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Title: Edges and Other Dangers

I really like the pairing of Alexx and Ryan.  Sure would love to see more stories or updates.

Nyeesha

Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/08/10 08:22 am

Title: Edges and Other Dangers

nIce story...I just recently started reading other stories about this couple.  Thanks for a great read.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for commenting!

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/09/09 03:31 am

Title: Edges and Other Dangers

Woah…this was so cool. I have to admit, never really pictured the idea of Alexx and Ryan as a couple.

 

When I saw the casting, I was very intrigued but kinda hesitant about the idea too.

 

I mean, it just seemed weird, to me, you know? The idea of these two romantically involved, just felt….odd.

 

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Luckily, I am a fan of odd couples, if (and emphasis on if by the way) IF they are executed right. And in this story, lucky, you definitely do! Like the idea of Patrick Stump and Rihanna,  I was kinda like hmm…that’s different. But then I really warmed upto the idea!

 

You put this whole original spin but stayed true to the characters from CSI. I think that’s the hardest thing about fan fiction, finding that perfect balance. Few writers have that gift (I am not one of them, which is why I usually steer clear of that genre). You are one of them, keep it up, really enjoyed this one shot, fantastic work!



Author's Response:

Yeah, I know what you mean about Ryan and Alexx seeming odd. On the show they have a mother/son dynamic. I thought it was a little odd that Alexx was set up as this sexless mother figure and suddenly I started seeing all these implications of her relationship with Ryan if CSI knew how to handle someone of Kandi Alexander's calibre.

I'd love to see you try fanfic. You never know, you might have that right balance and never know it!

I'm happy you think I keep them in character, because sometimes I think they feel like too little like the people I see onscreen. I want to humanize the characters, but sometimes television doesn't want you to do that, hence the odd feeling I get, if that makes sense.

Thanks, Sophiya!

 

Reviewer: dissociative_identity Signed [Report This]
Date: 28/07/09 03:18 am

Title: Edges and Other Dangers

Nice and too short.

Author's Response: Thanks!

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Date: 21/06/09 10:37 pm

Title: Edges and Other Dangers

All I can say is .......................Electricity! Chemical Reaction, Heat of the Moment.........I better stop all these song titles are flying from my fingers!LOL

Author's Response: Thanks, Caligirl! I've always thought Ryan and Alexx had mad chemistry on the show. I'm glad other people agree.

Reviewer: Caligirl65 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/03/09 10:51 am

Title: Edges and Other Dangers

I'm a big fan of Ryan and Alexx having more of a mother/son relationship, but you put them in a romantic-type setting in a very believable way. Awesome job!



Author's Response: I like Alexx and Ryan's mother/son relationship too, but for some reason I thought they could be more. The actors had great chemistry. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: iheartng Signed [Report This]
Date: 18/07/08 07:20 am

Title: Edges and Other Dangers

Nice story.. I want Alex and Ryan

Author's Response: Thanks for reading. Alexx and Ryan would make an interesting couple. The age difference and her marriage has all the makings for a good story.

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Date: 18/07/08 04:07 am

Title: Edges and Other Dangers

Okay, this was really, really good. I don't watch CSI Miami and I this made me wonder why.  I know it's not as good as this but a girl can hope can't she?

I love that you wrote for Alexx Wood and would love to see a continuation.  Thanks for posting Lucky, and I can't wait to read your next story. 



Author's Response:

THanks for reading!

 

There isn't much CSI Miami fic out there and I haven't seen any (except on this site) that centers of Alexx so I'm happy I wrote for her too. She's been on the show since the beginning and now that she's gone I thought she deserved to shine.

Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/07/08 04:43 am

Title: Edges and Other Dangers

Sweet! Never cared for the characters but you made me like them. Good job!

Author's Response: Thanks. That's a huge compliment :)

Reviewer: lovemboth Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/07/08 07:55 pm

Title: Edges and Other Dangers

Moody and real. And this is from CSI Miami? I hardly watch CSI, but when I do catch it (like I did this past Monday night) it's the Miami version. You got anymore of this? lol ;) Good stuff.

Author's Response:

This is from CSI Miami. It's is the best kind of crack out there. It doesn't take itself seriously (unlike Vegas) and I love them for it. Horatio is cheesy as all hell and everyone else is messed up in a fun sort of way.

I don't know if I have anmore CSI fic in me. The only other one I've wanted to write is about Horatio and a minor character from early on in the series.

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: madame z Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/07/08 06:54 pm

Title: Edges and Other Dangers

Oh, this was so great. Just...there are no words to adequately describe how much I love this fic. The Ryan character is one of my favorites and I love that you paired them in this, and in such an awesome way.

Everything about this felt so real, and I loved the growing tension between them. I was right there with her, that growing panic, tinged with a slight attraction. And that kiss....damn.

I love this story and you're writing is awesome. Take a bow lady!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  This means a lot. :)

I love Ryan. I've loved him since his first episode. He's cute and I'm shallow like that. But he's also a good character. I wish they would go into his OCD and his past a bit more on the show, but I guess they're too busy destroying him to do that.

I'm glad you enjoyed the kiss because I thought I didn't describe it enough. I'm not that great when it comes to the intimate scenes so I'm happy I did okay with this one.

 

 

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Date: 16/07/08 05:16 pm

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