I swear I have not read this story in years, but I cry every time. It is just so said. Although I know, military families go thru this often. I don't what I would do. Just so incredibly sad. Very well written. I wish there was a follow-up story on his life and if he met someone else.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 17/04/16 08:59 pm
DAMN..this story was wonderfully written and sad as hell. I bawled like a baby!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 20/03/12 05:28 am
Doll, what a lovely, well-written story. (wipes away tear).
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Reviewer: OliviaDuBelle Signed [Report This]Date: 07/12/10 06:35 pm
That was so heartbreaking. I love the thought of him waiting for her, but oh the sadness of her not coming home. This was such a great read. Thank you for sharing.
Reviewer: Phe Anonymous [Report This]Date: 13/02/10 06:25 am
Beatuiful written and you used one of my favorite song so thank you and I really hope you will return to give us more!
Reviewer: Cassius.Noir Anonymous [Report This]Date: 10/02/10 01:36 pm
Thank you all so much for all your positive feed back :D
I'm really glad you've enjoyed the story.
I've been meaning to begin posting since the summer time but I always hesitated. But now that I've got a story up I hope I'll be able to post more often.
I've got at least one more story that I'd like to post for this challenege and I have a story that I was working on for the January challenege but it's not finished. So you can look out for those stories.
And I have some longer stories in the works as well.
I'm really happy to have a place to share my work again :)
Reviewer: vintagenarcissa Signed [Report This]Date: 04/02/10 06:45 am
Welcome!! Thank you for trusting and honoring us with your first story.
It was very well-written and sad, so sad. You told this so well, I felt his pain and sorrow. I'm crying. Hell, I'm bawling my eyes out.
This is happening daily around the country. What a senseless lost of life, hope, anda promising future.
Thsanks for sharing. I look forward to reading your next story.
P.S. The song was a great fit for the story. Luved it. Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/02/10 06:40 am
Loved the story eventhough it was kind of sad she lost her life in the line of duty and he only has his memories.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 04/02/10 06:17 am
Wow that was soo beautiful! *Tears* sucha tragic yet lovely memory he has to hold on to her it's so sad.
The "Black & Gold" soundtrack to this is amazing. I like the visual of being able to read and hear the lyrics, the singing between, that was so cool.
You are incredibly talented writer...Great job!
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: 04/02/10 02:57 am
Wow, that song is a favorite of mine and I love the story you've spun around it, so sweet and so sad. Thanks for sharing it with us. It was a treat.
Reviewer: EvilAngelfish Signed [Report This]Date: 04/02/10 01:46 am
Wow, did't expect that ending. Really good though. Yay!
Reviewer: MyNameisJack Signed [Report This]Date: 04/02/10 01:18 am
That was beautiful but oh so heart breaking.
Reviewer: chio1895 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 04/02/10 01:07 am
That was sad, When I started reading this story I knew that Leila was dead. I was hoping that you'd make this a happy one, but you didn't. Oh woe is me!!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 04/02/10 12:07 am