Please update this story, it's SOOO good!
Reviewer: Logan Anonymous [Report This]Date: 14/02/11 02:35 am
Hell yes! Now this story is something else and I'm loving it! I know you wrote dont feel too sorry for Petra but damn I cant help feeling bit sorry for her. Look forward to more and hopefully soon XD
Author's Response:
Thanks Cassius.Noir for your review, i have been tweeking up some of the concepts in the next chapter and once they are fixed, it will be posted... Hopefully with in the next week.
Reviewer: Cassius.Noir Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 10/02/10 01:05 pm
Oh oh, the plot thickens is right!!!! Loved the update. Petra has an old enemy who's out for her blood. I hope she doesn't get the best of Petra. What type of creature is Petra that she's poisonous to vampires??? I'm sorta of rooting for Petra eventhough she's a stick in the mud about what she wants, she kind of grows on a person. Wonder if she'll fall for Kale as she did with Richard. I'm hoping she has a happy ending. Hopefully Kale can control his powers soon so that he may help himself. This has definitely been an intriguing story so far.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review baha_malo, hopefully in the next update alot of things involving Petra's heritage get cleared up.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 29/01/10 06:59 am
This is a very interesting story. I don't know if i want Pertra to be the bad guy in this story. I kidda like her. Waiting for more updates.
Author's Response: Tayia, i am right there with you....I dont want Petra to be a bad guy, sooo i just use the justification that she is an anti hero... feel free to do the same...
Date: 26/01/10 12:12 am
O I don't feel bad for Petra, yes, what he said was harsh, but I have a feeling that she's going to cause plenty of trouble in the future. The only person I feel sorry for is Emily/ I have a bad feeling that her she's going to get caught in the crossfire.
Author's Response:
Very insightful Cholyn, Petra will be cookin up some trouble and poor Emily might get burned....but who knows??? i hear its good to fight fire with fire.
Reviewer: Cholyn Signed
[Report This]Date: 25/01/10 09:09 am
Interesting, I can't really wrap my mind around it. I'm not sure wth is going on to be honest. LOL Well, I understand some of it, and it was different, so I'll continue reading to find out more.
Thanks for sharing
Author's Response: Thanks cholyn, i hope somethings become clearer as the story goes on. Reviewer: Cholyn Signed
[Report This]Date: 25/01/10 08:54 am
a most intersting and fascinating tale. and very unique. already a favorite
Author's Response: thanks nsimone 31...
Date: 25/01/10 08:04 am
Hope Petra gets her man and a baby. Maybe she'll become mellow. Loved the update. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Thanks Baha Malo... i should hope that petra gets both, but who knows....She seems like the type of person who doesnt mind cutting lose ends.
[Report This]Date: 25/01/10 07:34 am
Me likey. Wow, I thought James was selfish using her to progress in his life but denying her her wish of a child. I guess ,he just wasn't meant to be the father. Glad she didn't just give up her life to die with him, the selfish bastard. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
thanks baha_malo! James is a very selfish man and Petra was more than vindictive. they had a very rocky relationship, but Petra is always looks out for her own interests...
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 25/01/10 01:25 am
You've peaked my interest. Petra is a very interesting creature I don't actually know what a Litilu is , but I can't wait to find out.
I can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response: Thanks NubianOki... Petra is very colorful and as for the litilu, that should be explained soon... Reviewer: NubianOki Signed
[Report This]Date: 24/01/10 03:24 am
Pretty good start, i am definitely intrested in this story, good opening,, and the writing style flows very well.....thanks for sharing your story
Author's Response: Thanks Chocolatepink. I have been in a writing funk for and i was pleased when this story fell in my lap...
[Report This]Date: 24/01/10 01:09 am
I'm interested!!
Author's Response:
Thanks Bayoumomma!!!
Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous [Report This]Date: 24/01/10 12:16 am
I can't wait until the next chapter. Its a very good story so far.
Author's Response: Thanks Gi gi for your review
Date: 23/01/10 11:47 pm
Yes I'm interested! And stoked to see you with a new story! Brang it!
Author's Response: Haha, thanks Minx, i have been having some trouble writing but this darling came to me one night and i had to write it.
[Report This]Date: 23/01/10 11:47 pm
Petra is both sad and creepy. I like her. I can't wait for more updates!
Author's Response:
thanks darling for your review.... i am glad that you find Petra creepy because i find her to inspire both love and hate... She is no hero...
Reviewer: Darling Signed [Report This]Date: 23/01/10 11:45 pm
Hmmm i cant wait to see where this fic is headed! I'm liking the pretties you have chosen!
Author's Response: Thanks EvaJaye for your review. I am excited as well about this story...
Date: 23/01/10 10:41 pm