I am oh so late to the 'Vampire Diaries' party but the good Lord knows I'm glad to have finally arrived. I just saw the pilot ep on Thursday.  Now I am trying to get my hands on everything to catch up.  But I digress...

This is awesome TBG.  These two are hotter than hot! 

 



Author's Response: Yay, another fan! The show is awesome, I think you'll like the last few episodes. Thank you so much for reading!

Reviewer: SebineDareau Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/12/09 01:24 pm

Title: You Won’t Let Me Sleep

This is very good. This fic could really put me on the fence. Love the sexaul foreplay with these two. Awesome Job/Well Done.

Author's Response: Thank you so much Zeta!

Reviewer: zeta Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 27/12/09 08:53 am

Title: You Won’t Let Me Sleep

This is FANTASTIC!  I think you've pretty much written my ship manifesto with this fic. That scene where he saved her gave me all kinds of ideas which you've translated brilliantly. Seriously, the scene where he's in bed and she's in school is probably the hottest thing I've read in a really, really long time. And I love the end. Stefan would so doing somethign like this to spare her the memory of betraying her friend (though I'm not convinced she wouldn't eventually remember)

Just great work. Thank you so much for writing this fic for me :D 



Author's Response: *hugs* I'm so glad you enjoyed this Black, and I could do your ship proud. You always give me awesome fanfic prompts so this was the least I could do. :)

Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/12/09 08:46 am

Title: You Won’t Let Me Sleep

Wow that was intense, sexy and hot, hot, hot.  I'm panting while I'm reading this. Excellent!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

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Date: 27/12/09 07:45 am

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