This is the most eclectic thing I have ever read. I mean the world turned upside down, humans becoming extinct. I love it!
So I see you are setting up this Leo vs Mod thing. Well I don't know whose side I'm on yet. Need more information. Do update soon darling.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like the story! One thing, though: Humans aren't extinct, but we'll get more into that in later chapters.
I find love triangles amusing, but that's just me. Don't feel pressured to pick a side. Things are going to get really complicated and emotional.
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I really appreciate it!
Reviewer: Niclapy Anonymous [Report This]Date: 16/06/10 07:15 am
This was really good. I'm really looking forward to seeing where this is going. I wonder what Mod menat by "We'll see about that.".
Anyway, good update.
Truthfully, I was never really "Team Mod" or "Team Leo" no offense. I don't really mind who she ends up with right now. At first, I did think it was a love story between Roxanne and Leonardo, now I have no clue.
Keep up the good work.
Author's Response:
As always, I'm glad you liked the update! Mod has a few tricks up his sleeves, just so you know. It's okay that you haven't chosen a favorite. It's good to keep an open mind. Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Flicker and Sparkle Signed
[Report This]Date: 15/06/10 05:33 am
I liked the fight, and Mod showing a little backbone at the end. It was a good chapter overall. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next.
Hmm, I don't know who's team I'm on, but both men need to up their game and tape into their inner alpha.
Author's Response:
Okay, I think I got both your reviews. That is, if this was the review you were talking about in your earlier one.
I'm glad you liked Mod and Roxi's very public fight. They may not be starting off on the right foot but at least they aren't kidding themselves, right?
Hmm, no preference? Well, both Leo and Mod have been holding back. If you want game, they've got game! Lol
Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing! I'm glad I can keep you interested!
Reviewer: Cholyn Signed
[Report This]Date: 14/06/10 12:36 am
Ok, so I reviewed but something weird happened. I will just say that it was great to see Mod and Roxie getting closer. The "New Earth" seems like an interesting place, lol.
Author's Response:
Huh? I don't know what happened there.
But yeah, we'll see how Mod and Roxi's relationship develops...or crashes and burns before they make it out of the driveway. Lol
"New Earth" gets a lot weirder, you will find. Stay tuned!
Thanks for reading and reviewing (no matter what/how it happens)!
Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/06/10 12:19 am
Wow, Roxanne has threwn down the gauntlet and it looks like Mod will gladly rise to the challenge. Yay!!!
Author's Response:
Yes indeed! If you thought things were tense before them before, you ain't seen nothin' yet!
Thanks for the reviews! They mean a lot!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 13/06/10 10:22 pm
I just wrote another review in what 2 minutes lol! I jsut read this chapter AGAIN (I think its one my favourite chapters) but now that I properly read the chapter I feel really sorry for Mod, he likes and cares for Roxanne alot/shes his destiny etc but his father cursed him not to have children awww and now Roxi is angry at him. I still havrnt sided outright with either of these cute monster guys so its even for me about Leo and Mod I jsut want to know more.
And I love how dark this story is, it will be intresting to see how Roxanne copes and adapts to this fantasy/monster world, it seems to me she is startign to like it. Also about character pics personally I dont like them I like to imagine how the characters look in my head, sometimes I think the stroy writers use them well but most of the time when I see the character pics it just puts me off. I think maybe you should just do a banner with the nameof your story and some monster art or silhouettes (sp?) that way when I scrolling down I wont miss my fav story on this site.
Love you!!
Author's Response:
You again? Jk Lol
I'm glad you like what I'm going for. I've always been into the fantasy/horror/romance thing. It's getting kind of overdone nowadays (I think) with Twilight and Sookie Stackhouse but who am I to complain? I'm just an amateur.
I totally understand how you feel about character pics. I usually find them distracting and don't pay too much attention to them. That's why I'm not sure if I want to post cast pics for this story. That, and I don't want to have to go through pics on the Web and limit my characters to being the faces or bodies of celebrities or models. I like to just right what's important and leave the rest to the imagination. Sometimes I write short stories without ever describing any significant physical traits (like eye, skin or hair colors, body type, etc).
But a banner is a SPLENDID idea!!! I don't know why I haven't thought of it before! I should definitely get on that! Muchas gracias! And a special thank you for the double review! I'm feelin' the love!!! You rock!!!
Reviewer: Spoons Anonymous [Report This]Date: 13/06/10 02:53 pm
Yay such a lovely long chapter, I love love this story its one of my favourites, In fact I like it so much that I sometimes think about what could happein in your stpry while Im doing the dishes or stuff liek that lol. I love Roxanne shes such a complex but kickass character I cant stand weak females, but she stands up for herslef. Mods story is a bit weird and I kinda feel sorry for him ... I think. So lemme get thai straight he thought Adele was Roxanne becuase they looked alike and hed been having visions of Roxannne but he didnt know that Adele isnt Roxanne?
