Leslie is the one that will get her feelings hurt and I can't wait. Arden is fine, I woiuld like one just like him please!!!
Author's Response: hahaha Thank you for the review. Dont let handsome Arden fool you ;D he is very much a Class A arsehole who enjoys breaking hearts and sleeping around. Maybe Leslie can put him in his place.. or maybe not haha :D
Date: 29/08/10 09:36 pm
With the exception of "z88" that was the shyt! hurry up and crank out the next chapter "z88" and all!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review and i dont know how the z88 showed up but next time ill go and make sure I delete it :D
Reviewer: Monique Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 29/08/10 06:30 pm
At this point, why would she make a comment about jumping his bones? Even if he is goodlooking, or with her plan, that's a bit off right now. He just stole her position! I'm assuming since he did make partner, that he actually has some talent. However, right now I find totoally disgusting.
Nice story so far!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review :>> and Leslie hasn't really been with a man....for awhile so she sorta forgot how a man, let alone a sexy hunk, can make her feel. Dont listen to insane Leslie, Arden is very smart and knows how to put his talents to good use , In the courtroom and in the Bedroom ;D Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: 29/08/10 04:57 am
So glad to see this story back...I really missed it...so the games have begun...and Leslie is hellbent on having her 'revenge'...doesn't she that revenge is a dish best served cold...and she's going to have to be stone cold hard to pull this seduction as a means of revenge off and coming out unscathed...she's so sure that her emotions won't get involved...that what she's setting out to do is just...but what do they always say about the best laid plans...Leslie's playing with fire and about to get burned...looking forward to more...
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review ^.^ And the thing is, Leslie doesnt quite get it. She just goes by the rules and expects perfect results because she is going by the rules. Little does Leslie know that things dont always turn out the way you want them to be. Reviewer: attheritz Signed
[Report This]Date: 29/08/10 01:29 am
Love the update. Hope she stops the game before someone gets hurt or more serious feelings become involved.
Author's Response: Thank you and sorry it took so long! I think shes to far gone to stop whats shes doing but we shall see in future chapters!
[Report This]Date: 29/08/10 01:18 am
Yes, Leslie has lost it. Move on and work towards the next partner position that comes up, or if she has nowhere to go in the company then maybe move on.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! I agree that leslie is going a wee bit mad and needs to learn how to let things go but Leslie just doesnt want to believe that it wasnt meant to be and that there is more to life than breathing and this position. Shes gonna have to learn it the hard way :<
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed
[Report This]Date: 28/08/10 10:40 pm
Okay...I already love this story...right now...I don't like Leslie very much...no matter if she thinks she deserved being made partner...I can not get with her plan to deliberately set out to hurt another...and something tells me that there's more to Arden than is surface deep...Lola's right...it's a dangerous game to play...playing with someone's emotions...and the person who might end up paying the piper might be yourself...
Such an intriguing idea...I know it's wrong...but I so look forward to what happens next...please update soon...
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review!
leslie is going crazy over that pos. and she wont stop until she gets it.
Shes still a good person but i think she needs a little help haha
and lets just say that Arden is no fool ;)
Thank you once again!
I will try to update as soon as i can!
Reviewer: attheritz Signed
[Report This]Date: 10/03/10 03:26 am
Oh oh, I think Leslie is being childish and is making a BIG mistake. She really just need to get back to work, be the better person and focus on her job not trying to hurt someone out of jealousy over a job!!! That's a bit sad if she really does that. If she really has a problem, maybe she needs to find a new job. She really needs to grow up!!! Life is full of disappointment and one just has to roll with the punches and move on. Great update!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review!!! :>
I agree what Leslie is doing is really stupid but leslie has made up her mind and NOTHING can change her mind.
She is just stubborn like that.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 10/03/10 01:32 am
Leslie needs some help!!! All she cares about is that job, Leslie needs get a life. Playing with someones emotions is wrong but for a job that is really evil. She is going to fall, and I mean fall hard. I can't wait to read about it.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review!!! :D
Leslie does need a life! She is a little hermit who needs someone to shake up her world!
maybe Arden will do it? Maybe not??
who knows :)
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 09/03/10 08:17 pm
I think Leslie idea is a foolish one.
You should never mess with people's emotions, you may see a side of them that you wish that you had never seen.
Can't wait to see how this play out.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review!
Leslie is hard headed and tends to learn things the hard way.
so we shall see what goes how this goes down!!!
Reviewer: Janetbd Signed [Report This]Date: 09/03/10 01:41 pm
Great Start and I love the idea for the story. You find many where a woman will try to win a break a man's heart. Its a good change. I can't wait for more. Leslie is definately not happy and alcohol never helps. lol. Again great start and can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! :D
and im defintely working on it!
Reviewer: Ana Anonymous [Report This]Date: 10/01/10 05:14 am
Interesting start but Leslie is definitely out of control with the drinking. She needs to listen to her friend. All she'll do is embarass herself more.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review !!!
Leslie is normally not a ' get drunk' kinda person but it was there and she was like eff this party so she went for it haha , but i couldnt have agreed more. She shouldve listen to her friend so she could of avoided the whole dress messed up with food ordeal haha
Thank you for reading it though!
much appreciation!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed
[Report This]Date: 10/01/10 05:08 am
I like the start to it!!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
and Thank you for the review :)
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: 10/01/10 01:11 am
Nice looking cast!
Author's Response:
Opps!
sorry for responding so late :<
i am ashamed
but thank you very much for the review!!! :>
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: 10/01/10 01:06 am
You are off to a wonderful start. Daniel and Leslie will do the horizontal Mombo in another 2 maybe 3 chapters. Me likey!!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
and well see, Leslie is a very weird women who has issues haha.
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 09/01/10 06:44 pm
Its looks like this story is going to be a great read. I look forward to reading the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Reviewer: Proudly African Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/10 12:24 pm
I like, we see the potential already. Question, in the cast pics it calls him Arden and in the story Daniel. In the next chapter could you explain the name thing? Thank you. My criticism, is the chapters are too damn short. lol. I am confident you will do better now that this has been pointed out to you.
A
Author's Response:
Oh jeez. The actors name is daniel so ill try and fiz it in the next chapter .
Sorry!
And I couldnt agree more about the shortness of the chapter. :)
i will work harder to make it longer !
thank you for your review!
Reviewer: Arabelle Signed [Report This]Date: 09/01/10 11:14 am
Nice start, this sounds like an interesting tale. Poor girl, that white dress is ruined.
One thing, you may want to get a beta, because there are some grammar issue, but you also need to remember to capitalize your sentences.
Thanks for sharing :D
Author's Response:
Thank you!! :3
And sorry about the Grammar issues, i'll try to get it fix and work on it some more.
Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/10 10:18 am
This looks very interesting. Can we have more?
Nyeesha
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading my story!!
ill shall start writing asap!!!!
Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed
[Report This]Date: 09/01/10 08:11 am