that good a.j finaly got sober and helping out people who battle there demons every single day. I hope jule give him a change it going to be hard but once she get to know her father she be glad that she did.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed
[Report This]Date: 13/09/09 04:40 pm
That was kind of intense. And sad, though I did enjoy A.J. and Keesha seeing each other again. And I felt bad for A.J. having to revisit his past in that way, though he's been recovered for so long. And to have his own daughter throw it in his face, that has to be rough.
Author's Response:
Thanks, TBG, for the review and the stars!! :-) Yes, AJ will discover a few things along the way, especially as he tries to form a relationship with his daughter. He realizes it won't be that easy. LOL!
Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed
[Report This]Date: 12/08/08 07:23 am
Oh, this chapter got me choked up. That description of Keesha and AJ seeing her for the first time was just so sad. Nice to see AJ doing good things with his life.
Author's Response:
Thanks! :-) Yeah, that was a hard chapter for me to write. I still wanted the *idea* of AJ and Keesha to be there, but I also knew I had to try to portray Keesha realistically for the story to make sense. LOL! Luckily for me, the characters cooperated with what I wanted to do. LOL!
Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed
[Report This]Date: 09/08/08 03:33 am