I also found this chapter super funny, like how Roxanne thought how those monsters keep their fur shiny it was so random and I love it or when Roxannes bitch mobiles on a roll lol I love it. Well I like both Mod and Leo but I still dont know too much about either but in my mind I picture Leo as this super hot, smart yet a bit goofy vampirre so I did like him a bit better but I guess I just need to keep reading to find out about Mod but Leo/Roxanne sound shot to me lol Cant wait for more!!! <3
Author's Response:
I'm flattered that you like the story so much. Thanks!
You're right on the mark about the Adele/Roxi thing! Mod's basically been going on looks on this one.
Okay, I find it funny that other people find random things I write funny. I never even know when I'm doing it. My friends say that means I'm funny but I'm not so sure. Lol
And, yeah, you're going to want to keep an open mind about Leo and Mod. They're different, they're friends and both of them are holding back. Stay tuned!
Again, thank you very much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Spoons Anonymous [Report This]Date: 13/06/10 02:41 pm
Loved the update. Glad she asked the question as I'm curious too.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 13/06/10 08:06 am
I love this story. I like Mod but I also like Leo. Girl, both these guys are good. I don't know. I wished you had some pictures but it's all good. Anyway Mod and Roxanne's date was great. I like how Mod revealed some things to her. It is going to be interesting to see what he does in order to touch her. That is going to be explosive. Roxanne has given him a challenge and I cannot wait to see how he handles it. Great job and thanks for the quick update. More please...
Author's Response: I'm glad you like the story! I'm especially happy that you liked the date because I was very worried about how that was going to be received (the end of it, anyways). Mod just seems to go one step forward and...like, three steps back. It's going to be a bumpy ride for Mod while he gets things together so I hope you're in it for the long haul! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 13/06/10 07:59 am
I am on team Leo, always was and always will be!!! I am still understanding how Mod is going to have a relationship with Leonardo slave. Why would Leo allow Mod to take Roxanne shopping? I must admit now that I know that Mod is a demon, I am not so inclined to like him. Although I never liked for Roxanne anyway. So please don't allow Mod to do anything to Roxanne. Great update. Like Roxanne, I am grossed out as well. Mod, ewww.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like the update. You ask very difficult questions. I say 'difficult' because they get answered later.
About Leo: He has his reasons.
About Mod: I think you'll like him more later... I think.
About Roxi: I am so happy someone finally said it! At some parts I've been afraid that I might lose some readers because of Roxi's attitude. I try to make her relatable (or, at the least, pitiable) but sometimes she's just a witch.
Anyways, you'll have to stay tuned to find out exactly what happens between Roxi, Mod and Leo! Thanks a lot for reviewing. I like the challenging reviews. They make me think.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 13/06/10 02:48 am
Love the story. It is kinda dark but still funny fic. Can't wait for more updates.
Author's Response:
I'm glad that you like the story. It's going to get darker from here. It's cool that you think it's funny. When my friends read my stuff they say that it comes out funny even when I don't mean for it to be. But that's cool; I like to keep things light.
Thanks for reading and reviewing! Please stay tuned!
Reviewer: Cookie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 13/06/10 12:18 am
Hi
am liking this story very much but I do have a question is this a menage story? or is it gonna be one? things like that gross me out so a heads up would be appreciated.
thanks
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like the story. And, no, this won't be a menage a trois, if that's what you're asking. I'm too conservative for that. Lol
But seriously, I'll have warnings for any potentially offensive material.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Kay Anonymous [Report This]Date: 12/06/10 11:16 pm
I thought Roxie was a bit hard on mod. He didnt say she was going to have all those babies..I am sure will be offspring of offspring. Besides I think he really cares for her. It was also very insensitive and immature to bring up his passt relationship with Adele in a way to hurt him. I was not happy wit Ms. Roxie's behavior at all!
Now it appears we see ugly evil demonic Mod and he may not be what anyone wants!!
Good chapter sweetie..sad for Mod though..still team Mod!!
Author's Response:
First of all, you're ahead of the game about the whole offspring thing!
And yeah, Roxi was the ultimate jerk in this update. She actually is blowing things out of proportion but all of that is resolved later, much later. It'll be a while before those two are cozy again.
There will be more demon Mod in the future. He hasn't played all his cards, not even close. I'm glad you're still Team Mod! Thank you so much for reviewing! I'm glad you liked this update!
Reviewer: neneburge Signed [Report This]Date: 12/06/10 10:17 pm
So Mods father is Satan im assuming? Wow his curse sucks.
But I still find myself rooting for Team Leo. He seems so caring, although a bit irritating. I think I like the Rox-Leo couple a bit more than Rox-Mod.
Maybe theres a way for Roxanne to break the destiny bond between her and mod?
