Great update. Interesting story so far. Hmm wonder who is Peter ???

Author's Response: I'm glad you like the story. I can't really say who Peter is right now, but it'll come out soon enough. Thank you for reading and reviewing! I hope you continue to do both!

Thanks for the update and you are right we didn;t learn anything new about these people except that Leonardo works and spens his money unwisely.

Author's Response:

Ha! Leo is funny like that. Funny funny funny...

Thanks for reviewing!

Aww, I already like Peter. I'm interested to know why type of species he is. 

Hmm, who was that guy? I thought it was Leo, idk, it just seemed like his personality.  

Leo has a lot of patience with her. Roxanne is under the assumption that her bruises are what's keeping him from selling her. He could easily, sale her for cheap, it's not like her needs the money.

I like that Roxanne isn't just rolling over for Leo. However, she needs to watch her step. I know that this situation isn't easy for her. One day she was free, and then the next she wasn't, and now she's basically someone's slave. I like her spirit, and she's funny, which is always a bonus in a lead for me.

This is the type of fic that requires a lot of characters. I just couldn't imagine it being told with only a handful.

Thanks for updating

This seems really interesting.

this story is very good but i just wish i knew what was going on.

Thanks for the update, loved it. Leo is abit strange and I'm still trying to figure him out. What's really Roxanne's purpose in his life???? Also what's the association between Roxanne and Mod??? WHy does he hurt her????

Author's Response:

Okay, I'm struggling not to give too much away. Just keep in mind that whatever is going on between Roxi and Leo is not what it seems. I'm going to get to that later on. I just like building suspense.

Roxanne and Mod are quite the mess though, aren't they? Things will shape up eventually, but they are going to get very complicated first.

Thanks for reading and reviewing! I'm glad you liked this chapter.

This is soooo surreal…and I love it!  Wolves, demons, vampires, fairies, humans, living and communicating like its just another Monday except…with the slightest touch one’s flesh could be torn to shreds or devoured or your blood could be sucked from your body.  Yikes!  Poor Roxanne has fallen into much more than a rabbit hole.

With that said, she seems to be holding her own.  Leonardo tickles me when he taunts her; it’s not viscous or demeaning (not really). He just…has the upper hand at the moment but Roxanne is by no means without gumption nor is she meek.  She speaks her mind determinedly whenever possible.

Initial perceptions of Mod were less than favorable, however now he appears to be lonely, longing for ‘the one’ whom Roxanne is clearly not so, who is?

Btw, what does Parker look like in human form?

This is an intersting story. I  like that each character seems to has a distinctive personality.

Thanks for sharing

Thanks for the update.  So wo is in charge here?  For some reason I thought that Loanrardo worked for Mod.  Thanks

Author's Response:

I haven't gotten to actually explain Leo and Mod's relationship. This is going to be a long story so all of the characters' personalities, relationships and motivations will be clear in the end. Keep reading; I think you'll like it.

Thank you for reading and reviewing! It really means a lot to me.

Loved the update. Really like Parker's character. That's quite a little family that Leonardo has put together. Hope they all can get along.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you like Parker. Roxy will get to know him pretty well.

And, yes, Roxy, Leo, Mod and Parker do make quite the motley crew, don't they? I think you'll like the way they interact and why they behave the way they do around each other.

Thank you for reading and reviewing! Please keep reading! I hope I don't disappoint!

i love this story i can actually see it showing on the scifi (syfy) channel =) roxanne is all messed up but she seems like a strong woman but i am curious about the relationship or possible relationship with the guys (thinking) anyway please up date soon (thumbs up)

Author's Response:

I was RAISED on SciFi, the science fiction and the fantasy! The character's relationships will be somewhat complex but I hope you'll follow the story. Thank you for reading and reviewing! It means a lot to me!

First...I love the way you write...the flow of your writing is very good...the imagery is amazing and I can almost see myself in this mystical world alongside Roxanne...though I'd probably be in a rubber room eating play dough by now...everything is just so...bizarre...I'm so confused, lol...half the time I don't know what's going on...yet, it all seems perfectly plausible at the same time that it all makes any sense somehow...

I don't know what to make of Leonardo...I'm so intrigued by him...though I really don't like how he toys with Roxanne sometimes...as if he take some kind of perverse pleasure in confusing her...almost to the point of humiliation...yet in some strange way...he desires her, too...

Now, Roxy...I really like her resilience and fiestiness...she's a better one than me...that's for sure...still very inquisitive in spite of all the 'weirdness' going on around her and happening to her...

Now I want to know more about Mod and the young woman he killed...was Mod in the dream (vision) at the beginning of this story...why would he kill his beloved...and why does a demon appear as an adrogynous girly man with a chip on his shoulder...what is it about Roxanne that made him attack her that way if he believed she is the one he has been dreaming of...is he cursed (being a demon aside)...so many strange happenings going on...

Poor Roxanne...trapped between a rock and a hard place...don't honestly know what's going on...but I'm enjoying the ride all the same...great job...looking forward to unravelling this mystery further...