Great work so far, Im in love with the story :]
Author's Response:
About Mod's father: Yes and no. Stay tuned.
About pairings: Leo is just about everyone's favorite. Again, stay tuned!
I'm glad you like the story so far! Thanks for taking the time to review!
Reviewer: Blckbeary Anonymous [Report This]Date: 12/06/10 10:06 pm
This chapter answered some questions that I had about what Mod was. So he is a demon that can't touch Roxi and he can't have children because he is cursed by his father. So who is his father? Thanks
Author's Response: I'm glad I could answer some of your questions in this update. You seem like you have it straight. That last question is a good one, though. Stay tuned!
[Report This]Date: 12/06/10 09:55 pm
I don't know why I just question what he was in my last review I guess i just forgot what he was while I was writing LOL! but once again love the update.
Author's Response: No problem! I'm glad you liked the update. And I'm glad I can still manage to surprise you. Thanks a lot for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 12/06/10 07:51 pm
I So didn't expect that to happen, and what is Mod? He just disappearing into thin air and stuff lol! And I'm not grossed out about the update just suprised which like to be of course but you're doing a fabolous job. Love the update, you know Ican't wait for the next one.
Reviewer: Chell Anonymous [Report This]Date: 12/06/10 07:49 pm
Thanks for the update. I am glad that she is getting along with Mod. What is he exactly? I can't wait to read why he killed the girl by accident.
Author's Response:
You're in luck! All of your questions will be answered in the next update! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 12/06/10 02:01 pm
I really really liked this chapter. I wonder if Roxanne noticed how much easier she got along with Mod than Leo - can't wait for ch 13. Looking sooo forward to hear more about Mod =)
Thanks for the update!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked this chapter. In the next update, Roxanne will notice something and you will get to know a lot more about Mod.
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]Date: 12/06/10 11:25 am
Ok I am starting to like our girl with Mod. He is generous and kind..he seems kinda shy with her but very careful. You can tell he cares about her a lot!!
I cannot wait for the next chapter I need to know more before I decide if I agree he is the man for her!!
Ok I am gooing to beg for pictures of our cast unless I missed them..I love picturing them!!
Great job sweetie!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like Mod and Roxi together. It's pretty much the first time they get any play as a couple. But there's still a lot more story to go!
I hope you like this chapter. I'm kind of nervous about the next chapter, though. When I post it, you'll see why.
As for cast pics: I have been debating this in my head for the longest time!!! I feel that as a writer I should be able to describe characters and leave the rest to the reader's imagination; but at the same time I feel like it would be cool to post pics. I'm so conflicted!
Reviewer: neneburge Signed [Report This]Date: 12/06/10 03:26 am
Please please write more...I can't get enough of it...I love this story..the originality, the suspense it gives causing me to always want more..it's one of my favorite..I'm sorry I kinda suck at reviews (hopefully I'll get better soon) but anyways please update pretty soon
Author's Response:
I got you covered! I'm very happy that you like the story so much. Feeling like I'm writing something new gives me more incentive to write.
Thanks a lot for reviewing! I don't think you suck at it at all. As far as I'm concerned, all reviews are much appreciated! Please keep reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: okgurl Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/06/10 06:56 am
Cliffhangers are so so so naughty! Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Yes, they are and I love them so. lol
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: MsJ Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/06/10 05:56 am
Nooooo!!!! I didn't want the chapter to end I wanted read more about their date!!! I know I'm whining but I can't help it I'm loving this story now about Mod and Roxanne I'm so loving these two, but I also love Leo uhh what's a girl to do Roxanne will a helluva a choice to make. Love the update and can't wait for more and to find out what's so important that Mod had discuss with Roxanne.
Author's Response:
I had to leave it off somewhere! But, yeah, I thought it was about time for some Mod/Roxie interaction. I'm glad you liked it. But where does Leo fit into all this? Hmmm...
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Chell Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/06/10 05:39 am
Oh, please tell what Mod is!!! Great chapter, however I do wish that it had been longer. I can't to read what happens next.
Author's Response:
What is Mod? You're in luck! That comes in the next chapter!
I'm glad you liked this chapter! Thank you for reviewing! Stay tuned!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 11/06/10 05:37 am
Oooh, damn! A cliffhanger?! It's Mod, right? Finally he and Roxanne get some time alone. Interesting to see how that will go seeing how she is terrified of him, with good reasons, lol! I just had to say that I agree with reader below - I mean how can you not like Leo?! That guy... *dreamy sigh*...But there is more to Mod so maybe in the next chapter some questions about him will be answered - I'll keep my fingers crossed! XD
Thanks for the update and keep it up!
Author's Response:
What can I say? I do love cliffhangers.
And, true, Leo does seem like the cooler one right now. No secret: He's my fav!
I hope you enjoy the next update. I'm sorry for getting back to your review so late! Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]Date: 05/06/10 11:26 am